First of all thanks for the constructive criticism people. It makes me mad -- but this is my first fanfic so now after i finish this story i can make a better story. So YAY go mean people. But anyways i like cliffhangers and im sorry theres a cliffhanger at the end of every chapter but hey thats how i like it! It makes people want to keep reading so thats a good thing for me. Sorry if you don't like it. But i will also try and stop writing so many author's notes i didn't think i was but if you guys think i am then i will stop. So i will quit talking now and get to writing this chapter.
------------------------Derek P.O.V---while Bella is going through the change.-------------------------------
I know how much pain Bella is going through. I felt it myself so many years ago. It was horrible just like fire going through your veins. I stayed with her the whole time while she was in pain. Unfortunately she screamed out Edward's name a lot. I don't think she will ever get over him even if i told her what i did to him. There has got to be a way for her to trust me, and like me. I will figure it out so my plan will work. She will be mine. I was the one that brought her here and i am the one that is going to stay with her. Three days passed and i stayed with her the whole time of course. This way maybe she will start to like me. She woke up as i was staring at her face. Mesmerizing her new beauty from the change.
"Bella are you alright?"
"Considering the circumstances i guess im alright."
She still isn't completely comfortable around here. But i guess she will get used to it after a while.
"Would you like to try and walk around now?"
"Sure"
She got up and moved across the room extremely fast. Even for a vampire. I think it may be possible that she is as fast or faster than me. This isn't good. I hope she doesn't have a better power than me. Then i would have no control over her.
"Are you thirsty?"
I know she would be. Every new changed vampire is thirsty after they are done changing.
"Well i am but...what would i have to drink from?"
I know this would pose a problem. She had been around the Cullens to long and thought killing humans was wrong. I already had a plan for this though.
"Ok Bella we can run out to the woods and see if we can find you an animal."
"Thank you Derek. I don't want to be a monster and drink human blood."
Well Bella i guess you will be a monster like me soon enough.
"Your welcome. Ok follow me."
I grabbed her hand and lead her out of the door and into a series of long hallways. There was no way she would remember how to get back to her room without me. There were so many turns that if you haven't lived here for a long time you would never remember them.
We finally got outside and i lead her to the woods. Little did she know a human would be coming this way in about 5 minutes. I had asked Emma to lure a human into the woods when she saw Bella and I leave. She had known that today was the day Bella would wake up so i am sure that she is ready. I looked at Bella and she looked very upset.
"Bella what is wrong? You look very sad."
"I just always thought that Edward would be the one to teach me to hunt."
There she goes with Edward again. If she keeps talking about him i am going to have to tell her where her dearest Edward really is. I have to be nice to her and get her to like me so i won't tell her unless she does something rash.
"Well Bella i guess your just stuck with me."
She was about to say something to it when she got a fierce look on her face. There was Emma and the human. Coming our way. This way going to be interesting.
------------------Bella P.O.V--------------------------
I was about to say that i would rather go to hell then be stuck with the man that killed me, took away edward, and kidnapped me but i smelled something...
