Awesomeness! I got 5 OC's. Sadly, I like every single one of them, so they will be used! But there is only one spot left: Storm. After this chapter, I will do a chapter on "Hi Hikari No Kaze's OC", which is Sun flame. Here are the current OC submissions given to me by reviewers. THANK YOU ALL!

Submitted by Reidluver:

Name: Lorenzo Mancini
Flame: Mist Flame type
Weapon: A Metal Retractable Staff
Gender: Male
Ability: Can use illusions freely and control other people
Likes: Tricking people, Panthers, Italian Food, Gaining an advantage over others
Dislikes: Being Captured (Right?) and used, Fires (Big or small)

Submitted by Hi Hikari No Kaze:

Name: Aria Freesea (Originally known as Lytzare)
Flame: Sun Flame type
Weapon: Dual Swords
Gender: Female
Ability: The power to heal others (Sorry, I made that up)
Likes: Adventure, Friendship, Drawing, Dandelions, and more
Dislikes: Girly Stuff, Formal things, Anything not fun, Snakes

Submitted by Frost190:

Name: Regno Adalberth Demoniaco (Correct?)
Flame: Cloud Flame type
Weapon: Special Chains and Dying Will Resistance Black-Sword
Gender: Male
Ability: Able to control poisonous snakes and speak to them
Likes: Keeping to himself, reading, strong people, dark colors
Dislikes: Weak, Naïve, Noisy People, Jokes (Is like Hibari?)

Submitted by Fujisaki Nadeshiko:

Name: Caterina Alba
Flame: Rain Flame type
Weapon: A Rod
Gender: Female
Ability: Can change her Rain Flame into Ice Flames and use icicles
Likes: Reading, Sleeping- Secret likes: To Dance, Sing, Chocolate
Dislikes: People that are cruel, Weak Jokes

Submitted by ZiaLiaLis:

Name: Nina Lorraine
Flame: Lightning Flame type
Weapon: Sharp Lightning strings used to paralyze a person
Gender: Female
Ability: Is like a doll, emotionless and follows her masters command
(No Likes or Dislikes but has a long history)

History: Nina's father wanted to create the perfect doll with flames.
Because this was not possible, he seized the opportunity to use
Nina's body as a doll shell. Nina's arm was cut off by her father
and he replaced it with a doll arm (Extremely Creepy). Nina has
almost no personality, and the Mafia wanted to make use of her
when she was pretty young.

Wow, that was tiring. Sorry if I got anything wrong. Every other chapter will be an OC chapter. The ages of the characters should be around Giotto and G.'s ages. Sorry if you didn't want it that way, but it only makes sense. Since my Sky Boss will only be appearing in the last chapter, the others will already have made a one chapter appearance. Hopefully I will get my Storm one soon… I really liked all of the OC's submitted, and I need to thank everybody who read my story. Chapter 10 will be Aria, Chapter 12 will be Regno, Chapter 14 will be Caterina, Chapter 16 will be Nina. Thank you and enjoy the story!


Giotto woke up to the sound of a shouting man's voice. He slowly sat upright and looked around. The sky was beautiful today and a rainbow hung in the horizon. The logs they had moved yesterday were in the same position, but Giotto's hands were still scratched. The blood had dried up leaving large scars and bruises. It hurt when the blonde boy moved his hands too quickly and the cold wind didn't help at all.

If only I had gloves, Giotto thought with a smirk.

He then nudged G. gently on the shoulder.

"Hm… what is it?" the red-haired boy asked lazily. His hair was ruffled sideways and it was quite a hilarious sight.

The blonde had to refrain from laughing out loud and he shook G. a bit harder. "Get up! The log people are here!" he whispered loudly.

The redhead immediately jumped up and looked from side to side. "Where?" he demanded.

Giotto grinned and G. sighed in defeat. "I was having a good dream. Why'd you wake me up?"

"Why do you think? I'm thirsty, so let's go find so water. Two people means twice as fast. Also, I'm as clumsy as a bear. So I kind of needed to trick you," the blonde haired boy answered.

