Hey, I am swamped with mid-terms so don't expect a great chapter.
Here is the next chapter of Archangel.
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"Talking"
"YELLING"
"Thinking, writing, visions, and famous stuff"
"Goblin talking and spells"
Disclaimer: I don't own Harry Potter or any of its characters. If I did I would not be living with my parents.
AN: I do own all plots and characters I make though.
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Archangel
Chapter 9
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Harry Pov
As I skidded around another corner, I heard a huge crash coming from behind a locked door. I held up my hand and yelled "Bombarder!" The door exploded inward. I rushed in while extending my wings to their full length. I looked around the bathroom assessing the situation: destroyed stalls, broken sinks, spraying water, knocked out girl, massive mountain troll… oh shit.
If it wasn't bad enough, it had to be a MOUNTAIN troll. The river trolls, no problem, forest trolls, bit of a work out, cave trolls, bit of a problem, but mountain trolls are the WORST! They have ticker skin, a repulsive stench steel strong nails and teeth, oh… and they are massive. What was worse was the fact that it was looking right at me with its club raised. "Awe crap." I mumbled as the club came down at me. I jumped back and rose into the air. (AN: are there any real bathrooms that big. I mean really.) I locked onto the troll as it was looking around for me. I held out my hand and yelled "Gravitas". The air around the troll stretched and bent while the ground beneath is cracked. Due to the increase of gravity caused by the spell, the troll lurched forward and hit its head on a wall making a sickening *crack*.
I glided down to see if the troll was dead or unconscious. I put my hand on its wrist and waited. *thump… thump* good, there was a pulse. With that, I stood up and looked over to the knocked out girl. I strode over and noticed a small pool of blood around her. "Celena I need your help." I called. Celena flashed in with her silver flames and looked over at the girl. Celena thrilled and swooped over to the girl. She started crying on the girl while I transformed my sword into a staff and called "Divine art: Mystic Palms." My hands started to glow white and I placed them on the girls head and stomach. After a few minutes I knew it had worked so I stood up and placed a silver necklace in her pocket that had a silver cross with a blue staff painted behind it. With that done I flew out the window, off to the highest turret to sleep and regain my strength. Right after I dived out the window, the teachers rushed into the bathroom.
Dumbledore Pov
I barged into the bathroom and felt a large amount of holy energy. "Strange" I thought "Why would there be any here?" I looked over to the wall and saw Miss Granger slumped over against the wall. *sigh* No time to think about that, looks like there is work to be done.
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Harry Pov
I woke up at about noon on November 1st on the turrets with the sun beaming down into my eyes. I looked around and saw a brown owl with a letter attached to its leg. I reached over and stroked the bird while taking off the letter. I sat up and opened it. It exploded and covered me in pink dye. A letter fluttered to the ground and I picked it up.
Dear Harrykins,
I hope you go my letter. That is revenge for making us worry and look for you for years.
Hope you are wall and taking care of yourself.
Thank you for the feathers, and allowing us to correspond with you.
Anyways, go to Gringotts, the bank, and take the heir verification ritual.
This will tell you if you are the heir to any families, or the lord to any families. Your father didn't take it and your brother failed it. Your father is only Lord Potter, so you may get something else in the lines.
Also, be sure to check the vaults for anything of value. Be sure to go through the whole thing, and after, or before, ask the goblins for a list of your properties, assets, and monies.
Till next time cub.
Padfoot/ Sirius, Mooney/ Remus, Spyfang/ Severus.
"Interesting." I thought. "I guess I'll do it." With that done, I flew off to Gringotts, wondering what I would have in store for myself.
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"Edward Potter and Ronald Weasley you both lose one hundred house points each for insulting a student and making her cry, locking said girl in a bathroom with a troll which caused her injury, and having the gall to claim that you defeated the troll. You shall also be serving detention with Professor Snape for a month and detention with Filch for a month. And if you do anything remotely out of line again, I will have you both expelled!" Yelled Professor McGonagall.
