HEY WHATS UP, cowers in corner from reviewers don't hurt me I had the biggest writers block in the history of writers blocks. If that made any sence at all! Well heres my story, I know it's short but if i get enough reviews i might get it longer nextchappter, and i'll add on alot for this long update. Please no flames about my story line, if you don't like don't read but if you have them about my grammer or spelling please tell me so i can get it fixed.oh and my little a/n will have lots of spelling mistakes so dont flame me for that!

Disclaimer- I DON"T OWN FMA, but i wish, cries I WANNA BE AN OL' LADY WHO DRAWS HER SELF LIKE A COW!

ON TO STORY

Chapter 3

"There's no exit, how do I get out of here," said the nude girl, running around in circles. The halls led to more halls which led to more halls. They all looked the same so she couldn't tell the difference. Seeing some light from a lantern, she fallowed the cold stone floor to it, finally approaching a door.

The door was made of wood, it looked old as if it was a century old. The metal, holding the door to the stone wall, was rusting somewhat. The only light came from the lanterns flickering. It was still cold, but closer she got to the candles the warmer her bare skin felt. She touched the wood door, feeling warmth, she pressed her body against it, hoping to get her body from growing goose bumps.

After her body warmed a moment she could hear mumbling on the other side. She couldn't recognize the voices, so she decided to open the door. There wasn't a very big handle, just a small one, a cold small one. The door seemed to want to open as she barely pushed and it started to move forward. She quickly grabbed it without making a sound.

Not only did she see light but she also saw cages, alchemists, lust, and her stalker Pride. She heard them talking, it sounded like a whisper but she heard them as she stood quiet.

"Lust I will finish you off." Pride walked toward Lust slowly as she rolled her eyes.

"Try and touch me, BUT IT'S YOU WHO WILL DIE," Lust elongated her nails and fought Prides sword attacks. Pride finally swung and cut Lust's nails in half, she screamed as Pride flew to her neck.

"Now who did you say was going to die." Pride chuckled a little and cut her head clean off. Her body slouched to the ground with blood flowing out of her body. "Well that wont be the last of her but that will stop her for a while." Pride turned toward Edward.

"Elric, I thought you were a great help. You even got us the philosophers stone." Pride smiled as he walked toward Al.

"I didn't get it for you, because your not getting my brother," Edward screamed.

"Oh that's right, and I have to give credit to that Ishvalen man. Oh what was his name? Oh yes, his name was Scar. If it wasn't for him, we wouldn't have the Stone in the first place." Pride chuckled.

Al walked over to the bars not touching them but close enough the Philosophers stone started to glow. Pride admired Al's glowing red body and chuckled even more. He walked back to Edward and bent open Ed's steel cage with his bare hands, he lunged forward and punched Ed so hard in the stomach he lurched forward and passed out. "That's two shut up, and," he looked toward Rose without moving his body, "one more to go."

Rose jumped a little and slowly tried to close the door, hoping that they didn't see, especially Pride. Tiptoeing away gracefully, she heard the door slam wide open. She panicked and ran as fast as she could down the hallway.

A sharp pain was felt as she was suddenly pinned to the wall by a sword through her arm. The homunculus who threw the sword reached her and started laughing.

"Did you think I didn't see you, remember my power is to see everything." Pride pulled the sword out of Rose's arm and turned her around as blood flowed down her arm and onto the wall. She was feeling weaker and weaker at her blood loss. Pride kissed her viciously, trying to taste her. His hands ravishing her body, she screamed into the kiss.

Envy walked down the stairs to his father's cell. As got closer, he could see his half naked father. "Damn, you are playing games down here," Hohemheim looked up.

"Well son, looks like you found me. You wanna let me go." Hohemheim smirked a little adding a chuckle.

"Oh I think you know why I'm here, don't you. I have come to kill you." Envy transformed back into his original form, the one he was born with. "I'll make sure it's slow and painful, so it equals the pain you gave me over the years."

"And I thought I treated you fairly, well let the dues be paid." Envy laughed as he walked closer to Hohemheim. His father reacted really fast with a transmutation of a stone wall coming out of the ground making a barrier.

"HOW DID YOU DO THAT, YOU'RE CHAINED UP!" Envy yelled at his opponent.

Hohemheim chuckled again. "I'm the great Hohemheim, and you can't touch me." Envy karate chopped the wall in half as it came down Hohemheim was gone, there was no holes or cracks or anything to say how he left. It looked like he was never there except the white liquid on the floor where he was sitting.

"Damn him, I will kill him. GET BACK HERE!" Envy turned back into his more frequently used form. He started punching all the walls around to see if it was hollow enough to have hid the father, but he failed to find it.

Pride grabbed Rose and flung her over his shoulder and walked back to the room they were previously in. Rose screamed even louder, kicking and hitting Pride as they reached the destination.

He threw her on the bed and had one hand grab her hands holding them above her head whilst his other rubbed her right breast. He sucked on her left breast hoping to get some prize. He finally stripped off his pants and flipped Rose on her stomach, grabbed her hips and started to plunge into her slowly but quickly getting faster.

Rose screamed as she felt blood flowing down her leg, just like before. After a while he gave and finally stopped, he threw her to the ground, her lower body covered in seed and blood. She passed out as she gave one more scream and her head hit the concrete floor. More blood flowed from her arm wound and now her head gave some blood up as well. Tears appeared and Pride laughed at her weakness.

Pride cleaned her blood off of himself and walked out back toward where the Elrics were, hoping that Lust was still temporarily dead.

Ok, ok, ok, i bet you just hated that chappy, but i will make the next one WAY WAY WAY better. PLEASE REVIEW. i just love haveing lots of reviews, um.. lets go for a grand total of 40 reviews this time, so please help me out and review. Tell me if u like it so far or if it needs lots of work, i need lots of encouragement.

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