HAHA! Yay! I got two OC's submitted by 'Reidluver' and 'Hikari no Kaze'. Sorry for those other readers, but these two OC's will definitely be submitted in my story because I like them a lot. Reidluver's OC's name is Lorenzo Mancini. (A/N: ALERT! THIS CHAPTER IS GOING TO BE ABOUT LORENZO. Just for this chapter only.) He is going (not yet currently in any family) to be Mist Flame attribute. Hikari no Kaze's OC will be revealed in the next chapter.
Enjoy this chapter about Lorenzo Mancini.
Lorenzo crunched into the last bite of his apple, enjoying the taste and flavor, then calmly threw the core on the cobblestone street. He walked along the busy road, the sound of carriages and horses hooves beating against the ground. The sky was a dark blue color and storm clouds were scattered over the sky.
Throwing his tattered cloak over his head Lorenzo walked a bit farther and took shade under a store. Above him was a sign reading, 'JEWEL SHOP'. Grinning, the boy proceeded to open the door slowly and a wind chime signaled a new guest. For the store owner, that most likely meant more money.
Beautiful jewels hung over the ceiling and in different varieties of boxes. Emeralds, saphires, rubies, gems, diamonds… there were all types of precious items. A fat, sweaty man behind a counter looked up and saw Lorenzo. "My, my… A new customer… Please come in," he said greedily.
The extremely intelligent boy sighed and looked down at the floor so his face was hidden by his cloak. "Scusi moi Signor-" before Lorenzo could finish talking he tripped and fell down on the tile floor, getting water and dirt all over the store.
"Hey you idiot! Those are expensive! Get up and leave before you get everything dirty!" the man barked loudly, glaring at him.
Lorenzo barely batted an eye, but he stood up and apologized. "Sorry Signore. I don't have any gold, but my family is in trouble. May I please have a jewel?"
The impatient man's face was now as red as a tomato. "What!" he demanded. "Get out of here you dog!" the fat man continued to take out a stick from his shirt. "Scram! Get out!"
Lorenzo closed his eyes and smirked. All was going as according to plan. "Oh look Signore!" he said innocently. "I have money! I remember Nana gave them to me to buy groceries." the boy pulled out a enormously large bag of coins from his cloak and shoved it in the man's face.
In an instant the greedy man was drawn to the bag and he held it in his hands, throwing it back and forth, enjoying the sound of money clinking against each other. "Sorry young boy. Is there anything you would like to purchase from this shop?" the man said quickly.
"Only one jewel," Lorenzo replied. "These should compensate for a small ruby right, Signore?"
"Of course, of course," the man muttered. This kid is really an idiot! He couldn't believe his luck. All this money for a tiny ruby.
Just as he was about to get the jewel, Lorenzo ran around the shop, knocking things over and grabbing as many diamonds as he could, shoving them into a sack.
"Hey! Hey! What are you doing?" the man asked angrily.
By this time, the boy was already at the door and he ran out laughing evilly. The fat man was close behind, but he was in no athletic condition to chase after him. Regardless, the store owner ran after the young boy, his money bag still in the shop.
Big mistake.
In a moment the money bag detonated, destroying everything in the shop. The man was too confused to understand what happened. People went wild on the streets, grabbing pieces of jewels and pearls as they went flying out of the once new store.
Meanwhile, Lorenzo could only watch and smirk at the amusing sight. He pulled out a metal staff and quickly changed his appearance into an old man. Continuing along the street, the 'old man' smiled at the sight of the disaster. A few policeman on horses had run over to the store, telling people to quiet down and explain.
Let's make some more disaster! thought Lorenzo as he walked along the road, throwing jewels on the ground every now and then.
You like? I don't know if I got the character right. It's all up to Reidluver to decide. If you don't understand I will explain… soon! Anyways, sorry this chapter was off topic, but Giotto and G. will come in the next one. I'm so glad at the amount of reviews I got. Even though there aren't that many, I'm just glad people are reading my story. Thanks so much! You guys are the best! Sorry once again for the weird chapter, but I told Reidluver I would make one.
For Reidluver: Do you want me to change the chapter if you don't like it? Tell me what you want and don't want.
4 more OC's are being accepted.
Rain, Cloud, Lightning, Storm
I have Sky, Mist, and Sun (Hikari no Kaze's OC is sun)
That means 4 more available spots! If you tell me now, it's most definitely going to be included.
Thank you,
xDarkTempest