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I glided into Gringotts without any problems. Nobody was in the alley today probably because they all got drunk last night during Halloween. I marched up to the first goblin I saw and was about to speak when he said "Welcome to Gringotts. How will I be serving you today?" The goblin asked with a sneer, not looking up from his work.
"Master goblin" with that the goblins head looked up and froze. He looked at my wings and the white staff in my hands and he grew pail. "I would like to take the heir verification ritual done for my self please." The goblin just handed a piece of paper across and told me to put some blood in the box at the top. I cut myself with a dagger the goblin handed me and pushed my finger against the box.
Harry James Potter
Of the House of Potter
Heir and possible lord to the following families
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Heir to the House of Potter (Father)
Heir to the House of Black (second Godfather)
Heir to the House of Lupin (Godfather)
Lord to the House of Gryffindor (Father)
Lord to the House of Pervell (Father)
Lord to the House of Starlight (Rebirth) (House of angels)
Lord to the House of Slytherin (Conquest through Tom Marvolo Riddle)
Lord to the House of Gaunt (Conquest through Tom Marvolo Riddle)
Command of Servant House of Malfoy (Conquest through their lord Tom Marvolo Riddle)
Command of Servant House of Lestrange (Conquest through their lord Tom Marvolo Riddle)
Command of Servant House of Parkinson (Conquest through their lord Tom Marvolo Riddle)
Command of Servant House of McNair (Conquest through their lord Tom Marvolo Riddle)
Command of Servant House of Crabe (Conquest through their lord Tom Marvolo Riddle)
Command of Servant House of Goyle (Conquest through their lord Tom Marvolo Riddle)
Command of Servant House of Carrow (Conquest through their lord Tom Marvolo Riddle)
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Thank you for choosing Gringotts.
The goblin and I looked at that paper for a long time before I asked "What does Command of servant house and conquest mean?"
"It means young Lord that you defeated Tom Marvolo Riddle and all the families that swore allegiance/ servitude to him must now follow you. You can also use their house seats on the Wizenmots. In total, you have five lord seats, three heir seats, and seven sub servant seats. At the time, you are able to have twelve votes on the Wizenmots, and fifteen after your father and godfathers die." The goblin explained.
"Ok, but why am I the lord and heir to all of these different houses?"
"Simple, your brother sucks and you don't. Also, magic deemed you worthy to wield this amount of political power."
"Ok, but I have another question, what is Starlight and Pervell house?"
"The Pervell house is the house of death. That house is believed to have the ability to beat death with three objects that death granted the family with. The Starlight family is a family that was made up of fallen angels and humans that had the ability to use Grace. This house is one of the few that still exists, thanks to you, from the time of Merlin and King Arthur. You technically are able to take control of the Wizenmots if you pull that card."
"Thank you master goblin. Also, may I have a list of valuables in my vaults"
The goblin shifted around some papers for a couple of minutes before handing me a piece of paper and saying "Here you are young lord."
House of Potter (Heir)
Heir vault: 100,000 Galleons
Potter heir ring
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House of Black (Heir)
Heir vault: 100,000 Galleons
Black heir ring
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House of Lupin (Heir)
Heir vault: 1,000 Galleons
Lupin heir ring
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House of Gryffindor (Lord)
Gryffindor vaults: 21,243,589,207 Galleons and artifacts
Gryffindor lord ring
Gryffindor sword
1/4th of Hogwarts
Gryffindor Manor
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House of Pervell (Lord)
Pervell vaults: 163,672,094,863 Galleons and artifacts
Pervell lord ring (Hollow)
Pervell family invisibility cloak (Hollow)
Pervell family elder wand (Hollow)
River and valley of Death (River and land around it)
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House of Starlight (Lord)
Starlight vaults: 3,234,719,457 Galleons and artifacts
Starlight lord ring
Starlight castle
Purifying orb of light (Ward casting artifact)
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House of Slytherin (Lord)
Slytherin vaults: 25,436,982,005 Galleons and artifacts
Slytherin lord ring
Slytherin knifes
Cauldron of pleanty
1/4th of Hogwarts
Slytherin keep
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House of Gaunt (Lord)
Gaunt vaults: 2,348 Galleons
Gaunt lord ring
Gaunt family home
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(There are other items in the vaults)
(You are able to enter your sub servants' vaults and take what you will)
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Thank you for choosing Gringotts.
