well this is my first fanfi and im pretty excited. i wrote this a few years ago on quizzilla but it died cause no one read it. i decided i would try to revive it so i rewrote it and here it is. i hope you enjoy reading this! ^-^

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your running and running your hair is flying behind you as the wind streaks past. it is twilight and you are in strange woods. the darkness is chasing you, it grabs at you in the form of amillion hands. they scratch at your ankles and you trip, but some invisible force catches you and you keep running. then you come to a clearing but just to find the remaines of a mansion everything was engulfed in flames it was either step into the flames or get swallowed by the darkness. your mouth opens to scream as the flames and darkness aproach you at lightning speeds

Yuuki woke up to her scream piercing the world. It was 7:00. She pulled off her covers and got dressed for work. She went through her daily routine if brushing her teeth and combing her short white hair. She made her usual burnt breakfast and headed off to work. Not knowing that this usual boring day was going to get more interesting then she ever imagined.

In an alley a man in a black cloak walked out of a portal of darkness. "Wonder what I'll find today!" he said smiling and stepping out into the street.

Yuuki came to work her boss sitting at the counter. "Your late." He said "if you keep this up i'm going to have to fire you. I would have fired you already if you weren't such a good worker." He switched places with Yuuki and disguised himself in the back as a customer. As he had always done to prevent any robberies or shoplifting and to make sure his employees weren't slacking off. Yuuki went about her usual business. Suddenly a man in a long black cloak came in. "Hello welcome to Bob's comics, games, and collectables! Is there anything you need help finding?" she said as was the usual routine. I've seen weirder. She thought to herself looking at his cloak.

He leaned over the counter his face to hers though the hood covered up his eyes up she could still see two arrow looking tattoo things under his eyes. "Not really I've already found what I'm looking for."

Yuuki moved back blushing. "u-um is there anything you'd like to purchase?" it was all she knew to say. She leaned back as far as she could in her chair. "Not really I've already found what I want."

Yuuki was bewildered. Is he some weird stalker or something? She thought the boss started to move toward them

"My name's Axel. Got it memorized?" he said

"Um Yuuki." She said holding out her hand to shake his. It was a habit of hers.

Ignoring her hand he walked towards the door. Smiling he spun out the door "hey follow me!" he said smiling and running down the street. Yuuki got up and followed him not knowing why she was going. It was like her legs were acting on their own.

Her boss ran out the door after her but stopped at the doorway. "HEY GET BACK HERE!" He yelled but Yuuki ignored him and kept running.

Yuuki turned a corner to find the street empty she stopped. Suddenly gloved hands came out and grabbed her pulling her into an empty store. She tried to scream but He put his hand over her mouth and held her back to his chest and hid behind a cabinet. She could see shadows of other cloaked figures on the wall. "I didn't think they'd find me in this world so early" he said seriously. When they turned and left. He let Yuuki go. She jumped away from him. "What do you want with me?!" she asked "I mean the least you can do is take off that stupid hood! And-"he interrupted her "if you wanted me to take off my hood you could have just said so earlier!"

He had large red spiky hair and some of the greenest eyes she had ever seen. Judging by his face he was about 19 or 20. Yuuki blushed the first time she saw him. But she recovered quickly "but that doesn't answer the question of what the hell is going on." She said.

Well I guess I should start with the basics. Ok. There's an organization of Nobodies which are people who have no hearts. It's complicated to explain why but I am one of those Nobodies I've actually left the organization and now am a fugitive and those people that you saw were members. They were hunting me.

So what's that got to do with me?

Well organization XIII is-"

"Wait them seriously!?! There the ones that send me that junk mail all the time about how they want me to join them!" Yuuki said surprised. "I always threw them away though.

Axel looked down at her. "Never ever tell Xemnas that. He hand wrote those letters himself."

"Oops" Yuuki said.

"So anyways." Axel said "before I was so rudely interrupted." Organization XIII is an organization of nobodies that are trying to get a hold of a place called Kingdom hearts. So that we can become whole. But anyways. There's a question I want to ask you. Have you ever wanted to travel to new worlds?

"Yeah maybe. I don't know." Yuuki said.

"Well follow me then!" he said opening a portal of darkness.

"W-wait" Yuuki stuttered. Axel then walked to but stopped halfway through. He turned and held out his hand, "its now or never." He said.

"I guess now."Yuuki said taking his hand and letting him lead her through the darkness.

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well theres the first chapter! i hope you liked it! please review! i hold the opinions of my readers really high! and it would be nice to get your opinions for this and future stories!

i'll get chapter #2 in as quickly as i can!