Thunder: Here's chapter two of Treasure Planet! It's been a while since I updated this story, so do not throw rocks at me!!! I also did my best to Sunny-fy Doppler's lines for Sunny.
Chapter 3
10 years later, Danny is found wearing a black shirt that had a white D with a P in the middle of it, blue jeans, regular shoes, and a large brown jacket on top of all that. His hair was still spiky and white, but he had a little braid in the back. He was doing what he loved doing, which was solar surfing on his green homemade solar surfer. Her soared up into the sky, and when he was high enough, he stepped on a button that retracted the sail. He closed his eyes as he began falling, in style! He spun around doing many well known sky diving tricks. He was about to crash to the ground when he pressed the button again and began flying forward.
"Yaaaa-hoo!" he yelled as he did this trick. He then crashed through a barrier for a mining company. He could hear the alarm go off when he crashed, but he ignored it. He began sliding on a large tube, leaving sparks behind.
"Whoo!" he said as he flew off the tube. Then he saw a large digging machine that had a rhythm that when timed perfectly, you can pass through unharmed. If not, well, Danny didn't think of that, he only saw it as a challenge. He pressed the button to retract the sail.
"Come on!" he said as he neared the machine. He flew into it, and... He made it through. He pressed the button again to hold onto the sail and sailed off hooting and hollering, having the time of his life. That is, until he heard sirens behind him. He looked back and saw Jorgen Von Strangle and Grim riding towards him on their solar scooters.
"Oh, great." Danny sighed. He knew he would be taken back to his Aunt Susan at the Toon-Bow inn. Speaking of the inn, let's see what's happening there now! Shall we?
The Toon-Bow Inn was crowded with some people having to stand at their tables. Susan was busying carrying plates off of tables and delivering orders at the time.
"Mrs. Long!" Billy said, waving his glass in the air.
"I know! Refill on the Purp juice. I'll be right with you Billy!" Susan said. At the moment though, she had to deliver to the Turner table.
"There we go. That's four powdered donuts..." she laid a plate of donuts in front of Mr. Turner, "two eggs sunny side up," she set a plate of sunny side up eggs on Mrs. Turner's place, "and it's a big bowl of Lucky Charms cereal for the big boy!" She gave Timmy a bowl of the colorful cereal.
"Awesome!" he said
"Enjoy!" Susan said, before moving away to another table by a window. Somebody was sitting there and playing a black saxophone to try to ease the noise of the inn.
"Sorry Sunny. It's been a madhouse here all morning!" Susan said as she placed his meal and drink on his table.
"It's cool Susan." Sunny said as he placed his sax down to look at his meal. "Mmm, my all vegetarian breakfast, with a cup of Sprite to wash it all down!" Sunny said. "Yum!" Then a little rat came up to him. His hair was red and spiky, and he looked up at Sunny.
"Uh, hi there. Why'd you come over here? Your parents around here somewhere?" Sunny asked. "What's the matter, cat got your--" Sunny was cut off when the rat pulled a car battery out of nowhere with jumper cables. The rat then attached the cables to Sunny giving him a shock. The rat then took them off and walked away, looking for his next victim.
"Oh, they're so adorable at that age." Susan said, coming over to Sunny's table. Sunny was charred black after the shock.
"Yeah, deplorable. Uh...adorable!" Sunny said puffing out smoke when he talked. He brushed himself off to get the black stuff off before talking.
"Oh, that reminds me, how's Danny doing?" he asked
"Much better. I know he had some rough spots earlier this year, but l really think... that he's starting to turn a corner." Susan said, lifting some plates off of a table. The door burst open with Jorgen and Grim on either side of Danny.
"Mrs. Long?" Grim said. Susan dropped all her plates on the floor when they came in.
"Danny!" she said
"Ooh...wrong turn." Sunny said
"Okay, thanks for the lift guys." Danny said, lifting Jorgen's hand off of his shoulder, only to have it grab his shoulder again.
"Not so fast." Jorgen said
"We apprehended your nephew operating that darn solar surfer in a restricted area." Grim said
"Moving violation 904, section fifteen, paragraph, um..." Jorgen began, but stopped when he forgot what was next.
"Six?" Danny suggested rubbing his face.
"Thank you." Jorgen said
"Don't mention it." Danny said
"Danny." Susan snapped
"As you are aware, ma'am... this constitutes a violation of his probation." Grim said
"Yes, yes. No, I understand. Um, but could we just--" Susan said
"Um. Ahem." Sunny said getting up and going over to the cops. "Pardon me officers, if I might, uh, interject here. I am the world renowned musician Sunny Bridges. Perhaps you've heard of me. No? Uh, I have a CD."
"Are you this boy's father?" Jorgen asked
"Oh! Good heavens, no! Eww! He's just an old friend of the family." Susan said laughing. The cops leaned in towards Sunny.
"Back off sir!" they said harshly.
"Thank you, Sunny. I will take it from here." Susan said
"Okay, if you want Susan." Sunny said, before whispering, "Don't ever let me do that again."
"Due to repeated violations of statute 15 C, we have impounded his vehicle. Any more slip-ups will result... in a one-way ticket to Juvenile Hall." Grim said
"Kiddie hoosegow." Jorgen said
"The slammo." Grim added
"I heard it's worse than Flappy Bob's Peppy Happy Learnatorium." Jorgen said
"Thank you officers. It won't happen again." Susan said, taking Danny out of their hands.
"We see his type all the time, ma'am." Grim said
"Wrong choices." Jorgen said
"Dead-enders." Grim added
"Losers." Jorgen added. Danny turned and glared at the two when Jorgen said that.
"You take care now." Jorgen said
"Let's motor." Grim said. Then the two walked out. There was a moment of silence before Susan looked at the crowd, who then began to talk and eat again.
"Danny, I have had it." she said, "Do you want to go to Juvenile Hall? Is that it?" Danny seemed to ignore her and went over to clear a nearby table.
"Danny. Danny, look at me. It's been hard enough keeping this place going myself without you going--"
"Aunt Susan, it's no big deal." Danny said, turning to face her. "There was nobody around. Those cops just won't get off my... Forget it." He picked up the tray with dirty dishes and made his way back to the kitchen.
"Mrs. Long!!" Billy said, banging on his table with his cup. "Give me my purp juice!!"
"I'll be with you in a moment Billy!" Susan said, before Mandy stood up in her seat and smacked Billy across the nose.
"Jim, I just don't want to see you throw away your entire future." Susan said before going to Billy. Danny looked at his aunt before going into the kitchen.
"Yeah, what future?" he asked as he went through the door.
Thunder: Danny is a load of trouble. Hope he gets better! Please review!!!
