Ok here's a quick chappie overlook of the park just so you get an inside look on the story as I bet your vair vair confused, tee he, I've just realised how much I really do love reviews and thank you to everyone that was reviewed my fanfiction, I didn't think that I was going to get this many reviews at all.
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D POV= Dave's point of view
E POV= Emma's point of view
TPOL= Third person over look
Chapter 12
Park chappie
3:45pm
Dave was sat on a bench, just in front of the pond. It was a every nippy noodles afternoon out.
D POV
I can't believe she still won't leave me alone; I have Georgia she's all I ever wanted and Emma she just won't leave me alone, I know she was nice to me and all, trying to help me get over Georgia; but I never really could I just said that I was over Georgia because I felt really, bad Emma was so nice to me and everything.
2 minutes later
OK I'm cold I'll walk around for a bit well I'm waiting for Emma what am I going to tell her? , I don't want to be a horrible person well I already am; I cheated on Emma with Georgia, and Emma was just so nice to me I hated it.
E POV
Ok I can see him, oh I love him, I hate him, what am I going to do; I love him, but he loves another, that stupid Georgia, ok so it's not her fault, and she never did anything to me.
TPOL
Dave is throwing rocks into the pond, in the distance someone is coming, but Dave hasn't turned around.
Georgia is just coming around to the park…
The person in the distance was Emma; she started to run, when she got to Dave she spun him by the shoulder, so he was facing her and snogged him; Georgia had just come into the park at this point, she began to cry and ran. Dave was incomplete shock.
D POV
I was completely shocked, I practically jump out of my skin, I pushed Emma off and said
"Emma what the hell are you doing"
"Mmmm... oh.. I'm...Sorry Dave... I"
What the hell; is she really Ellen in distaguys, right here goes nothing
"Emma it's over; it was over so long ago, you have to leave me alone I'm with Georgia"
"Until…"
"NO, Emma, shut it, you have to leave me alone, I'm so sorry I ever went out with you, I never meant to hurt you"
I could feel tears starting, but I can't cry, I'm Dave the Laugh, she was crying, I'm so bloodily horrible.
"Dave…"
She was fuming
"I never want to speak to you again, you ********"
Wow that, was low even for her, then she slapped me across the check, and ran away shouting
"I ******* hope you and Georgia …."
She was out of hearing distance, so I didn't hear what she said; I don't think I wanted to know either, at least I've sorted the Emma fiasco, I just wished she hadn't slapped me that's staring to sting a bit.
5 minutes later
I'm going to go to Georgia's house, I've got sum of her presents that she left at mine, I'm in a much better mood I don't need to worry about Emma anymore.
3 minutes later
Ok, so I felt better but not that much, I wasn't in the mood to find my girlfriend at her front door with sum guys; not just that; but he was carrying her in his arms, who does he think he is, but who is he.
10 minutes later
I was hiding around the corner; so I could see, and hear what happened, when the guy put Georgia down she had to grip hold of him to balance; it was killing me, she said she loved me if he kisses her, and she lets him I … I don't know what I will do.
They were talking know,
Gee said
"Thanks"
The twit guy said
"It's ok I was on my way home anyway, I just came from rehearsals"
"Oh, are you the new lead singer for The Stiff Dylan's?"
"Yeah, you know the band"
"Yeah me and my friends go it all the gigs"
"So, I guess I will see you on Friday night"
"Mmmmmm, probably then"
"Didn't you know there was a gig?"
"I'm always the last person to know"
"Well now you know it's at club coconut, I'll see you there then ok"
"Yeah aright"
"Slater's"
"Slater's"
He starred to walk down the path, then turned back and said
"Oh I would put sum ice on your head, to stop the bruise from swelling much"
"Thanks"
2 minutes later
The guys went, and was coming this way crap; just start walking, he'll never know.
3 seconds later
Great I dropped the bag of presents I had, and know he's right behind me.
The stupid guy said
"Hey mate want sum help"
And he started helping me put the presents into the bag, we both stood up, he said
"I'm Mike" and gestured his hand to me to shake, great this guy who is trying to steal my girlfriend is trying to be nice to me; jerk.
"Dave"
So hope did you like the park chappie, I hope it made sense, probably not I was writing, LOL, next chappie with the Gig will be up soon, I've just got to finish it, it's only this week that I have realised how much I really am inspired by reviews, when I get a review I just have to write.
