Thanks to my fans I couldn't have continued without your wonderful ……fantastic reviews
To: rebelmewpheonix
You have made me so happy
that you reviewed that i would like to give you this
(throw a bouquet of black roses please don't shred they are nice in dark way)
To : darkxXxflames
Oh what great moments i had reading your review
That it made my day
Please don't burn me I have to finish the story
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To : FairyDyris
Thank you for you support in helping me organise a few details
thank you
(a tiara appears on your head)
To : R. Voltaire
Don't you like Kai or the Hiwatari family because the first time
I saw your name I nearly fainted because I thought
Voltiare was going to kill me
(I hope you like Russian pancakes (sorry I forgot their proper name))
To: Amanita Virosa-Amaranthus-Annika Preminyer
Who made the name cus that is the longest I have ever seen
Anyway I would like to thank you as well and thanks for your input
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To: Wild-ice-dragon18
Are you as wild as your name says
Or are you a person behind a mask?
I love mysteries
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Hey ppl sorry that I haven't updated in a while but just to clear a few things out
Name: Sapphire Corel
Age: 16 turning 17
Personality: bubbly, sweet caring, clumsy but funny, she has a tendency to smile and grin hugging her arms to her chest if she is embarrassed. She is the opposite of Liana.
Appearance: see the prologue but also wears other things so minor mention
Nicknames: Saphhie (Laina) Mellow (not sure but it will be someone in the story promise) Bluebell (her mum and another person but that will come in later) Moon (just wait and see)
Name: Laina Venosi
Age: 16 but older than Sapphire
Personality: acts very social, confident with herself (usually) bossy, overreacts to certain issues (clothes fashion etc.) a tad judgemental… made that a lot.
Nicknames: honey bun (I know that is very mushy but hey it has to be in there somewhere) nosy (as in always budding in, that is a bad one but it will be there) sun (you will have to wait for where that comes in)
Chapter 1- Oh No, Oh Yeah
It was the end of the day, Sapphire and Laina went to the coffee house after school. They sat down for a cappuccino, Sapphire laughed when Laina had a bit of froth on her top lip. Hastily the brown haired girl wiped it away with a serviette.
"So how was your day Saphie?" asked the girl trying to change the subject.
"Okay I guess, I tried to give Damien my letter and well I think he didn't notice me," said the girl over her cappuccino.
"Oh really what happened after that?" Laina showed some interest in the matter.
"I am not sure but I held it out to Damien then because I had my eyes closed I didn't see what happened. Oh no, I think that I gave it to wrong person by accident." Sapphire placed her hands over her head in desperation.
"What does this person look like?" inquired Laina.
"Um, he had spiked grey-blue hair that became dark at the back; um… he wore a black shirt with a skull at the back and dark baggy cargo pants… oh and black converse shoes," explained the black haired girl.
"Anything else that you remember because that sounds like a lot of people around here," Laina questioned.
"Yeah I do… he had this evil smirk that could send fear and shivers down you spine. Quite like a devil or something it was really freaky."
There was silence for a while until Laina bursted out, "Oh no Sapphie I know who your person is and you wont like it one bit I can tell you that."
"Spit it out already Laina it can be that bad that it could be the end of the world."
"It could be for you Sapphie. Okay his name is Kai Hiwatari. He is a leader of a gang in this school, the group has four other members; Tala, Bryan, Spencer and Ian. They are known for many brutal things but nothing is compared to Hiwatari. The only reason that they get away with a lot of stuff if because Hiwatari's father is the president of the board at this school. They are more like gangsters than students, the weird thing is that guys either stay out of their way or want to be like them and many girls have the hots for Hiwatari.(me too) He is practically the hottest guy in the whole school, with Damien and Tala ranking as second I suppose. You know what they call him?" Laina looked at her scared friend who was shaking her head.
They leant forward so that they were the only people to hear the conversation, "The PRINCE OF SEDUCTION, the devil himself."
Sapphire looked mortified in disbelief, "Oh no I gave a love letter to him, of all the people. The world must hate me."
"Oh yeah you did and I know that you don't like my references to things but 'You made your bed and now you have to sleep in it'."
"No, no, no, no," Sapphire stood up slowly started making her way to the door.
Sapphire made her way home but not before stopping at the park to sit on the swings as she waited for her mother. Now Vanessa Corel was a single widowed woman in her mid thirties (that means that she would have had Sapphire when she was in her late teens to early twenties) who had mid length azure hair. Ever since her husband Sain died ten years ago in a road accident saving a little girl who walked in front of an oncoming car, Sapphire and her have been on their own. She worked at one of the restaurants waitressing and cleaning on the main street.
It was starting to get late and Sapphire started to become agitated and fidgety. 'Where is she,' she thought, 'It is not like her to be late,'
Then from behind a flight of stairs (you know how some parks have the concrete stairs that go from the top of one side near the footpath anyways if you don't know what I mean then shut up for a bit cus I don't know either) Vanessa appeared with a lot of bags most likely filled with the weeks groceries or tonight's dinner. She was about to make her way over to Sapphire when oops she tripped and everything split everywhere. Sapphire rushed over to her mother's aid and luckily wasn't hurt, "Mum are you okay I got worried that you really hurt yourself, you are so clumsy sometimes,"
"Don't worry about me darling you should be occupies with your life and not be worrying about me so much I can manage," her mother reassured.
Sapphire helped her gather up the items then assisted her mother to her feet. "Okay mum are we going home for dinner or eating out again?" she asked as she turned to the older woman.
"Not yet darling I need to talk to you it is important,"
Shocked Sapphire ushered her mother to the swings to sit down and talk (I would to besides who would want to sit and besides I like the swings), "So mum what is it that you wanted to talk about? It is not about buying new underwear because do you remember last time we went shopping for them I was embarrassed enough by your flirting with the store manager."
"I wasn't doing anything like that we were only talking about a few things." Vanessa defended.
"Oh really mum that is not what I saw, you two were more than having a friendly conversation. It was more like you really liked him. Don't lie and no secrets mum," Sapphire prodded her mother in the shoulder.
"There are no secrets that I have that I wouldn't tell you if I did have one you know that Bluebell I would always tell you," the corner of Vanessa's mouth moved a bit.
Sapphire stood up and prodded her mother once more, "You are lying mum the corner of your mouth is twitching."
Vanessa held up her hands in defeat, "Okay you got me there but it is not exactly a secret as such, sit back down and I will tell you,"
Sorry for the climax but I am getting tired and besides if I spoil what happen then you guys might not review anymore and I will be sad
Anyways bye for now and the usual
R & R
Please can someone tell me what is wrong with my add on to 'Emptiness' cus if you guys don't like it I could always delete it
BYE and see you in two weeks
I am going to be away for a while but as soon as I get back I will send you guys the update