hello again.
well, heres the second chapter. i tried to make the first one as detailed as possible. hopefully this will be the same.
p.s.:didja read XoXbloodyaliceT.T's stories yet? please read dem and review! they are very good!
and as u know, denise is the name of the star.
~CHAPTER 2~
denise put her paw on the wooden door just as it opened into the room. she bounced back, and looked at the mouse that opened the door. he was wearing a brown cowboy hat and and a red bandana around his neck. she looked at the words above his head:
xgenrocks
cheese theif
he looked at denise. "you're new here, arent you?" denise nodded. "well, the boss wants us out there. we have to get going."
they walked out the door into a short, stone hallway. denise stopped and looked back toward the door. her name and title were on a bronze plate beside it.
xgenrocks stopped and turned around. "hey, u coming?" denise looked back at him, having no idea where she was going. "yeah... yeah, im coming."
she caught up to him and they continued walking. denise looked at the other doors; circumfrence, hellsshadow, cassdan, cheseese...'hmmm...wow, these are some funny names...' she thought.
suddenly, denise's vision started to get blurry. she was starting to feel dizzy, and started to stagger. everything was was starting to turn black. she fell to the floor, completely knocked out.
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she woke up in an empty, grassy feild, seeing nothing but mist. the grass felt so soft on her fingers. wait, fingers? she looked at her hands. her human hands. she looked down at her white and pink shoes. she felt like she had been this way for years now. suddenly she heard a voice...
~denise.~
she looked around, but couldnt find anyone. "hello?"
~hello, denise. my n..ame...is...~
the voice was starting to fade. "hey, wait..." suddenly she started to feel dizzy again, and everything started fading...fading...
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"denise? hey. hey!"
'that voice...it sounds familiar...'
"denise! cmon, wake up!"
'that mouse...xgenrocks...' then, another voice-
"do you think shes..."
"no, no, shes breathing."
denise opened her eyes to see xgenrocks and another mouse standing above her. "hey, you ok?" the other mouse- sammyboiii- asked.
"i think so"
they then heard a loud holler coming from down the hall. "cmon, you layabouts! we dont have all day! the map is gonna start soon, cmonnnn!"
well, there you have it. i know there hasnt been much happening in the first couple chapters, but things will get more interesting soon. please review!
well, ill be finishing the third chapter in the next couple of days.
p.s. pleeze read XoXbloodyaliceT.T's stories!