My Commander
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Chapter Two
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The winter season just seemed to become colder. The trees surrounding the military base were covered in white snow. It has been a week since Sakura arrived in the army site. The feminine clothing she wore when she first arrived in the base had disappeared, she changed to the strict and serious unflattering army gear. She had her beautiful hair in a tight strict bun and she did not wear any make up. She still looked stunning without it, her skin was flawless.
Ever since Sakura and Russel teamed up together, the army training became much brutal and tougher. They would end their night with the soldiers so incredibly exhausted that when they returned to their bunks and they would immediately fell asleep. The commanders almost seemed like they enjoyed torturing the soldiers and they only started level two of their training. There were more push-ups and sit ups. They ran suicides all day long and had to carry the M16 rifle and in full army suits. In one training, they were to sleep for two days in the cold dense forest, with no food just because they did not manage to salute properly.
Some fainted on the spot while training due to the exhaustion.
Some threatened to sue the military, but was harshly laughed at.
The once flawless face of Syaoran Li the supermodel is now covered in bruises and cuts. His hair had grown messier. He even grew a small beard which made him look more masculine.
The soldiers were trying to give hints and flirt with their Commander. All of them were rich and spoiled kids, some of them tried to bribe Sakura into letting them have fun, but were taken down and put in 'special' training.
What Syaoran learnt from the his team's mistakes was to never mess with Sakura.
She was much tougher than all of those boys combined.
A fellow soldier once winked playfully at Sakura while she was observing their training, immediately got his ass whopped and ended up in the nurse's room. He was excused from training for 4 days.
That was how scary she was.
"WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU TRYING TO DO WITH YOUR M18S! IM A GIRL AND I CAN AIM BETTER THAN YOU TRANNIES WITH MY EYES CLOSED!" Sakura roared.
The soldiers were having gun training that afternoon, they were all on the stomachs and in camouflage with rifles in the hands aiming at a piece of paper with a very small mark in its center.
"SHOOT YOU SISSIES!"
Everyone fired their targets but none even got near the mark.
"YOU PATHETHIC SOLDIERS!"
"THIS IS HOW REAL SOLDIERS DO IT!" Sakura yelled.
She snatched a rifle from a soldier's hand and shot perfectly at the mark without even looking.
The company was in awe.
"FOR SUCH A DISGRACEFUL BEHAVIOR RUN 500 SUICIDES AND 500 PUSH UPS!"
The soldiers groaned.
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(Syaoran's POV)
"She's so hot!"
"I would love to bang her!"
"Do you she's married?"
Those were the discussion in the bunkers now. The boys were sprawled across the room. We've all gotten used to the revolting smell of sweat and manly fluids.
I couldn't help but think of before Sakura arrive to the base things were already bad but now that she's here, it somehow gotten worse.
On the day she arrived, we were not sure what happened. We were doing our regular marching, when I caught a glimpse of this person in a trench, walking with the Russel.
And he seemed happy and smiling. In the week I've came here before, I've never even whiffed a positive energy coming from Russel. Seeing him smile was like seeing a pig walk on his feet. It was just against nature.
We were then called upon. But she disappeared.
She suddenly reappeared in front of us guys.
She was so sexy and seductive and she was not doing anything in the moment. She was just standing there looking at us with her big and beautiful emerald eyes.
Out of the sudden, she started to yell, it was horrible. She yelled louder and scarier than our officer. Russel said that she was his commander and that she had a higher position. Which meant that he was under her. He also mentioned that she could kill us or something. Whatever, I was not listening, I was staring at her beautiful curvaceous body and was thinking about the many ways I could do to her.
Out of the sudden, everyone yelled "Sir" while I yelled "Ma'am".
She let out a soft giggle which I find really cute.
"ONE" everyone started counting.
Now, thinking of her I really need a cold shower. I mean, really need a cold shower.
"Guys I'm going to the toilet"
Too bad, they were too busy discussing to see me leave the room.
It was really dark and cold out here, and wearing thin clothes was definitely is not helping.
I reached the toilet and was surprised to see the light was already turned on. I entered and heard that someone was using the shower.
Well, thank god he is here. I sure don't want to shower alone. Who knows what ghost lurks around in this camp?
I took off the white t-shirt and was clad in my grey loose comfortable sweats. I stared at my reflection.
"Damn I look hot!"
It was still bad that I still had the erection from thinking about the commander. She was so damn sexy. She had those big and round breasts that I would love to grab. Her skin was milky and soft like butter.
She had such a beautiful face with piercing green eyes. Damn, it is getting painful already.
Cold shower now!
(END POV)
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The night was really cold, the only light were coming from the bathroom lights that were a few meters away from where he is now, the bunker and the commando's unit. He could hear cheering and laughing coming from that unit.
Syaoran could not help but investigate.
He silently crept to the lower window and lend an eye inside the room.
The senior officers were drinking and laughing heavily. There was a flat screen television mounted on the wall. A few sofas, a large table laid on the middle of the room with plenty of beer bottles on it. The leaders were playing cards. They looked like they were having so much fun.
Syaoran searched the room to find Sakura.
She was not in that room. So where could she be?
"Soldier, What Are You Doing Up!" a voice scolded from behind him.
Syaoran turned to see where the voice was coming from.
