Well, to start I would like to thank all of you for the reviews
Well, to start I would like to thank all of you for the reviews. To answer some questions
No I really can't make the chapters longer unless you want to wait a month for one chapter to be submitted,
I'm thinking of putting a pairing that I have a rather ingenious plan stored in my mind to make a story line including this character, if you all like the idea then just review and tell me about it and who you think should be in it, she probably won't make an appearance until the chuunin exams or most likely the three year time skip. I was actually considering an OC whose picture is in this internet address:
torentur.deviantart(.)Com/art/Anime-girl-Wallpaper-by-Tori-85257028
Or this OC whose picture is in the internet address that follows
kyang-san.deviantart(.)/art/Anime-Club-Logo-65264583
Disclaimer: I don't own Naruto or either of the two pictures that are featured in these two addresses. I also don't own in any way playlist (.)Com or deviantart (.)Com…
I have to put the (.) in parenthesis because it is blocked out of the posting for some unknown reason, along with any links I place in it… SO REMOVE THE PARENTHESIS IF YOU WANT THEM TO WORK!
Soundtrack:
forget to remember-Mudvayne
like suicide-Seether
the chemicals between us-Bush
Special thanks to QWAKE for the help with coming up with a storyline, even if it is still up for debate…
Here you go, enjoy
Dinner that night was taken place in solitude; there was almost no sound to be heard. Of course Sasuke, still trying to master the art of tree walking, decided it a good idea to continue to train through dinner, even through the annoying banter of one Sakura, who wanted him to rest and recuperate. Either way, she and the rest of the group ate without him, they weren't complaining about the extra food for themselves…
The feeding was completed in a rather short period of time, for most any standards. Realizing that it was about time for Sasuke to stop his time waste of a training regiment, well, in Naruto's mind anyway; Kakashi beckoned for Naruto to go out and retrieve the Uchiha. "Naruto, I would like for you to go and get Sasuke, it's about time for him to stop, he'll probably exhaust his chakra supply if he continues, that is, if he didn't already…" Naruto stared his teacher in the eye for a few moments before coming to the realization that he was indeed serious about his request. "As you wish…" was his solitary account as he quietly got out of his seat and walked out the door. "Kakashi," began Tazuna, "are you sure that is a good idea?" "I mean, you know what he is capable of, right?" "Tazuna, I appreciate your concern, but if I can't trust him to complete such a simple task, what can I trust him with?" After Kakashi's response, the subject was dropped and everyone continued on with their evenings as Naruto sped away through the treetops towards his objective…
It took around five relatively short minutes for Naruto to make it to the small clearing that Kakashi had originally brought them to. It was then immediately after that he had sensed the pure malicepouring in waves off of the subject of his mission. It only took one look towards the summit of a tree neighboring him to find the source of this evil haze. Sasuke stood up side down upon one of the highest branches of the tree, staring down at an ever emotionless Naruto, Sharingan ablaze. Naruto just smirked, knowing exactly what the prick wanted.
This only served to enrage the Uchiha to explosive proportions.
Visible dark blue chakra formed around the infuriated Uchiha, as he yelled his spiteful words at the blonde. "Wipe that fucking smirk off of your face you useless dobe!" he screamed before cascading head first down the trunk of the tree towards an ever calm Naruto.
Naruto concentrated some of his demonic essence of a chakra into the form of a coating of sorts, as immorally twisted as that of Sasuke's, if not even more so. The crimson energy swirled around the blonde as a similar occurrence took place around the Uchiha as he accelerated even faster towards Naruto. As the time of impact was reached, Naruto grabbed the outstretched fist belonging to Sasuke and proceeded to twist said limb in a sickeningly smooth motion, before diverting the force of the impact into a sideways motion as he forcefully slung Sasuke towards another tree with the same amount of force as Sasuke had displayed moments before. Said Uchiha flipped over and landed directly on his feet, before running down the length of the tree towards an awaiting Naruto.
At this point, the battle shifted into rather skillful fistfight of chakra encoded fists fueled by anger and hatred.
Sasuke used his momentum to slam a fist into Naruto's face, which sent Naruto sliding back a few feet. Naruto wasted no time in lunging at the awaiting offender.
The blonde slammed a knee into the gut of the Uchiha, and continued the assault with a chop to the neck. Naruto pulled back his other hand, innocent of violence against the Uchiha so far, and instantly formed a rasengan of demonic chakra in his palm before slamming the sphere of absolute detestation into Sasuke's slightly weathered mug. The momentum from the chop and the force of the blow met in an instantaneous explosion of energy. Sasuke was sent flying into a bulky tree, which was cut completely from its stump upon impact. As expected, Sasuke flipped up from his place on the ground and proceeded to run and attempt to strike the anticipating blonde, which did not end up the way that he had intended. Both fists were caught and pushed away one at a time, and then two fists connected with Sasuke's visage in much the same manner, sending his face inches from the ground.
