hey guys, i know i know i haven't updated in months, i don't know, i got writers block then i sort of thought my story was crap and decided not to write any more but then i said to myself 'wait no i need to finish what i started!' so this is me finishing what i started, well its nowhere near finished but i'm getting there truly i am lol. please please please read and review i'd like to know what you think and you guys will probably not read this because you forgotten all about the plot and whats happened blah blah but still give it a shot please the people that did read my story. i will try and update soon but got tonnes of exams coming up so maybe in a week or two but it wont be longer than a month i swear lol. you can go ahead and read now... :D
Oliver POV
"What's wrong Oliver? Sun too hot for you?" she asked smiling.
Her eyes were now open and her red irises captivated my gaze making me unable to look away.
I raised an eyebrow squinting in the glare of the sun. She stepped forward
"Oh my god, have I made Oliver silent? Do you really have nothing to say" she laughed throwing her head back. Her voice sounded somewhat musical!
I growled and crouched down my head tilted to one side and my lower lip nudged a bit as my fangs grew glinting in the sun looking as if they were made of stone.
She stopped laughing immediately and growled back giving me a death glare; the phrase 'if looks could kill came to mind'.
"Don't like to play games Oliver?" she asked silkily almost hissing.
"As a matter of fact I don't. But seen as its you let's see how this plays out!" her lips slowly stretched into an evil smile
"Yes lets" and before I could even think of another thought she was off running to the edge of the building and sprang on the wall sending her flying into the air, folding herself in she did a flip and landed like a gymnast on the other building.
She kept running but not before she looked back to me to and smiled!
I gave a menacing glare and was about to speed off after her until a voice stopped me.
"Something, isn't she?" I whirled round to see James leaning against the wall on the shaded side of the building. I straightened up
"Do you know what she is?" I asked keeping my face masked of all emotion. The sun was really starting to bother me. I gritted my teeth waiting for him to answer.
"A vampire obviously! I wasn't entirely sure about her at first but she definitely fits the mark! It was worth tracking her down which wasn't easy can I just say!" he stated as if this was normal conversation.
"What do you mean mark? And you tacked her?" I asked confusion crossing my face along with impatience because he was taking a long time to answer.
"Well you've seen her haven't you?" He held a hand out in the general direction in which Claire had left. I started at him and was about to shout at him to get to the point but my leather glove burst into flame I growled furiously. He laughed
"I'll explain later, first you need to get into the shade and then we need to go get her. It should be easier with the two of us" I swept passed him and went through the door into the building running down the stairs at full vampire speed, finally ending up on the bottom floor which seemed to be yet another empty warehouse!
"Come one guys how slow are you?" a voice echoed round. I twirled trying to see where she was but she was nowhere to be seen.
"Wow she learns quickly!" James stated next to me.
"What?" I asked supremely irritated now, had she gotten out the building already
"She can talk to people in their minds. There's no point looking for her, she's not in here!" he shook his head and went off the front door seeing if he could catch her scent. 'what the hell was he hiding from me?'
hey so what did you think was it bad good? please let me know by clicking the blue button and review. please it would mean a lot
oh and i now have two stories on fictionpress one is on the general section called revealing the past my pen name is very similar
and another on young adult called black tears and rainbow socks (it has a goth and a sort of hippie girl in it : / hmmmm...) i haven't had any reviews on them yet and im a bit dissapointed and upset but hayho :D
anyway for those of you who dont know what fictionpress is. its basically the exact same as this site only you post your stories on there and its not based on anything so just whatever you like :D its quite good
errm what was i gunna say... oh yeah and i'd really like to write a new story for either morganville or for shiver (If any of you have ever read the book its amazing!) if anybody would like to give some ideas of what they want for a story bring them up i will love to write some of your ideas. i may not be the best writer in the world but hey worth a shot! please please please review i love to hear what you have to say whether its good or bad :D xxxxxxxxxxx