Yo. So I got a review saying I should continue this. I don't really know what to do but I'll give it a shot.
Oh, and Lissa broke into my house so she's staying with Fang.
Fang: Lissa, it's your turn for the disclaimer.
Lissa: But, Nick. I want to hear your voice.
Fang: *Rolling eyes*
Me: Fine. I don't own Maximum Ride.
Third Person POV
Max crouched over, her head inside the cabinet under the sink as she looked for a bottle of soap.
"Fang!" Gazzy called, tapping 'Fang' on the back.
Max pulled her head out. "I'm not Fang! Why did you think I was? Huh?"
As Max screamed at the Gasman, Fang strolled into the room.
"You were wearing his shirt!" Gazzy yelled, throwing his hands up.
Fang sighed. "Why are you wearing my shirt?"
It was short, I know. I think all of these are going to be short.
So how was it? Ideas to improve? PM or review.
I didn't think I could pull of the disturbed Fang so I went with irritated. How did it work? Should I stick with disturbed? You tell me. I want to know.
Thanks guys (and girls).
Yo To The Peoples-out.