Poof Prologue- Here it is!
"I am impressed, Tigerheart. You learn quickly." growled a voice.
Tigerheart shimmered with pride, this cat did not give praise lightly.
"Try adding a claw hook to the end of it." the second cat explained, then showed Tigerheart on a large branch, and scraped nearly all the bark off of it.
Tigerheart tried next, removing the rest of the bark off the branch. It was slower, then Tigerstar expected, obviously.
"You've got to be quicker." growled the other cat. "Let's try some defensive moves."
"Yes, Tigerstar." spoke Tigerheart happily. Tigerstar lunged at Tigerheart, but Tigerheart quickly leapt back and avoided Tigerstar's razor-sharp claws.
"Excellent." Tigerstar praised. "Not even Lionblaze of ThunderClan can lay a paw on you."
"Awesome! I can't wait to tell Dawnpelt and Flamepaw!" Tigerheart explained, purring.
"No!" Tigerstar interrupted, and Tigerheart jumped back. "You must never tell a soul that I am training you, not even your kin! But do not worry, soon I will show you some friends that can train with you."
Tigerheart looked dissapointed, but nodded.
"Go back to ShadowClan. You and I will meet again soon." Tigerstar finished. Tigerheart nodded again.
"Yes, Tigerstar." With that Tigerheart bounded back out of the dim forest.
I know it's amazingly short, but hey, it's a prologue. The chapters will be much longer (about 5x). :) We get to see Hollyleaf, a POV from Tigerheart, Flametail, and Dawnpelt, more Dark Forest training, even a new type of "Clan". I think you'll enjoy. :)
Oh, it's mostly Duskpaw (kit), of course. He won't appear until chapter 6-10ish. Something's important about him. :)
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-ShadowVisions