I realized i wasn't writing any author notes and i apoligize for that, but I also want to say don't blame me if a word is spelt wrong. I'm using wordpad so it doesn't tell me if its supposed to be spelled this way or that way.

I also want to inform you that I will be switching POV between Palepaw and Adderpaw. Oh and one more thing, whenever i use 'these' instead of "these" it's a thought.

Thank You.

Palepaw's POV

Palepaw's small body lurched through the crowd of cats as they retreated to their camps, Silvermoon was waiting by the parting in the thick undergrowth, her eyes were like two glowing, blue dapples on the now dark clearing.

The prides gathered in their groups, and each head off in seperate directions.

Palepaw never realized the difference in the territories. The oaks' groves were full of soft comfortable ground, Palepaw smirked at the sight. Streams of thoughts running through his head,'those soft-pawed wimps are as worthless as kittypets!' He sneered at the group, only few sustained mucle, but mainly long agile legs.

He updated his pace from a prance to a soft trot, and raced to Shadowtalon's side, "Shadowtalon?" The albino tabby waited for his mentor to acknowledge him, "Palepaw, what is it." As usual, his mentor's voice was stern and lost no cut to the tone.

Palepaw stood his gaze, in the normal attempt to show no weakness to his mentor, "Why do we just own the slopes... when we could easily take this territory from these kittypets?" He sneered. The large black tom looked at him crossly, "You should never show such disrespect to the other pride, they are as strong as us in their own way." Palepaw just turned away, not waiting for another statement to breach the tom's mouth. He sped ahead keeping pace with most of the warriors. Darkpaw, his brother, was just ahead. Darkpaw was at Owlfeather's side, his mentor.

Palepaw strained his legs even more to keep pace with his brother. He finally stood next to the dark brown tabby tom, which he would look like if it weren't for his strange coloration.

Adderpaw's POV

Adderpaw joined his siblings as they trailed out of the rocky clearing. Forestpaw was beside Foxpaw, gossiping along about the days events. His eyes rolled as he watched the two blabber. "Do you to say anything beside, 'someone said this' and 'someone said that' ..." He continued. His two sisters starred at him for a moment then faced eachother again."He says we blabber..." Forestpaw whispered into Foxpaw's ears. Foxpaw chuckled quietly, only for the sound of her voice to be whipped away by wind.

Soon they reached the main part of the forest. Most light was concealed in this area, as the thick canopy prevented but some strands of sunlight to flow in.

Adderpaw looked ahead through his dark green eyes, the shrub-bound camp was only a few fox-lengths away. Goldenmoon slid under a barbed bush, the rest of the pride mimicking his move. Soon Adderpaw reached a clearing of trees, he looked around quickly to find Starkit.

His adopted brother was coiled up against Dawn's flank, fast asleep.

(I know it may be a weird time to put in a note but I have some special information about Starkit, he has a very strong connection with Moonpride (starclan), though only Adderpaw really knows it. Also Starkit has trouble with words and is often silent, don't blame me for spelling mistakes like "Fosspaw" thats how Starkit says Foxpaw's name) Adderpaw successfully did the hunting crouch, and silently snuck up behind the kit. When he was only a few feet away from the small kit, he made one small glitch on being COMPLETLY silent, and Starkit's ears flung up focusing on what was behind him. The kit shook himself, waking from sleep's daze.

He concentrated his eyes on Adderpaw, and flung himself forward, releasing a squeak which probably would have been a hiss if it wasn't for his age and speaking problem.

Rainwater watched from the nursery, along with Dawn and they both looked amused at the sight.

Starkit pinned Adderpaw and grasped his shoulder, flailing his head back and forth.

Foxpaw approached and Starkit released Adderpaw, wracking on his back, throwing himself back and forth as he tumbled whining, "Fosspaw! He huwrt mwe!" The kit fakely wailed, Adderpaw sat up, glaring a fake aggressive look at the kit, as he sarcasticly replied, "Yes, I so hurt you, I see blood everywhere." Everyone chuckled, and Foxpaw walked over to Starkit, also talking sarcastic, "Let me look at your DEADLY wounds." Then she nuzzled her muzzle close to the kit's ear as she whispered something too quiet for Adderpaw to hear. Starkit gave a quick nod, as he gave Adderpaw a death glare. Adderpaw felt scvared at the wicked look in its eyes. He backed up a little, the kit approaching slowly. Suddenly Starkit charged the fastest the kit could go, and Adderpaw flung himself around as the kit howled a playful war cry, They continued the chase until they both gave up and grabbed their share of the fresh-kill pile.

Sorry for this chapter being so short but I promise I'll write another one, but please review i havn't gotten a single reveiw and i would atleast like to know that people are reading my story.

I'll only post another chapter if I get atleast one reveiw deal?

Ok hope to write again soon and please tell me if i need to add more things to it to make it better, and also i need some suggestions for Rainwaters kits

if you post a kit, please give name, gender, and how it looks and please use their parents details:

Rainwater: silver tabby she-cat___Sky: white tom with black claws and nose, and black tipped tail and ears

THANK YOU

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