A/N ok beautiful people here is the 6th chapter and it is the longest there is (so far). I think I'm about half way through but I'm not sure. AGAIN i own nothing i am just using some of the wonderful world from the queen of Harry Potter herself.
LETS GO...

Remus woke in a different room too the one he was in. It was an empty room except from the lanterns hanging from the wall, the window to right and the door in front of him. He remembered a little of what happened. He remembered letting the werewolf in him take over, he knew that there was no way to rescue Dora from Greyback's clutched if he didn t. When his Werewolf form was in control Remus could never remember what happened, but from the way his body felt he knew what ever happened wasn t good. He glanced down at himself. He was say in a wooden chair with what must have been magical ties round him because he couldn t move off the chair. He could see the cuts and dried blood on his chest, arms, legs and the feel of his back on the cold would, meant he had a few there too. He was stuck in the empty room till Greyback came.
The room was horribly quite and it was driving Remus insane.

He watched the sun move across the sky, wondering where his wife was and if she was ok. All of a sudden an ear piecing scream echoed thought out the room. He knew that voice, he knew That scream, it was his wife.

"DORA! DORA CAN YOU HEAR ME!..." he paused but the room was deadly silent again, "DORA! PLEASE ANSWER ME!...NYMPHADORA!" he stopped yelling, his voice was horse and his throat dry.

"What is he doing to you my darling" he closed his eyes and whispered as if talking to her. Remus' mind started to fill with all the disgusting, horrible things he could be doing to her. Then all the doubts that he had at the start of their relationship started to come back. 'This is your entire fault, you did this too her, she s so young and you've broken her'. He told himself over and over again that it was all his fault, she was never going to look at him again, he'd lost his wife.

The sun was still shining through the window. The door unlocked and Fenrir Greyback strolled in. Remus didn t look up from the floor, but he could see feet bare circling him.

"Look at me cub" Remus didn t move his eyes from the floor "now" still nothing "I could always go back and play with your bitch some more if you wish?"

with that Remus looked up at the alpha wolf. He had only his tatty jeans on, his wand was sticking out of his front pocket and he hand a small smug of blood on his chin.

"Where is she? What have you done to her?" Remus growled

"she's..." he chuckled to himself "I was going to safe but with me round she's isn t really is she?" he took a step forward to Remus. He could see the fresh cuts on his chest and arms; he knew he did that to the monster.
"How do you do it cub?" Greyback asked.
"Do what?" Remus growled back slightly confused.
"Her scent is so powerful, it's beautiful in fact. How can you stand to be round her and control your self cub?" he lent in closer to Remus. It was at this point, for the first time that Remus saw the blood on his chin. Greyback noticed this. "and she tasted so good" he mocked. "What did you do to my wife?" Remus asked his voice quaking a little out of fear and anger. "Her body is perfect and she s so tight" Greyback let out a chuckle. Remus went mental.
"YOU BASTARD!" he kept screaming at the alpha wolf. Fighting to get the invisible bounds off himself, Remus was rocking the chair back and forward. "I'LL KILL YOU IF ITS THE LAST THING I DO!" he had never lost it like this before "YOU FUCKING BASTARD!".
"THAT S ENOUGH!" Greyback yelled as he leaped at Remus. Both the werewolf s along with the chair hit the hard floor.
"ARRRRRRRRRR!" Remus yelled as his arms and hands were crushed under both men.
"You will treat your alpha with respect, do you understand me?" Greyback growled, Remus was still struggling, "you both belong to me now. You will do as I say when I say otherwise the bitch in the other room will have another round with me, no matter what Condition she is in and I don t think she will be up for anymore anytime too soon."
Remus stopped struggling.
"Good boy" Greyback patted him on the head, grabbed a hand full of hair and pulled him and the chair up.
"Now that little stunt you pulled in there was not a very smart move. You went against me. What happens when you go against an alpha wolf cub?" Remus looked away from him. Greyback grabbed Remus' chin and pulled it too look at him. "I believe I asked you a question. what happened when you go against an alpha werewolf?"
"You get punished" Remus growled.

With Greyback's hand still holding firm to Remus' chin his other hand reached round to his back pocket and pulled out a pure silver knife. Hr could smell the poison. It was about 6 inched with a wooden handle. Remus eyes widened and he pushed his body into the back of the chair at the sight of the knife, it wasn t for the fact it was a knife that bothered him, it was the fact that it was made of silver. Werewolf could not touch any silver object as they are allergic to it.

When Tonks and Remus first mover in together, Tonks made him sit on the sofa while she ran round the house turning everything that she owned that was silver in to white-gold. But what she didn t know was that he had hidden a pure silver knife in the house, that was enchanted to stab him in the heart if he every tried to attack Dora. This memory made his heard ache. He missed her, he would do anything to see her right that second, to make sure she was ok.

Greyback took a small step back looking at the creature he had created many moons ago.
"You really are quite pathetic aren t you" Remus didn t say anything. He knew what was coming. Remus fixed his eyes on the handle of the door preparing himself for the pain that was coming.

