I am trying to fix my mistakes better than before hope you like it!
Ashpaw had been waiting for his sister since sunhigh, but she hadn't came back yet.
He asked Rabbitpaw to come with him. Of course rabbitpaw said yes because he had a crush on flamepaw. Together they combed the territory. As they did they met up with a patrol of Starflight, Leafstar, and Silverclaw. Ashpaw told them what he wasdoing and Leafstar approved but as they walked away Starflight whispered " I hope you have bad luck finding that peice of badger dung."
Ashpaw told Rabbitpaw that he would scout ahead. He headed for the clearing in which their father had been sniffed the ! It was fresh to. He started to head toward it but then he heard something very strange...
Flamepaw woke to a gentle voice calling here name. When she opened here eyes she saw Aspenpaw crouching beside her.
"Want some squirrel?" Aspenpaw asked her.
Puzzeled she asked "How did you get it? The badger is still down there."
"Up in the tree is a squirrel nest ." He replied.
Suddenly, as she bit into the squirrel, someone in the forest called her name.
"Who's that? " asked Aspenpaw.
"I'm not sure, but before they get here can I ask you something?"
"Sure." he said warmly.
"Can we meet again, maybe at quarter moon?"
"Yes."