Well, everyone that reviewed wanted the fight scene, so guess what? I wrote the fight scene. I personally don't think much of it, but I can't come up with anything else. Please tell me if it is good. Please.
"Ha ha! Nothing will stop me now! NOTHING!"
Dr. Light held up the Star Light, a light bulb that could produce the same amount of light energy as a star (sun). Cracks appeared along the glass, not that Dr. Light noticed in his ravings.
"Nothing can stop me!"
"No matter how many times you say that,"
Dr. Light looked around and saw the red and yellow hero run in. The bulb broke and Dr. Light had to look around for the second voice.
"It still won't be true."
He found the voice.
"You! But you're a-"
"Change of plans, she's reformed now."
"But, but-"
"Spread the word in prison. Jinx is a good girl."
Jinx clapped and one of Dr. Light's bulbs broke, he snapped out of it. He fired up his suit and flung out light traps at the flipping Jinx. He ran at Jinx and she stood, ready to fight hand to hand. At the last moment, Dr. Light hit a button and a beam came from his chest bulb. The beam was directly lined up with Jinx, so he didn't know what happened when she wasn't there on the ground in pain. He searched a bit, then turned around at a call.
"Hey! Heads up from the east!"
Dr. Light gave a quizzical look at Jinx's comment, released Kid Flash wasn't there, then released he was again. Kid Flash ran straight at Dr. Light, who was fumbling with a button. Jinx gave a loud clap, and all of Dr. Light's bulbs broke. He looked up at the on coming Kid Flash.
"Oh no."
"Remember to tell all your prison buddies who sent you there!"
"Kid Flash you're an idiot."
"Hey! I take offence to that!"
"He's unconscious, he can't hear you. Anyone would be unconscious if you ran at them from the other side of the continent."
Kid Flash just replied with a smirk. There was a sudden (and loudish) series of beeps. Jinx panicked.
"Who is it?! What is it!? Wh-"
"Jinx, Jinx, shhh… It's just our communicators."
Both flipped open there communicators to find Robin looking back at them.
"You two gonna come back and fill us in on all the details? Or do we have to imagine?"
Kid Flash and Jinx each gave there own smirk and flipped their communicators closed. Kid Flash coughed.
"Er… Jinx, if you want I could-" he started in a small soft voice.
Jinx didn't hear him and she set her voice to 'bold', for she knew it would brake if she said it any other way.
"Kid Flash, could you carry me to the T-Tower?"
He gave a smirk.
"Of coruse."
He picked her up, one arm under her knees, one supporting her middle back.
"All aboard the K.F. Express."
Jinx almost giggled, quite an embarrassing feat for her.
"She was there, fighting right beside him."
"That's a lie."
"She'd never do that."
A grinding voice interrupted.
"Who's this?"
The prisoners looked down to see a short boy, but a boy much more respected than themselves.
"Gizmo, just the person. Tell 'Lighty' here that Jinx would never turn good."
"Jinx, good? Your dumber than you look, snotface, and you look really dumb."
"Bu- Hey!"
Gizmo chuckled and Dr. Light got a bit angry.
"Well if your so convinced she's bad, how come all the Hive Five is in here except her?"
Gizmo looked a bit awkward. Luckily for him, some more of the Hive Five (namely See-More and Billy Numerous) walked over.
"What's all this I hear 'bout Jinx be'n good?"
"This crudmuncher here thinks that Jinx attacked him, reckons she's good 'cause she wasn't on the job that we got caught doing."
"Hey, if we had a leader, it'd be her. She said we could go, but she wouldn't. She knew what she was doing. She had more of an idea than we did. We got caught, she didn't."
"I promise on the power of light, she attacked me!"
"Arrr, shut your face, you snot eating loser!"
The three Hive Five members walked away. They knew Jinx would never, ever go good. Two of them knew without a doubt. But See-more replayed a memory through his mind.
"Go catch him yourself."
The remote crackled with pink energy and broke.
"Thanks."
"So, um, the reaserch labs having a special on computers. Steal one get one free. You in?"
"Nah, you go ahead."
"Right. See ya."
"Goodbye."
Goodbye. As if she wouldn't see them again, not the same way she had before. See-more pushed these doubtful thoughts to the back of his mind. He didn't want to think about a Hive Five that was mathematically correct, not if it meant losing Jinx.
Yay! Chapter 3 is up and done. R&R constructive critism is coo'. Ya da ya da.
Anywaze, you know what? I don't like the good side. So it's gonna be slow going with 'Good Girl Jinx'. In fact, I might skip alot of the time. Tell me what you think, I dare ya!