"Fine… But where do you think we should start looking? There were mosquitoes yesterday, and where there's bugs, there's water." G. explained.

The sound of the man's voice grew louder and closer. Giotto flinched and hid behind the log, making him partially visible. He looked back at G, who's eyes were as wide as a tomato.

"You boys gonna come out there?" the man said.

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G. didn't move a muscle. He closed his eyes pretending to be asleep, but the man was smarter than that.

"Hey, are these the logs I cut down yesterday? Why'd you kids take them from me?"

Giotto assumed he must be friendly because he hadn't shouted out at them in a very rough way.

"Sorry sir, we don't have a home to live in and it was very cold yesterday night. We needed some protection against the wind. We'll return the logs and do anything we can to help you." the blonde boy said.

G. nodded in agreement and frowned. "We didn't mean to steal sir. We planned on returning them right away."

The man's eyes grew large and there were several moments of silence. Giotto took this time to take in his appearance. He had darkish brown hair and a tanned skin. The man's hands were rough and callused so Giotto took it that he was a hard-worker and used his arms for work.

The man sighed and rubbed his hands together, then leaned on the log and sat down on the ground. He closed his eyes before talking. "My name's Otto. I'm a carpenter in this tiny village we live in. My job is to cut down logs and shape the wood into things. It's extremely tiring work and very difficult. I understand the predicament you boys are in, but the work needs to be done."

Giotto and G. nodded and stood up simultaneously. "We'll help you put the logs ba-" G. started to say, but was cut off by Otto.

"I have an idea," Otto said slowly, staring at the two boys in the eyes. "How 'bout you two boys first come help me with this wood. Then, after you're done help me haul all this back to my home. I'll let you two stay at my house and eat and sleep there if you offer me your help. Is it a deal?" he asked, stretching out his hand.

Giotto and G. looked at one another for a quick moment and smiled. "Deal," they said in unison, accepting Otto's handshake.

"All righty then!" the man responded, standing up. "Let's get this thing back!"

The rest of the hour was spent with the three of them grabbing onto the logs and placing them onto a cart with a horse at the front. Giotto was still tired from the work, but Otto was strong and he lifted everything with ease, barely batting an eye.

Beads of sweat began to fall down the two boys faces and in no time G.'s hands were also as worn-out as Giotto's. They didn't complain though, both of them wanted to set a good impression on the kind man who had offered them a place to stay. They had put all of the logs on the cart and were walking on their way home when Giotto began talking again. "It's very nice of you to give us a place to sleep Mr. Otto. We really appreciate that."

"Haha no worries. Our house was a bit too empty anyways. Besides you two are some good hard-workers. That's what should be in boys nowadays." Otto said, grabbing onto the horses' reigns.

Giotto and G. looked ahead, but both of them were smiling. The sun was up now and it's rays shined down on them, the heat hammering at their heads. It was not long before the three of them arrived at a large brick houses. There was a wooden fence squaring the perimeter of it, and a couple trees that grew inside.

Otto walked the cart over to a small wooden stable and placed it inside with the horse. "Come on you two," he said, rubbing his hands together. "Let's go inside."

The man fiddled in his overalls for something and pulled out a shiny key. After inserting it he opened the door and walked inside. The two boys followed suit and looked around. Even though the environment wasn't as good as G.'s backyard, the furniture was mostly new and in good condition. A couple of candles lit up the hallways, making the place seem a bit more cozy.

The sound of footsteps could be heard around the hallway and soon a young boy bounded around the corner and jumped up. "Dad! You're home! Dinner's ready!" the boy called out excitedly.

It was then he noticed Giotto and G., and without giving a curious glance, he walked towards them smiling.

"Hey," the boy said. "My name's Asari Ugetsu."


Yo yo yo. Like it? Love it? Hate it? Cruelty? Tell me how to improve, you don't even need to send it through a review. Sorry for the late update! Remember, only one more OC is allowed to be submitted. STORM FLAME!

Thanks,

xDarkTempest