Hey people... my my my... i am losing track of time... But sorry no story yet... I have decided to reply to your reviews first instead...
Uncle Buck wote
I am happy someone is continuing Earths children. You have something I don't. I have plot but no personality. I hope tou will, I fear getting started.
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Hehehe thanks, i am good with personality because when i am free i read, but i always loose the plot and then one day sometime comes to me luckily. Hehehe i was confident to start with but lost that confidence as i went on but i am getting better.
Bohemian Anne wrote
This is a pretty good start. I can see from your bio that you love horses, so it would be interesting to see where you go with this. I hope you continue. Some of the word is a little too contemporary, but aside from that, this is a good beginning.
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Thank you! I do and i can not remember not owning one either, but i have worked with so many and seen so many but one thing always sticks that people do not gain a bond with the horse and when they do, they always somehow destory it, not everyone but most. I have done so before i lost trust in the horse actually it is the same one that i own at the moment. I will try my hardest to continue! Whoops bad habbit..
CrazySparkles wrote
This is very good for your first story! My first story was absolutely dreadful! I love the Earth's Children series, and I'm glad you are continuing it. But I've noticed some things that I thought I would point out to help you. Sometimes you switch from first person (I) to third person (she). I know sometimes its hard to see the difference, but you'll figure it out. And secondly, I suggest you spellcheck before you post as well. Otherwise this is awesome. I wish your chapters were longer! And if you like horses, which I know you do, drop by the Spirit section and check out a few of my stories! )
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Thank you! I get that i kept going over and over the start. I do too i actually found them by total mistake and it is my pleasure to show my views. Ye i kinda noticed that after i posted it but i did not want to change it as it shows it without me continually ortering which i was taugh was always good unless in an exam... It shows where i go wrong! I should have guessed that was coming but my computers word does not have spell check. Though i sometimes use a dictionary!!! I am useless... I used to bable on and nothing but nonsence came out and now i have corrected it the chapters are too short... I needed to learn!!! I do to and i have done so already and they are fabulous!!!
SSG Michael B Jackson wrote
Yes, this does look like an interresting beginning. I concur with some of the other reviewer's observations (tense and spell check) but these are minor points. Overall your writing style looks good and you have a solid start on your plot. I'll be looking forward to more!
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Thanks i do understand they are. Whew i keep loosing the plot!!!
weahhh63 wrote
So when are you gonna continue it? It's got my attention so far...I've read all the fan fics for EC cuz I Can't wait till the next one comes out..just like waiting for Harry Potter- but at least I know how long I have to wait.
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I do not quite know! Wow all these people who think it is good! I know i am on the edge of my seat waiting but after a little insident i decided to write this as well as nothing to do over christmad. Ye that is good with Harry Potter!!
Well bye for now all!!!!