Chello-chan: here I am. I hope you'll like this chapter of mine and review please. And thank you for the person who review on my last chapter
mikan-kawaii-sakura- Thanks For the review. I know that you GAVE ME a plot but the plot is common here in ga, making Natsume has amnesia. And then Mikan will suffer. I just want Natsume suffer on this fiction but not that totally suffer okay.
Previously:
"Natsume, can you give me my cell phone already?" I asked and he just says
"No"
"But…
"No buts," he said so I just sigh and relax on my sit, and glance outside the window.
" if you don't me to have my cell phone back then I can just use this" I said as I showed him my camera
"Whatever"
" . bleh" I said as I click a picture of him.
"Stop that will you" he said
"Just give me my cell phone back. Or else I post this on friendster and your fans will hack this picture again." I said
"Fine here." He said as he grabs my cell phone on his pocket something happened, unexpected.
"NATSUME!"
CRASH
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Reel or Real?
Chapter 3
Author chello-chan
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After that incident my body and natsume's body was full of blood but my body had it worse we were unconscious but I still had my eyes open wide.
Soon enough ambulance came to aid us. We were aided. But only Natsume has fast recovered but me? I was deep into coma. Deep into dreamland. I wish to open my eyes but I can't. I guess I just have to wait till time.
Natsume Pov
As I open my eyes, I bright light shone on me. I look at my side and I saw my mother holding my hands so tightly, WHERE AM I? As I glance around using my eyes, I already know that I'm at the Hospital. But why am I here am I not supposed to be dating polka? Speaking of her. Where is she? Someone struggled beside me, I notice my MOM already waking up.
"Natsume, you're awake." She said as she hugged me tight. But I freed myself from her hugged. As i stared at her eyes.
"Mom where is she?" I asked.
"Who?" My Mom asked. As if Mikan was the person that she don't want to see but she know that I love her. More than anyone in this world... I Love Mikan more than her. More than my mom.
"Where is Mikan, mom?" I said as I tried not to show I tinge of jealousy but I can't I just missed her.
"Sweetie, you know even I hate the way and How you love her I would never be an insane wishing for her to be in that case." My mom said I know that she's telling the truth the way she say that case. But WHAT Happened to my Mikan...
"What happened to her mom?" I said as I realize I was trying to get up. But my mom stops me. Prevent me to do it.
"Sweetie stop. Mikan is sleeping. I'm just glad that you don't have been in her position. I don't want to whatever happened to your brother happened ever to you." She said. I know that is Serious Now turning my brother again alive just with this subject. I Know that she like my Twin brother so much more than me.. But what can I DO? But then again I know that a parent has its favoritism. I know that my mother's Favorite is my Brother who died A YEAR ago…What's the matter now? Joining him to our subject it has a connection to Mikan don't tell me…
"Mom I know that she's not sleeping, tell me the truth. Please." I said. Hoping that it's not true enough.
"She's deep Into Coma." she said but as she said I felt my heart scattered into pieces that it never want to be healed again without Mikan, it was my fault, my fault. I asked her into a date. I was not just contented on being her best friend and asked her for more… why I even fell in love with my best friend. Why can't I just be contented and don't ask for anything….
My thoughts were disturb with a loud bang coming from my door. When I lift up my head I saw the father of Mikan staring at me with regret and disappointment.
"Natsume. Why did you that to my only daughter. I trust you with her life yet you hurt her..! Why did I even trust you with her life! Now she's in coma…! My daughter how can you do that to her!" Mikan's father said with tear in his eyes. I never did see him cry like that. I and Mikan thought that he only care for his corporation. Guess we were wrong. Whatever matter the most a parent always love their child no matter what comparison you compare.
"I didn't do it on purpose, I also regretted it." I said. As my mother notice my voice she stands up and went to Mikan's father.
"Can we talk about this outside" she said as they went outside. But then Mikan's father was right. He trusts me with his daughter's life… now I did destroy it. Now she's in coma…because of me... But I can't do anything about it.. all I can do is to hope.. TO hope that she will come back in life.. To hope that she will be in my hands again….
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Mikan's POV.
As I wake up. I felt I needed to gaze around me. Then my gaze fell only to see wild beautiful flowers around me. THIS is definitely not the amusement park. But then I started to explore the place thinking. WHERE the hell I am?
Then I saw a boy with blond hair standing gazing at the blue wide sky. Day dreaming maybe.
"Hello." I said trying to draw his attention towards me. I was right he immediately turn his head to me. And there I saw a crept smile dedicated to me. He is so CUTE. I thought. But HE REALLY LOOKS FAMILIAR. Who is he? Do I know him.?
"Thanks for you compliment. What's your name dear one?" he said as he walks slowly to me. What compliment He's getting me all over confuse. Can he please explain? Where the hell am I?
"You're here in the world that anything can happen as long as you want it. And I am sorry if I am getting you all confuse. You said I am … cute that's why I thank you. By the way what's your name?" he said still has a smile in his face. You can do anything you want. That's life that I'd ever want, to do whatever I want with no one stopping me to do it.
"I'm Mikan Sakura." I said as smile widely at him. But there are problems that I want to know the solutions.
"What a cute and beautiful name Mikan-chan. You can ask me what your problem about and I'll answer them to you honestly." He said as he smiles at me. When he smiles its like she's a prince.
A smile from my prince.
"I am certainly not you prince. I am just a friend." He said.
"Is that so, then can I proceed to my questions?" I said. As I fade the smile in my face. Really prince doesn't exist. Only friends. But I want a prince, my prince.
"Yes Of course you can already asked me. And prince does exist but maybe I am not you real prince that will make you happy. Just believe in yourself and you will see the prince that you are really meant to be." He said. Believe in myself? That's stupid. I always believe in myself that there will be a prince that will make me happy.
I shake my head trying to make those thoughts fly away.
"First of all. Who are you? WHY do I think that you look familiar." I said as I shrugged a bit.
"I can't tell you who really am I. I look familiar to you because I have the same features as the person you love." he said. The person I love? Who?
"Second. WHY CAN YOU READ my mind?" I asked.
"Its because, I have the power that is called Alice in this world." He said again. Alice?
"Alice? What is an Alice?" I asked looking exited on the topic. A power huh?
"The Power that anyone can have as long as she/he is here." he said
"I have two more question, third, why are you here?" I said but as those words came out from my mouth his smile slowly fading away, I stared at his eyes. Regretted eyes. Somehow I regret asking him that question…..
"I'm sorry; I shouldn't ask you that question. If you want you can't answer the Question." I said
" I agreed that I will answer the questions that you will asked., I'm here because of someone, at first I really didn't indented to stay here but then fate Hate me to do play with me. I fell in love with her." He said. What's wrong with that.
"And why do you hate fate? You should thank it." I said.
"Its Because the girl that I loved, I sacrifice everything for her but in the end…….SHE leaved me" he said. His life is more sad and painful compare to me.
" My last question, why am I here?" I said.
"Because…your in coma." He said. But then in people we have something in common.
"Fate was never gentle to us"
That's the one thing I have in common with this guy. Fate does hate us for playing with us knowing that we will lose.. I hated it.
Chapter ends
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I AM SUFFERING NOW IN Loss
I LOSE SOMEONE IN MY LIFE,
My grandma.
"Life and fate was never gentle as a cotton"
LoveLOTS,
Chello-chan~