I don't like the whole ideea of Ed and Al being in the underground city, it's too hard to follow, for me at least. So when i get my laptop, i'll be writing a new story, with the same plot and 1st chapter, but the whole thing about scenery, and stuff will be different, so sorry, but it'll be a month or so till i get to it. If you've tried to follow this story, i'm sorry. Tell me what type of laptop i should get kay!