My sincere apologies.
Through many trials and long hours of tribulation I have finally become satisfied with the second chapter. What does that have to do with the "old version"? I as well made revises to the first chapter in the process. And I have learned a valuable lesson. Never post a chapter unless you are fully secure in it… not when you immediately finish it. So once again, my apologies, but… I'd be honored if you went and read the (honest-to-the-goddesses this time) "pure" version of Embers of the Soul. Which is what it is named, sans the "Old Version" part.
And if you were paying careful attention… Yes! The Second Chapter is now up. Please read, and I beg of you, review. Reviews are the wind beneath my wings, the fuel to my motivational flame! I'm sure anyone who has posted a story here and got a good review knows what I'm talkin' about (heck, even a half-arsed review can work).
Thank you for your, um, patience? And your attention, and your time. (I feel like such a thief).
