Hey guy, thanks for your comments on the last one. Its nice to know people out there actually like my writing. EVEN IF YOU DON'T REVIEW I KNOW YOU LIKE IT! Anyway I'm just taking up space. So here's the story.

~~Max Pov~~

"Eraser..." Fang said so quietly only the flock could hear it.

Eraser... The thought danced around in my head, something seeming too off about the concept of one being here.

Dammit Eraser!

What the heck was an eraser doing here, and especially with this girl? Didn't they all die back in that school in Germany? I mean even we saw them all get wiped out bunch by bunch. It makes no sense.

"Angel can you get anything from this girl," I whispered.

"Ummm nope, she just keeps saying 'Why is this thing here?"

"Wow, that helps a lot. What is an eraser doing here anyway?" Gazzy said interrupting our conversation.

"I think we're all wondering that Gaz," I answered him.

"But Nudge and Fang are right. There's even something in her mind that's so familiar," Angel muttered, her face twisted into a sense of concentrations.

"I think we get the fact that this girl is familiar to all of us. I just want to know why she's familiar. Who is she? Where did she come from? Is she like us? Oh! Angel see if she's like us," Nudge asked.

"Umm, nope. She's nothing like us. In fact she's just human."

"Well then what does this eraser want with a human?" I asked

The whole flocked looked at me like I was stupid, and I realized the problem with what I said.

"Oh you guys know what I mean, why does he-"

"Will you guys please shut up. The best part is coming," Iggy said interrupting me. I glared at him.

"Ig what are you talking abou-" But then I saw what he was talking about. The Eraser ran straight towards the girl and punched her square in the face.

"Oh dear god," I gasped

Valkyries Pov

What is this monster doing here? I shouted in my head, knowing clearly no one would hear me.

This whole thing is entirely stupid. This world, these people...I can't deal with it. My family is disappearing every day and I'm in more danger every day. How the hell is a 13-year old girl living by herself suppose to cope with this? I have no idea.

"What are you doing here Jay?" I asked him.

"What, I cant stop by to visit?" he answered in a sarcastic voice

"Oh you didn't see the signs?" I placed my hand on my chest and shook my head, mocking sympathy. "Silly boy, let me clear it up. No. Dogs. Allowed."

"You better watch your mouth brat," He pointed a finger at me, and took a step forward. I could already see his teeth growing into large fangs.

"Down boy, I don't want to be forced to call animal control." I rolled my eyes and turned back towards my house. "Now get your butt out of here before I kick it again like last time."

"Allow me to go first," he retorted with a gentlemanly bow before he came at me with all his power and punched me in the face.

(Insert choices of curse words here).

Okay. That hurt. My nose was bleeding like hell. And trust me it hurt worse then it looked. My eyesight was starting to fade at the edges and the only thing I could focus on was that cursed mutt. So I got back up and kicked him in the face. Then when he was on the ground I took a random pipe that was sitting in front of my house and smacked him with it. I heard him yelp and he fell to the ground. With the whining that came after I could tell the boy was hurt badly. His face held an expression of pure agony, but there weren't any scratches on his body. So I smacked him again and again. Until I ran out of breathe, and all my frustration was out. He looked a little more hurt, but still not a scratch on his body. What was wrong with this boy? Then he got up lightning fast and tackled me to the ground, putting his big hairy feet on my chest.

"Get...off...of me!" I said, struggling to breath.

"Nice try, no way you're getting out until they get here," he answered with a sly smile.

"Who's they?"

"Oh, I think you know. Anyway, have you been getting any back pains?"

"Why do you care?" I asked while I clawed at his foot, desperately trying anything to get his big foot off of me. I don't even know if I would make it till 'they' came. I was running out of air. Fast.

"It would make my job a lot easier," he answered. He looked down at me and bent don't so close to me I could feel his ragged breath on my face. "And maybe if you make it easier I would cut you some slack."

I glared into his eyes and then lowered my gaze down to his foot on my chest, and then I looked back up and glared again. "Okay...well to answer your question yes I've been getting back pains. Now get off of me!" I squirmed under his weight until seconds later he took his foot off of me and I finally had room to breathe.

I took a big breath, got up, and punched him hard in the chest. I heard his breath get knocked out of him. When he fell to the ground I kicked him in the face twice, and in the stomach twice...and just for fun, in his private part…you guessed it TWICE. Now he was starting to look hurt. But trust me he looked a whole lot better than me.

He groaned, and held his head in his hands for a few seconds. And I should've took those few seconds to run away, go back in my house, or at least scream for help because he soon recovered. He looked up at me with a big smile on his face and kicked my feet so I fell over onto the ground. He grabbed my shoulders, turned me around and punched me so hard in my back that I almost flew into the air. It hurt more than before...I actually felt like I was in hell with the burning pain scorching my spine. I couldn't breathe, I couldn't move. All I could do was scream in pain.

So I did. I screamed so loud that birds flew away from their trees and little forest creatures scurried off so they could hide. The pain was literally killing me.

"Hasn't your mother taught you to never trust a wolf," he whispered in my ear.

That was it. I thought I was going to die there and now. I couldn't breathe, everything was going dark and I felt like I wasn't even myself anymore. All I could do was sob hard on the ground, the pain spreading throughout my entire body. I lost all hope in the world and in myself.

