Thunder: I noticed a slight mistake from my last chapter. Here's the REAL chapter three of Treasure Planet! Hope you enjoy, thank you for your time!
Chapter 3
As nighttime approached, Danny spent it on the inn's roof, throwing rocks into the gutter. When he was out of rocks, he decided to listen to Sunny and Susan.
"I really don't get how you can do it Susan. Trying to run an inn while raising a felon like-- felon...fellow... fellow like Danny." Sunny said, trying to find the right word for Danny.
"Running it? I'm at the end of my rope! Ever since his father left and his mother, well, Dan's just never recovered. And you know how smart he is. He built his first solar surfer when he was eight!" Danny smiled at the memory. "And yet, he's failing at school, he is constantly in trouble, and when talk to him, he's like a stranger to me. He's worse than Jake I only see him on weekends when he's not dragon training. I don't know, Sunny. I've tried everything--" Danny watched and was distracted by a ship in the shape of a gold star that was falling down from the sky. It crashed on the dock and a small fire began. Danny slid off of the roof and rushed to the ship.
"Hey, Mister?" Danny said yelling at the ship. "Mister, you're OK in there, right?" Danny banged on the window. A terrible man with glasses, a pale face, and an ear on his neck pressed his face against the window.
"Aaah!" Danny yelped, jumping back. The window opened and the man fell out. He had a long sleeved white shirt, black pants and shoes, and was carrying a small chest.
"He's after me." He said, grabbing Danny's jacket. "Can you see him? Those eyes like slits, and hair as black as the smoke of the anti fairies!"
"Uh, hit your head pretty hard, there. Didn't you fuitloop?" Danny asked
"He's after me chest. That horrible Heylin and his band of cutthroats." He lifted the chest up on his hunched back, "But they'll have to pry it from Mr. Crocker's cold, dead, fairy less fingers afore l--argh!" Crocker dropped the chest and began coughing.
"Aw man," Danny said, "Uh, come on, give me your arm." Danny took Crocker's arm, chest stuck in his fist, and lifted him up. "That's it."
"Fairies." Crocker said in a soft moaning voice as he was carried up to the inn.
"Aunt Susan's gonna love this." Danny said. Then, the rain began to fall. Back in the inn, Susan flipped a switch on the window to change the blinds. It went from the outside rainfall to Amity Park, then the desert of Agrabah, and finally, she stopped it on Radiant Garden marketplace in the afternoon.
"Thanks for listening, Sunny." Susan sighed, "It helps." she sat down. Sunny packed up his things and was ready to leave. Then he turned and laid a comforting hand on her shoulder.
"It's all gonna be okay." he said. "You'll see."
"I keep dreaming one day," Susan opened her holographic locket that showed images of Danny and Jake playing as toddlers. "I'll open that door... and there he'll be just the way he was with his cousin Jake." It switched to when they were five year olds playing with a little top, "A smiling, happy little pair of boys, holding a new pet..." It switched to show them both holding onto a really big ogre, "and begging me to let them keep it." Sunny opened the front door to reveal Danny holding up Crocker.
"Danny Phantom!!" Susan gasped
"Aunt Susan, he's hurt! Bad." Danny said as he set Crocker on the ground, his chest not too far away.
"My chest, boy." Crocker said reaching for it, "He'll be comin' soon." he began pressing the dials on it. When it opened, he pulled out a round thing wrapped in cloth.
"Can't let them find this." he said
"Who's coming?" Danny asked. Crocker grabbed Danny's and pulls him down.
"The Heylin." he whispered into Danny's ear. "Beware the heylin." As Crocker slowly slid down to the floor, Danny was able to grab the ball. Then Crocker jolted in his place with eyes wide open.
"Fairies!" he said. Those were his last words as he lay with his eyes closed on the ground, unmoving. Lights came through the window from outside. Outside, a ship was floating down in front of the inn. Danny edged over to the window to peek through the screen. He was able to see through the darkness many figures, but the one in the middle looked as though he was holding lightning.
"Quick we gotta go!" Danny said. He grabbed his aunt and began rushing up the stairs. Sunny looked at the door, but ran after a lightning blast broke the lock.
"I'm goin' with Danny on this one Susan!" Sunny said following the two. Other blasts of different kinds crashed through the window and sparked a small fire in the kitchen. Sunny reached a window and pushed it open. He looked down to see a flying bison waiting.
"Yo Appa!" he said. It looked up at him and groaned.
"Stay! Don't move." Sunny said
"I don't think he's going anywhere Sunny." Susan said. Down stairs, the group was looking throughout the whole inn. "Where is it?" one asked
"It's got to be here somewhere!" Another yelled. Danny was able to see the shadow of a person pointing at the stairs.
"Don't worry Susan. Like you said, Appa's not gonna move. Now, we jump on the count of three. One..." Sunny said
"Three!" Danny said pushing the two out and jumping after them. When they landed on Appa, Sunny grabbed the reigns.
"Yip yip!" he said. Appa then took off into the air. Susan looked back at the inn to see it all on fire. She sighed and held up her head. Danny watched this, but then turned his attention back to the ball. He unwound the string and brushed the cloth off of it. In his hands was revealed a shinning metal orb with buttons and lines all across it.
Thunder: Who is the heylin? Please review!!!