Sasuke, attempting to recover, and using his position to his advantage, went for a high kick to Naruto's face with one of his lower appendages. Naruto grabbed the aforementioned leg and sent it flying in the direction it would have gone had Naruto not interfered, which made Sasuke's torso and upper body spin likewise in a manner akin to a helicopters blade.
Naruto wasted no time in slamming his fist into Sasuke's ever spinning cranium. The force created from both the rotating of Sasuke's body and the fist from Naruto was bone crushing enough, but it wasn't at all for an ever bloodthirsty Naruto. As Sasuke halted in his spinning thanks to the blow from Naruto, the blonde slammed one knee into his body just as gravity started to take effect and pull the boy towards the ground, another knee was sent into the body of the Uchiha soon after. Sasuke's limp corpse stayed upon Naruto's knee as his visage turned into to one of pure horror from the waves of pain he was experiencing.
After a few moments passed, Sasuke slowly gave into unconsciousness as Naruto dropped his broken body onto the ground in a manner which made Sasuke look much like a rag doll of sorts…
Naruto let out a deep, tired sigh. He didn't know exactly why, but he felt undeniably tired. He slowly walked with his head down, face participating in a practiced and emotionless expression, towards a near tree. Once he arrived he slumped up against it and slid down to the base, letting out another sigh upon impact with the ground. As Naruto looked into the empty space that was the clearing, a small, and yet depressing frown made its way upon his visage. He didn't know why he felt this way, it was a miserably hopeless feeling, and it was similar to what he had felt as a young boy. Memories of his past started to leak from the back of his mind, how the villagers had ripped everything dear to him away, and almost everything he did ended in violence against him.
He remembered how he had to look through garbage for rotten scraps that almost couldn't be considered food. All the painful events in his life that he had so dearly wanted to forget escaped and he lived through them all over again within his mindscape. His depression slowly made him fade into sleep, as he was pulled into the very core of his unconscious being.
Naruto opened his crust covered eyes, only to find himself gazing upon the rust covered pipes that covered the ceiling of the hallway he was currently within. He slowly regained feeling in his entire body; he was wet, and apparently he was also floating on his back. He inspected the ceiling a bit more closely, only to discover the source of the water adorning the concrete flooring, there was a leak in the pipes, many leaks to be more specific. The water flowed down through the shadow covered hallway, and apparently he was flowing with it. Naruto stared blankly at the walls, not caring where he was or where he was going, it was all the same. He soon found himself floating into a large chamber of sorts, which was lit slightly more than the rest of the hallways. It wasn't long before he found himself drifting between what could only be described as metal bars that you would find in a jail cell of sorts…
He drifted a few feet more, until two arms gently surrounded his torso, and held him in what could only be explained as a comforting embrace. One of the slender arms slowly stroked his hair, and he soon found himself drifting off into sweet slumber once again…
Sunlight slowly breached the canopy of leaves that surrounded the two sleeping figures. This same sunlight found its way onto their peacefully calm faces, which gradually woke them from their slumber. Naruto's eyes fluttered open, and he took in the morning surroundings. It was a rather nice morning; actually, it was a nice change of pace from the gloomy shit hole that is the land of waves. After a few moments of taking in the weather, Naruto's thoughts shifted to that of what had happened in his sub-consciousness. He remembered how the… being… had made him feel so warm inside, like everything was going to be alright. It was pleasant.
Naruto forcibly broke away from his thoughts: he had a job to do. Naruto slowly got up from his position at the base of the tree, and walked towards the still unconscious body of Sasuke. He then proceeded to lug his cadaver upon his shoulder, and after a few moments of readying himself, he sped away upon the treetops.
It took about eight minutes to arrive at Tazuna's house, considering the extra weight that Naruto was required to carry. Naruto walked around to the side of the humble abode, before sliding open the door and walking inside. Once inside he was greeted by the blank faces of Kakashi, Sakura, Tazuna, Inari, and Tsuname. After a few moments of staring and awkward silence, Naruto lugged a still unconscious Sasuke onto the floor with a rather loud 'thud'. This action was followed by a gasp from Sakura and in an instant; she was by Sasuke's side checking all of his vitals and the like. The groups sweat dropped at the scene.
Sakura turned around after checking up on Sasuke to yell at a reluctant Naruto when he suddenly collapsed to the ground making most everyone in the room jump in surprise. Kakashi and Sakura kneeled by his place on the ground and asked the obvious question: "are you all right Naruto?" "I'm…. just a bit weak…" was his last statement as he faded away into blissful unconsciousness.
Hells yes, it is done.
I enjoyed the hell out of writing this, and I hope you get just as much enjoyment out of reading it. I think the fight scene might be a little difficult to imagine, but I did the best I could with it….. --
Please review if you have any questions or comments, I really appreciate it and it helps me to write more.
OHYA out...