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Ok, so I have chapter four written, but I want to know, just because I'm curious, what about my story do you not like? I can see some people come and read, via 'Visitors' but no one's reviewing, soooo, what am I doing wrong. It's nothing bad really, I just want to know, this is my first fanfiction, and it's going to be a long and, hopefully, interesting story. I'm not just asking this to get more reviews, send me a message or something, but I want to know how to make it better.
Please, please, please, don't just read this and move on, I want to know :)
Thanks guys