Here's the revised version. Hope it's better.
I don't own Kingdom Hearts or any of the characters.
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Dear Sora,
I applaud your promptness with your letter. =)
I'm so glad you're getting
used to your new home so fast, though my parents and I miss you very
much. We keep thinking you're going to burst through the front door
at any minute like you used to. n.n
Also I'm quite amazed that
you didn't lose my email. Srsly. When I went to check my mail, I
was impressed. And nice screen name. UberSora13. Original much? XD
You have to make an AIM screen name now, too. Mine's "KaiFlower"
C: It's much easier and faster. :O
Your friend Roxas sounds like
a nice guy. And tell me about Axel when you meet him. lol How old is
he and Roxas? Gosh, I sound like a concerned mother hen. ;)
This
Riku person sounds very interesting. I hope I get to meet him in the
future. He seems to ruffle your feathers quite a bit. Amirite? ;3 And
as for the "kiss", don't worry about it so much. I always had a
feeling you were "homosexual". Sorry for the quotes, every time I
hear it, it makes me laugh. XD It's just a naturally funny
word.
lol, anyway, don't be so uptight about it. Riku bought you
a freaking laptop. Do you think he could be that mean? :(
Don't be yelling at me for my response. You're the one who wanted the womanly advice. :P
Love you, Sora.
XOXO, Kairi
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Sora rolled his eyes at the screen and clicked out of his web browser. He lifted his tan arm and effortlessly flicked the top down, automatically setting it into a sleeping mode. Rolling over onto his back on his bed, he threw his arms over his head to shield his eyes from the morning sun behind the ineffective curtains on his large windows.
"Meeeeeeh," he moaned and peeked through his arm-like barricade to glare at the sun as if it was the cause of all of his problems.
"Sora?" Riku was knocking at the door, but unbeknownst to Sora, he was really peeking through the open crack in the door.
Pedophile.
"Come on in, Riku," he slid his laptop under his second pillow in case the silver haired youth wanted to sit down. He then proceeded to sit up, one leg hanging off from the corner.
"Morning, sleepy head," he greeted with an over exaggerated wave. He then, just as the brunette predicted, sat on the open space of bedding.
"I wish it was still last night," Sora rubbed the inside corners of his eyes, ridding them of sleep induced crust. "Then it wouldn't be today," he finished his sentence with a scowl. His tongue was completely dried out.
Riku quirked an eyebrow at his housemate, "So I'm guessing you're one of those 'I hate the world' kind of morning people," he stated.
Sora gave him a cross between a glare and a bored look, "No shit."
"Well," was all the sarcasm the silver haired boy could manage.
"Well," he copied, "I'm gonna go out today," he pushed himself off of the bed and made his way to his dresser that he recently filled.
Riku followed, "Really now?" he watched as Sora chose a pair of black and green plaid boxers, a black shirt with red hems, and a pair of black jean shorts. "And where, pre tell, are you going?"
The brunette pushed closed the bottom wooden drawer and stood, "Wherever the hell I feel like," he smirked and made his way to the bathroom.
Riku heard the sound of running water, "Shit, what the hell bit him in the ass this morning?"
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Sora, hands placed in shorts pockets, meandered through the streets once again, but this time he knew exactly where he was going.
The sounds of three teenage voices drifted through the air, seemingly getting closer. He could definitely make out Roxas' and the other two were probably the people he was told he would meet.
He kept following the voices and stopped in front of the corner before an alleyway. He clutched onto the wall corner and peered in. He saw the same familiar gate and caught a glimpse of wild blonde hair. He quietly congratulated himself (which consisted of some sort of embarrassingly strange victory dance), and coolly strolled over to his newly made friend.
As he made his way into the small room, he caught the end of the conversation they were having. Something about ice cream and whatnot.
Roxas heard the sound of the cloth flaps being moved and immediately turned his head and found the brunette waving and smiling sheepishly at him. He also flashed the other boy a smile and motioned for him to come and sit next to him on the floor by the couch. Sora gulped, but nodded, the other two were staring at him the whole time.
Right as the blue eyed boy sat down, the other blue eyed boy quickly hooked an arm around Sora's neck, "Axel, Naminé, this is that Sora kid I was telling you about!" he chipped, squeezing the brunette's neck for emphasis.
"I see," Axel paused to look the boy over from his seat on the couch behind them, "he's cute," he approved and sat back into the seat.
Sora drew his knees in and hastily pulled his arms into his lap, blushing profusely.
