This chapter is dedicated to everyone who gave me a positive review. You guys rock.
Nxkris, I am still not sure when or if Harry will go to Hogwarts… but forth year sounds good. What type of tasks should the forth/ fifth champion have?
Shadan, these angles and Archangels are the real Archangels.
Here is the next chapter of Archangel.
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"Talking"
"YELLING"
"Thinking, writing, visions, and famous stuff"
"Goblin talking"
Disclaimer: I don't own Harry Potter or any of its characters. If I did I would not be living with my parents.
AN: I do own all plots and characters I make though.
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Archangel
Chapter 7
------------------------Still Harrys' 11th birthday at Potter manor------------------------
James Pov
"Where are you Harry?" I mumbled as I entered the kitchen.
"DADDY, where were you? You are supposed to be here with me! It is my BIRTHDAY!" Edward screeched.
"Yes James, where did you go?" Lily asked in a dangerous tone.
I sighed and said "I went to go and get Harry, your older twin brother Edward, but he wasn't at the Dursleys. Apparently the Dursleys died around the day we dropped Harry off there. The police report that was about their death said that there was nobody with Harrys' description in the house." I said in a soft voice.
Lily looked shocked while Edward looked enraged. "BUT I AM THE POTTER HEIR!" He yelled "I CAN'T HAVE AN OLDER BROTHER! I GET ALL THE MONEY AND WILL BE LORD POTTER, MOMMY PROMISSED!"
This caught my attention. I looked over to look at Lily and she looked scared. "Lily, what does he mean?" I asked in a dangerous tone.
"He… he means that he… has a chance to be heir apparent… with the Gringotts heir verification ritual… you and your father were only children so you wouldn't know about it." Lily stuttered.
"Hmmm, very well, we will go to Diagon Alley later today and have the ritual done, as well as get Edward his school supplies."
(AN: stupid James, Lily just lied to you. :-P)
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Lily Pov
"That little brat almost ruined my plans. I'll have to teach him not to open his big mouth. I didn't expect Petunia and her fat husband to die, but oh well. If they are dead then Harry may be dead to. Knowing Vernon and Petunia they would have killed the little whelp when he was left with them." I thought darkly.
"Welcome to Gringotts. How will I be serving you today?" The goblin asked with a sneer.
"We are here to make a withdrawal and to have an heir verification ritual done for young Edward here." I spoke with pride. James just looked at me with suspicion.
"Very well. Here is a linked money bag that is connected to the Potter family vault." The goblin handed James the bag "And for the test I will need the child to place some blood on this sheet of paper at the top." The goblin passed us a thick piece of paper that had a one by one square at the top.
I had Edward come to the counter and I cut his little finger to press to the paper. Unfortunately he started screeching about how it hurt and wouldn't stop until I promised to buy him a new broom kit. When I looked back at the piece of paper I felt my blood run cold with rage.
Edward Sirius Potter
Of the House of Potter
Heir and possible lord to the following families
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N/A
.
Thank you for choosing Gringotts.
Not one. Not even a minor family was listed. Edward was nobody in politics. He had no sway in the political world. "What is the meaning of this." I hissed in rage at the goblin.
"Well Madame, your son is not the heir to any houses. Their magic has either rejected him, there is an heir or lord before him, or both." He said with a smug sneer.
"So this means that there is another heir out there, like an older brother." James asked with what sounded like hope in his voice.
"Yes Lord Potter, that is the most likely case. Also, the magical contract that you put into place around ten years ago is still active." The goblin said with a hinting tone in its voice.
"Thank you Master goblin, I think that will do it for today. May your mines remain abundant." James said with happiness clear on his face.
"And may your vaults remain full Lord Potter."
With that we walked out of Gringotts and into Diagon Ally. "Let's get my wand first!" Screeched Edward.
"Alright honey." I responded with a sweet voice.
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James Pov
As we entered Ollivanders wand shop it reminded me of how it was the first time I entered with my parents.
"I was wondering when I would be seeing you Potter family." Ollivander said from behind us. We all jumped and spun around to face him. He was staring at us but frowned after a little bit. "But it seems that you are missing one. Oh well, let me see here, I remember every wand I ever sold so… James Potter, eleven inches, mahogany, dragon heart string?" I nodded. "And Lily Potter ne Evans, ten and a quarter inches, willow, unicorn hair?" She nodded. "Very good, now come up here young Mr. Potter." With that Edward strutted forward and Ollivander let his measuring tape wrap around him. "Now, what is your wand arm young Mr. Potter?" Ollivander asked.
"I am right handed sir." Edward said with pride.
"Very good, Very good. Here Mr. Potter, try this wand. No. This wand. No. This wand. No. This wand. No. Hmmm, I wonder. Try this wand Mr. Potter. No… interesting." Ollivander seemed to freeze for a moment before asking "How about this one Mr. Potter."
Edward picked up the wand and gray sparks flew out. "What type of wand is that Mr. Ollivander?" Lily asked.
Nervously Ollivander said "I remember every wand I ever sold Mrs. Potter, I also remember every wand I ever made. That wand is eight and one half inches long, made out of Fig tree and has a core of…mountain troll snot." Mr. Ollivander said in embarrassment. "It is the weakest wand I have ever made."
I looked over to Lily and Edward and they were PISSED! "WHAT DO YOU MEAN I HAVE THE WEAKEST WAND YOU EVER MADE?! I AM THE BOY WHO LIVED! I DEMAND A BETTER WAND!" Edward yelled.
Ollivander sighed and said "I am sorry Mr. Potter but it is the wand that chooses the wizard, not the other way around. The wand will be four Galleons."
With that I paid Ollivander and shuffled Lily and Edward out to the alley before they could break something.
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Edward Pov
"BY MOMMY, BY DADDY!" I screamed. I was going to Hogwarts this year and I was going to have fun. Sitting besides me was my best friend Ron. We played exploding snap for a while until the compartment door opened. It was a Malfoy.
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That was chapter seven.
Also, if anyone tells me that my chapters are to short again, I will take a break from writing. If you don't like the size of the chapters, don't read my story.
IMPORTANT POLL:
1) Should Harry go to Hogwarts during 4th year as a champion from another school?
2) If so, what school should he be from (must be an angelic OC. school)
3) Should Edward be a champion?
4) What type of dragon should he fight (new type or an OC. type) and should there be another task?
5) Should I put Harrys' first miracles, blessings, divine intervention and Grace usage into the story as a mini chapter?
6) If so, should I add the end of Edwards first year at Hogwarts and the revelation that Harry is the boy-who-lived-to-have-a-hyper-extended-name?
7) Who should Harry be paired with? (VERY IMPORTANT FOR LATER)
Next chapter will be a mix between Edwards' and Harrys' year. I didn't know where to stop the story so I stopped it there. Night all.
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