But then something happened. Almost as if it was a miracle. This blond girl jumped out from behind a tree and yelled at Jay.

"Leave her alone you dirt bag"

Max Pov

Oh my god, what is with this guy? This was totally wrong. And her face...the poor girl, I bet she didn't even do anything.

I looked around at the flock to see their reactions. Of course Iggy and Gazzy were enjoying the fight (sick people), Fangs eyes were locked on the eraser and his face was the meaning of death. What was with him lately? And Angel and Nudge were hugging each other trying to avoid any eye contact with the fight. Total was right beside Iggy and Gazzy. The poor girl... she can't even breathe with the erasers foot on her. I could even see her running out of air. I have to admit though; I was really getting into the fight. I mean, like, when she got up it was hard for me not to cheer. She was really kicking ass. But then he punched her...and I think I heard something crack. She was lying there, on the ground, limp.

Was she dead? Oh god. I couldn't take this anymore.

"Leave her alone you dirt bag!" I jumped out from behind the tree and took my place in front of the rest of the flock. I heard tiny gasps escape from their mouths but I paid them no mind. The eraser froze and looked up at me like he was studying a masterpiece painting.

"Ah, what do we have here?" he said with a smile

"Ah, what do you think? You heard what I said, leave her alone or I'll be the one kicking your butt."

"Well you can talk the talk, let's see if you can walk the walk." And then he came charging at me. But I dodged right on time, and watched him run straight into a tree. When he was on the ground I picked him up and flipped him over my back, he was surprisingly not heavy. Then I did a spin kick into the side of his head and I knew he was done. He tried to get up slowly, trying not to show any sign of pain. But he was a horrible actor.

"Trust me, you will be sorry for this you little rodent." He muttered. Coughing out blood onto the ground.

"Trust me, I won't."

In a second he ran over to Valkyrie, looked at her once, and ran off.

"Loser," I said under my breath as I ran over to Valkyries limp body. I hoped she wasn't dead. Please don't tell me I was too late.

"Sweetie, hello are you okay?" She wasn't moving, just laying there, oh my god. She was dead! I felt around her neck and her wrist but couldn't find a pulse.

"IGGY! Come over here," he ran over to where I was as fast as he could. "Feel around for a pulse because I can't find one." He felt a little around her neck, and then on her back. Then he put his ear to her chest and listened.

"Well she's alive...barely. But there's something in her back. Like something trying to poke its way out. I have no idea what it is."

"Well..."

Take the body inside
Whoa! What the heck was that? It was too light to be MY voice, but too low to be Angels voice

Max, take her inside
Whoa Angel? Okay what is going on?

Max, a voice told me to take her inside, so please.
Angel No, this could be trap.

Max, even Iggy checked her and she's dying. Just Help her.
Angel I...

Take the body inside or you will regret it!
 Okay, that was freaky enough to even scare me.

"Okay were taking her inside" I shouted.

"Max, are you serious?" Iggy looked up at me in disbelief.

"Yes I'm serious so come on lets go...Guys come on were taking her inside!" Gazzy, Nudge, and Angel ran into the house excitedly, while Fang and Iggy carried her body in, and I was last.

I have to admit. Her house was cool. Really fancy furniture and really cool colors. The kitchen was attached to the living room so it looked very awesome. The boys set Valkyrie down on the dark red leather couch while the rest of the flock went exploring. Except for Fang, he just sat their staring at Valkyrie. It was bugging the crap out of me, why did he care about this girl when he didn't even know her? I had to find out. So I walked over to him and sat next to him on the floor.

"So, what did you think of the fight?" I asked him avoiding eye contact.

"I want to kill that Eraser." he answered, still staring down at the girl.

"'Cause he's an eraser or 'cause he almost killed this girl?"

"Both."

"Well why? I mean if it was any other girl would you save her?"

"Probably not."

"Will you stop with the short sentences; it's annoying the crap out of me."

"Nope"

"You know Fang, ever since you got this email you've been acting weird."

"Well, I guess I have. But there's something about this girl that's different."

"You know I'm beginning to hate you again." Then he turned to me and smiled at me.

"No you don't, because you love me this much!" He held up his arms to show the amount and I smacked him in the back of the head. I hate it when he does that.

I stormed out of the room. I was so mad because I could still hear him, chuckling in the background. The sun was setting and the crickets were chirping and I was just standing near the railing on the porch, when Angel came out side and stood beside me.

"Hey sweetie, whats up?" I asked her.

"Umm Max, are you jealous?"

"Jealous. Jealous of what?"

"You know, about how Fang is treating that girl."

"Oh, honey no. Of course I'm not."

"Max I've been reading your mind the whole time you were sitting next to Fang." I did not feel like talking about this; especially with Angel. I decided to change the subject changed the subject.

"So, how do you like the house?"

"It's very pretty, me and Nudge are in love with it. But Max are we really going to help this girl? Are we going to sleep here? I mean I've been reading the girls mind and she is telling the truth. But for some reason she believes this is all fake"

" Oh, honey I don't..." I was cut off by something I wasn't in the mood to hear

"AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!". Angel jumped at the sound of it and I ran inside to see what was up.

But all I saw was Valkyrie sitting on the couch staring at Fang.

Hey guys, Hoped you like it. Lot more going on then you think. Leave comment and tell me your opinion on Valkyrie. DO IT FOR THE COOKIES!