"Wow… that's a lot. What do you think I should do master goblin?" I asked.
He sat there, silent for a moment before saying "I would personally drain your sub servants vaults and place the money in another one of your vaults. Your sub servants are/ were suspected death eaters in the wizarding world, but here at Gringotts we KNOW that they were and still are death eaters. If you don't know, death eaters kill, torture and rape for fun."
When I heard what a death eater was, I was pissed. "Drain their vaults, and can I do anything else to them?" I asked with rage in my voice.
The goblin smiled with a wicked gleam in his eye before saying "You can take away all of their homes, properties, businesses, shares and vestments they have."
"Do it." I ordered.
The goblin wrote on a piece of paper and sent it somewhere with another goblin. "All finished Lord… um… what would you like to go by? I would suggest Starlight because of how old it is, or Pervell because of its obscurity."
I thought for a moment before I said "Starlight."
"Ok Lord Starlight. Now all we have to do is have you put on the heir rings and lord rings so that you are recognized as a lord and legal adult in the wizarding world."
He handed me a box with eight rings in it. Two were green and silver (Gaunt and Slytherin), two were red and gold (Potter and Gryffindor), one was black (Black), one was white (Starlight), one was gray (Pervell), and one was amber and black (Lupin). (Just imagine what the rings look like.) I put the rings on and there was a slight glow around me.
"Congratulations, you are now Lord Gryffindor-Pervell-Starlight-Slytherin-Gaunt, Heir apparent Potter-Black-Lupin and Liege lord to the Houses of Malfoy, Lestrange, Parkinson, McNair, Crabe, Goyle and Carrow. The notices for these actions shall be sent to the proper people, and I would suggest that you hide out for a bit. When the death eaters find out that you took everything away from them, except their Wizenmot seats, they will be calling for your blood. Don't worry though, we will put Lord Starlight on the notice and we will just tell them that you are their liege lord through a technicality. If that is all Lord Starlight?"
"Yes thank you Master goblin. May your mines remain abundant." I said.
"And may your vaults remain full Lord Starlight."
With that I walked off to the alley and flew off. I wanted to get back to heaven and tell Michael how I completed all of the challenges and about everything else that happened.
(Beyond this point in the chapter is just filler, until after the mirror of Erised scene.)
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(The same thing happens for all the D.E. and the ones in Azkaban will be given a letter)
Malfoy manor (similar for the other D.E.)
Lucius was eating lunch when a Gringotts owl flew in. He took the letter and read it. When he finished the letter he took a deep breath and yelled "LORD STARLIGHT MUST DIE! HOW DARE HE TAKE EVERYTHING!" little did Lucius know, the other D.E. were getting the same letter, as well as their heirs.
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Draco opened the letter, along with pansy, crabe and goyle, read it and threw a hissy fit. When the other students hard what happened, he became a nobody with no power.
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James got a letter from Gringotts and smiled. "At least he is ok." He murmured.
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"YAY! HE DID IT!" Sirius yelled with Severus and Remus holding their ears.
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Harry Pov
"… and that's what happened." I finished telling Michael.
"Good work little one. Now that you have passed your test, we can get into the realy advanced stuff." Michael said.
"YAY"
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Edward Pov
(Imagine that he did everything that happened in the first book, only he didn't have the invisibility cloak, he didn't have Hermione, and he doesn't know what is in the chamber. He is also NOT on the Quidditch team.)
"Hey Ron, lets go see what's underneath the trap door fluffy is guarding." Edward said.
"Ok." Said moron.
They walked down to the third floor without any problems until they came to the door.
"It's locked." Ron said.
"Alomahora." Edward said. To bad he said the spell wrong and caused the door to blow up. (You know what's funny, stupid people have the best luck.) Luckily, they came out un-hurt. "There, I opened it." They walked through the door and saw Fluffy asleep and a harp next to his ear. They jumped down through the trap door and fell through a plant that looked to be on fire. They walked down a corridor and came to a room that had a pile of bent keys with a big old fashioned one in the door. They walked through the door and came to a massive destroyed chess board. They walked through the door on the other side and came across a dead troll. They entered a new room that had a lot of bottles on it and fire on the other side.