Sakura was in front of him, she was dressed in her cute floral pajamas. She was holding a couple of beer bottles in her hand. Her hair was finally loose from that bun. She looked really cute.
"Urm shower" muttered Syaoran weakly.
"Were you spying on us?" she asked.
Syaoran could fell sweat forming again. She was too close. Syaoran could see her face clearly in front of him. She was truly beautiful.
"Why don't you come inside soldier. We could always use more players" she said, "thats an order".
Syaoran entered nervously after Sakura.
The moment he entered the room he could feel the officers and seniors were all starring at him.
"Guys we have a special guest today. I saw this soldier, spying on all of you" she said.
Syaoran was petrified, everyone in that room was sneering at him. "You're Feng Li's nephew aren't you?" one of his seniors asked.
Syaoran nodded. He was still standing in the entrance of the room. He was too nervous to move, he was in a room surrounded by killers.
"Feng and us have been to many missions together" he said, "he was always the serious one. Refusing to keep an eye close even for a millisecond".
Everyone in that room nodded.
"Soldier, strip!" one of them ordered. The room roared in laughter.
"Guys, settle down" Sakura cried softly. The laughter returned.
"Sakura, you're a beautiful lady! Why don't you just leave all these military shit aside and get married!" one of them drunkly said.
Syaoran could see Sakura getting reader, "Why don't you marry this Li here! He's a selfish, stuck up brat. You could teach him a lesson or two".
Syaoran could see Sakura let out a laugh at the end of the room, "Guys, I better send the soldier back to his bunker before you guys embarrass yourself in front of him!" she said.
"Aww, Commander! You always take the fun parts" Russel cried.
The female soldier walked passed the drunken lads and took Syaoran by his arm and led him out of the room. The outside was the complete opposite of what was happening inside, inside was a crazy drunken old school party with middle aged drunken men drinking their asses off. Pfft, and they were supposed to train the soldiers tomorrow, good luck training soldiers with a hangover. On the outside, the air was cold with the stars lighting up the dark sky. The trees in the dark looked like people swaying in the wind, and the mountains surrounding them looked like huge shadows standing above observing their camp.
"Hey, let me accompany you to the bunker" she said.
Syaoran could not believe his luck the beautiful girl in front of him was going to accompany him. Talk about weird. He could not believe he was at least a head taller than she was, and she looked smaller without those army uniform.
The silence was really awkward. For once, the Syaoran Li didn't know what to say to a girl.
"Um, you can still talk to me you know. I'm still human" she said. Her voice was soft and sweet, it was a complete opposite of what he was used to her sound like.
"Uh, its not that. I'm just nervous. It isn't everyday you talk to a female killer" he explained.
Sakura let out a laugh, "I'm not a killer. I've never killed anyone" she said with a straight face.
"Really? But I thought..." "No of course not! I've killed many people before. Most of them in wars, missions and such. But on a regular day I'm a normal person" she said smiling.
Syaoran laughed, "So I guess there are many things I don't know about you. Its a beautiful night, do you want to take a walk Commander?" he nervously asked.
Sakura smiled, "Yeah. That will be nice".
They passed the soldier's bunkers. Syaoran could not believe how lucky he was. It was a beautiful night and he was in the company of one of the most beautiful person he'd ever seen.
"Commander do you know my name?" Syaoran asked, he had to know if she even knew his name.
"Your name is Syaoran Li. Your mother is Yelan Li. You're worth $250 million dollars by Forbs. Apparently you're a super male model. You party a lot, all over the world. You've dated several actresses, 2 of them much older than your mom", she explained.
Syaoran laughed, "I guess you know me quite a lot. Is that in the profile folder?" he asked.
Sakura laughed, "Thats from a magazine" she revealed.
Syaoran laughed, she was humourous, he liked that.
"I love to read all those trashy gossip magazines and be feminine and stuff. But, strangely enough my work does not allow me to do so" she said.
Syaoran could hear a hint of sadness in her voice, "Why are you in the military?" he asked.
"When I was a kid, we were kidnapped by some pirates in the borders of America. They were so terrible. We were in captive for a whole year in some smelly, rusted tank. My mother fell incredibly ill. Then one day,Navy soldiers came and saved us. I've never been so happy in my life. But sadly enough, my mother died as soon after that" she explained.
"And I'm not that good in academics" she added and laughed.
Syaoran laughed, "I'm sorry about your mother. You have an incredible story Commander" he complimented.
"Don't call me Commander now. Call me Sakura" she insisted.
"Alright Sakura. Call me Syaoran" he said.
"Hey, what were you doing reading those magazines? Just so you know I don't do cougars" he whispered to her.
Sakura laughed loudly, "Hey, I'm still a girl. We love magazines, the trashier the better!".
"So did you think I was hot?" he smirked.
Sakura hit hit softly on his arm, "Yes you are".
Syaoran flexed his biceps, his large muscle protruding from his upper arm. Sakura laughed again.
Silence engulfed them again.
"Hey, I gotta head back. We're only left with 3 hours of sleep" she said.
"Good night Syoaran! Just because I was nice tonight, does not mean I'll go easy on you tomorrow" she said.
She then tip toed and placed a kiss on his cheek.
"Good night!" she whispered to him softly.
Syaoran watched as she walked away in the darkness.
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