"Aw, Axel, you embarrassed him!" the blonde known as Naminé scolded. She stood from her seat in a small chair and walked over to Sora's free side and sat also, "Hi. I'm Naminé," he stuck her hand out in greeting.
Sora shook it and presented her with his name.
"Nice to meet you. I'm Roxas' G-B-F-F-L," she giggled a little.
The brunette's face was priceless, "G-B-F-F-D-S-A…?" he blushed a bit more.
She had to cover her mouth for her laugh this time, "It means Girl Best Friend For Life."
"Oh," he chuckled a little at her bad joke.
A large hand fell onto his head, "So, has Riku raped you yet?"
Sora's face drained of color and he slowly looked up to the owner of the hand, eyes wide the whole time, "EH!?"
The redheaded Axel just gave him a toothy grin and waved, "So I'm guessing that was a yes?"
The shocked boy didn't answer and turned his horrified expression over to Roxas, "Eh!?" he reiterated.
The blonde turned to look at his buffoon headed boyfriend, "What the hell, dude? What the hell?" he turned back around and pulled the scarred teen closer to his side, giving Axel the cold shoulder.
Naminé just shook her head, "Nice going, idiot. You've scared our new friend and got your boyfriend mad at you," she patted the poor brunette boy's spikes.
"I'm fine now, but the images…" he feigned horror, but really he didn't mind. He liked attention and didn't like Axel so much, so it was a win-win situation.
Axel rolled his eyes, "Jeez, it's not like you've already seen him naked or anything. What do you have to go on?" he threw his arm up as he spoke. He had to get back onto Roxas' good side.
Sora knew he was losing, "Whatever," a slight blush crept up on him.
The pale blonde pinched the bridge of her nose, "Can we please stop talking about a naked Riku? I think I'm gonna throw up," he made a gagging sound for effect.
Roxas covered his mouth and chucked, a look of malice crossing his features, "Got some Riku-based fetishes, huh?"
Axel's mouth morphed into the shape of an elongated trapezoid, "Fuck no!" he started fanning his face chanting a mantra of "ewewewewewew".
Sora, seemingly over the redhead's last comment, had to chuckle at that, "Wow," he said between bouts of laughter.
"This is probably the only reason I hang out with him," the blue eyed girl pointed her thumb back at Axel, smiling.
"Hah, yeah right. It's because you get to see me and Roxas be all sexy like," he laid flat on the couch, facing Roxas' end and started to play with his hair.
She made a snorting sound, "Yeah right."
Sora had been resting his head on the blonde boy's shoulder when a thought popped up, "Hey Roxas?"
Said boy, who had been playing with the other boy's chocolate brown spikes, answered, "Yeah?"
"Is there a bathroom anywhere?" he looked over to Roxas and smiled.
Naminé giggled a little at his stupidity.
"Hmm," he stood, taking Sora with him, "there isn't one in here, so you'll have to follow me," he mused.
"Okay, but I really need to go," he hopped in place on one foot.
Roxas turned to the redhead and other blonde, "See you guys in a few," he waved as he grabbed the brunette's hand and walked out.
"Bye Roxy!" Naminé called through her cupped hands. She then turned to Axel, "Don't ever bring up Riku's nakedness while I'm around. Ever," her eyes shown with utter fury.
Axel curled up onto the couch and nodded in fear.
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Sora was being dragged along rather fast by Roxas, "How far away is this bathroom?" he complained.
"That's why we're going fast. It's pretty far from where we hang out," he explained.
"Well gee, that sucks."
"Oh stop whining. We're here," he pointed his hand in the direction of the door.
"Why thank ya', sir," he grinned and walked in.
Roxas leaned against the wall near the sinks, "So…have you and Riku…?"
"Not something I want to talk about while the business is being attended to," he called.
"…Right."
When he heard the toilet flush, he backed away from the sink to let Sora have use of it, "Talk now?"
The door could be heard unlocking and the brunette came out, "I guess," he went over to the sink and turned the water on.
"So have you two?" he asked again.
"Hell no…" he bit his lip, looking down at the water.
"But you want to. I can tell," he crossed his arms over his chest and lifted a brow.
"How?" he asked, shutting off the water and looking at Roxas.
"You just told me," he smirked.
"…Fuck," he slumped forward.
The blonde slapped him on the back, "Oh don't worry. You'll be just fine!" he assured.
"Ow…" he meekly replied.
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Okay. I like this chapter version a lot better. I think it's been, what, a month since I updated this story? Yeah, sorry about that. I've been tweaking this chapter up a bit for the past week, so I hope it's a lot better.
PLEASE review and tell me your opinion. I need to know if this story is even salvageable. :(
