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please read and review my new BTR story the perfect girl
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/c i heard katie crying from the doorway of the apartment i threw my helmet onto the couch.
i walked down the hallway to the room she shared with .
she was sitting on the foot of her bed.
"katie" i said outstretching my hand like i did at the pool.
she ran past me into the bathroom.
i heard the door lock click.
/k i sat down in the tub,curling up into a ball.
how could he do this to me?
i felt like i was going to die.
"katie?" i heard carlos softly knock on the bathroom door i sniffed and tried to stop shaking "go away"
/c i slid down into a sitting position silently hitting the back of my head on the wall.
i didn't think it would come this far. i saved her life big deal.
i didn't know shed go crazy!
i heard the lock unclick on the door.
i stood up quickly looking at her.
/k "carlos" i said.
"i want to kiss you"
sorry its short :P review the perfect girl pleaseeeeeee 33