DISCLAIMERS: Still they are not mine.
OPPS! Im fell so ashamed, as a teacher I know how obnoxious a bad grammar can be, so I apologize and promise , to try to make better the next time ( any kind of help is welcome)
BLIND ALLEY
After like seems like a long walk, the brothers finally reach the Impala and got to the motel were they are staying,they can feel chilled to the bone and very worried about the weird things that are gonna happen in the town...
"Man, Im telling you, I feel like something just pass through my body... something very cold and strange"
"That happen , when you no eat enough calories per day, Sammy, Im warning you about your rabbits food"
"Dean, Im being serious here, there was something strange in that alley"
"Maybe is just you ESP playing tricks to you, maybe you are acting like a parabolic in the middle of the electric storm"
Sam just stare to the floor between the two beds, and shake his head, like he want to erase some memory off his brain.
"Come on, Sam .lets take a rest, tomorrow we will investigate about that dark, weird alley, maybe some one have unfinished issues in there, and maybe you can play Jennifer Love Hewwit ... in the ugly version, of course..."
Sam just gave a snort to his brother at his smart ass remarks, and lying in bed, he try to catch a little sleep, before the new day, unbelievely Sam fell asleep almost inmediatly for the tranquility of the older brother, who after be sure that Sam is resting, close his eyes and even his breathing to sleep"
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The night was thunderous, the bad weather seems to not end, and the hooler of the air was beting the windows, He opens his eyes and see the shining numbers in the table clock... 2:59 a.m. , he just catch a couple hours of sleep, is brother in the other bed, is dozzed and looking very confy,he feel that something is wrong, the storm suddenly stop, and there was only silence, when he try to close his eyes again to try to sleep , the clock read 3:00 a.m...
Then...there was again that creepy rumors, like the sound of a big river gettin near to the motel,
and the rumors again become sad whispers and he feel the cold... suddenly the windows beggin to
vibrate and the door to .Like if a giant hand is just shaking the entire room. He start to stand up for
bed when he see it, a thin fog is just entering down the door and as fast the fog enter, disapper outside the room.
"Hey, wake up...is something outside... "He shake is brother to wake him
"Come on, men. Open your eyes..." But his brother seems to be deeply asleep
The room shake again and a lighting just strike outside the room, and then he see it, a dark silhoutte by the window, He sway his legs to the bed and picking a gun for the table ,open the door carefully, calling again to his brother to wake up.
When he open the door, there was only silence , no even the crickets cant be hear "Come on dude, what do you take, a sleep pill" He call to the brother.
In that moment he feel it , is something floating to him, and that something pass his body,chilling him till the core, and when he turn over to go to his room, no voice leave his mouth, its just like that thing stole his life force... the last thing he saw, was a pair of yellow eyes in the middle of the dark...then he passed out...
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In the motel room, he can feel like he is imprisioned inside his body, he can hear everything, but not open his eyes, is like being trapped in a very bad dream...he struggle with his mind to wake up, and suddenly he do, he is just jumping for the bed, and calling for his brother... All he can see is a terrible darkness and no signs for his brother,,,,,,and then he hear it...like a cavernous voice comming from the dark...: QUMRAN...and he feel like a shattering pain inside his body, he fell to his knees in the ground and call for his brother...
...Sammy!!!!!!!!!!!
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WOW !I was writing this at three in the morning and for a moment get myself scare... I think I need the company of my doggie.
You like it...hate it...PLEASE R&R