"Now what?" asked Ron.
"Let's throw all the bottles into the fire to put it out." Edward suggested.
The mixture of the bottles put out the flames, but melted the stone and doorway. "Let's go." Edward said. When they were in the center of the room, Professor Quirrel came out from behind the mirror that was in the middle and shot a stunner at Ron who went down like the dead weight that he is.
"I was wondering when you would get here Mr. Potter." Quirrel said.
"What's going on?" I asked.
"Well, since I am going to kill you I might as well tell you." With that said, he took off his turban and I saw something on the back of his head.
"If you have a giant zit like that you should just pop it." I said.
"I am not a zit." The bump said. "I am Lord Voldomort. And you will get me the Sorcerers stone. After all, it's in your pocket."
I reached into my pocket and pulled out a red rock. "This thing?" I asked.
"Yes" he hissed. "Bring it here."
I walked forward to hand it to him… when I tripped. I put my hands out in front of me to stop my self, but the Sorcerers stone was in my right hand, and it shattered when I hit the ground.
Voldomort and I stared at the mess for a moment before he screamed "You fool! You just destroyed it! I will kill you and then I will kill your brother!"
"Why would you go after him? He's useless."
"You fool, he is the real Boy-Who-Lived! You are useless!" Voldymoldy screamed.
"What are you saying?" As I stepped back.
"You are not the one who beat me. Your brother is." He said snidely.
I was in shock. I was still backing up until I tripped on my robe and fell into the mirror. It shattered and a piece flew into Quirrel/ Voldomorts head, killing them/ him.
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Edward Pov
I woke up in the infirmary and saw Dumbledore next to my bed. "What happened Edward?"
"Headmaster, it was Voldomort, he said that I'm not the Boy-Who-Lived!"
The headmaster paled and whipped out his wand and said "Legilimens". I felt the memories of tonight fly through my head. They stopped all of a sudden and I heard Dumbledore say "I am sorry Edward, Obliviate."
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Dumbledore Pov
"I can't let anybody find out that Edward is not the Boy-Who-Lived, at least, not yet." I thought. "Well, another year gone. Now, there are some last minute points to award. 100 points to Edward Potter for saving the Sorcerers stone, and 100 points to Ronald Weasley for going with him. It looks like Slytherin wins." I spoke. "I will have to find Harry and ask for forgiveness. I need him to defeat Voldomort. The prophecy must be fulfilled."
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(Sneak peek for later chapter) (A possible scene)
Edward crept forward. He still couldn't see the dragon. He wondered out loud "I wonder where the stupid lizard i…" *Fwamp* that was the sound of the "Stupid lizards" tail smashing into Edwards body. *Smash* went Edwards body as he hit the arena wall. The crowd was silent before Lee Jordan announced "EPIC FAIL!" with that said the crowd went wild with cheers. "Due to Edwards inability to continue, he fails this round, gets no points, and loses his egg."
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Ok, Dumbledore is coocoo, but old people usually are.
Info:
Hermione just threw out the necklace and never became Edwards friend.
I got tired in the middle of writing this chapter, so it may not be the best.
Poll:
Should people learn that Harry is an angel when he comes to school during the triwizard tournament?
Should people learn that Harry is the BWL in 2nd, 3rd, or 4th year? Depending on the answer depends on when the story will end.
Should the possible scene be a real scene?
Should I put my other fan fic Jesters Jest on a hiatus?
Also, I got 2 new ideas for fan fics.
1 is Dark Angel where harry is adopted (through blood ritual) into the black family and receives creature blood inheritance.
2 is Hydra where Hogwarts gets a new class called battle magic and the teacher is arguably one of the 3 most powerful wizards ever.
These are my ideas. So… yah. Tell me if any of the ideas are good.
Thank you everyone who reviewed. You guys are the best!