Greyback just touched the knife you Remus neck, he slightly flinched in pain. Then Greyback pressed the blade slightly harder into his chest. Remus now hissed in pain. He wasn t going to show Greyback how much pain he was truly in, and this was pissing Greyback off, he wanted Remus to scream. So he took the knife and softly ran it down his breast bone, only causing Remus to flinch again. Greyback then Ran the blade back over this last spot but this time cutting deep into the poor mans flesh.
"arrrrrrrr" Remus moaned in pain under his breath. But it still wasn t good enough for Greyback so raising the knife above his head, he forced it into the muscle above his left collar bone and pulling it out quickly again causing Remus to yell out in pain. Greyback hadn t finished with him yet; he again raised the blade above his head and stabbed it into Remus' thigh leaving it there. "ARRRRRRRRRRR!", the burning sensation covering Remus was almost as unbearable as a Cruciatus Curse. He could feel unconsciousness taking over his body; it felt like his thigh and shoulder were being torn apart with someone s bare hands.

Before Greyback pulled the knife out of Remus and impaled him with it again there was a knock at the door.

"Enter" yelled Greyback. A man walked in. Remus managed to lift his head to get a look at the man at the door. Remus knew the man, his name was James. When Remus was a member of the pack he save James' life after Greyback attacked him, James was in the wrong place at the wrong time. Remus saved his life and nursed him back to health, they had become friends. He had reminded Remus of Prongs. James stood in the door way, staring shocked at the scene in front of him.

"Well what do you want cub?" Greyback growled, he didn t like to be interrupted during one of his sessions.
"I...I'm sorry sir. Your meeting with the Dark Lord starts soon." James said still staring at the sight of his friend.
"Fine." Greyback snarled, he waited for James to leave but he just stood there. "GO!"
James jumped at the raised voice, turned and practically ran away. Greyback liked the fear he inflicted on his pack, it gave him power. Greyback lent down to whisper in his ear.

"Next time you fight me. It will be your wife I stick the knife in" then he yanked out the blade causing Remus to whimper in pain. Unconsciousness was coming fast and before he knew it this world was plunger into darkness.

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Dora Was watching the sunset out the window. The sky was a beautiful pink/orange colour. If she wasn't in hell she would have smiled at its sat there for what seemed like hours. The liquid trails on her legs, groin and the floor had now dried. The pain had become a little more bearable. Remus' screams had stopped hours ago. For that she was glad as it broke her heart to hear the man she loved in pain but on the other hand the silence scared her, why had he stopped screaming what had the monster done to her silence was torture in its self because that meant she was only left with her thoughts and that was worst than anything else anyone could do to her.

Tonks kept re-living what he did to her, what Remus was going to think about her, was he going to stop loving her. She kept saying to herself over and over again 'he's going to hate me, he's going to think I m disgusting. I am disgusting'. She was brought out of her thoughts again by a red haired woman walking through the door.

"Please help me" Tonks pleaded with the woman, but she was just ignored, so she stopped trying. Tonks knew it wasn't going to get her anywhere and that she should save the little energy she had left for her next run in with Greyback. The woman sat the tray she was carrying down on the floor, lifted her wand at Tonks hanging from the wall. A tiny thread of white light came out the end of it putting lace red bra on Tonks with underwear to match.

Tonks was relived she was covered up a little. She didn't like how vulnerable being completely naked made her feel. She had always been in control of the way she looked even more so being a Metamorphmagus, but here she had no control over anything. Her gift wasn t working at all because she was in pain and exhausted. She hated the mousey brown hair; she hated the situation she was in, so why should the colour of her hair colour bother her so much.

Now with Dora Clothed, if you can call it that, the woman realised her left wrist and kicked the tray over to Dora.

"Eat quickly, I will be back in a few minutes" said the red head, and walked out. On the plate were half a sandwich and an apple.

Just as Tonks swallowed her last mouth full the Red head walked back in with Greyback Behind her. He now had a shirt on but with in a few seconds of walking through the door he took it off. Tonks stood up with a wobble and watched the woman pick up the tray, run out the room and lock the door behind her.

Tonks looked at Greyback, who in turn just glared at her. Tonks could see fresh cuts on his chest and noticed that his arms and fingers were twitching. 'The only thing to make you twitch like that was Cruciatus Curse' Dora thought to her self, she should know it had been used on her enough. Someone had punished him for something and she was glad about it but the problem with that was it had made Greyback mad, no not mad he was furious and what was never a good thing. Tonks could see his eyes and they were evil. She knew something bad was coming.

They both continued staring at each other till Greyback broke the connection and looked over her body. he took a deep breath, pulled out his wand and realised Tonks other wrist free from the chain connecting her to the wall, she rubbed it, wincing a little in pain as it was cut up and bleeding, they both were. Before she could register what was happening both her arms were raised above her head and attached to a chain coming from the ceiling forcing her to stand on her tip toes. The fear stung behind her eyes. Looking at Greyback, Tonks thought she saw his eyes change colour from amber the colour of werewolf s eyes to a pure soulless black.

Greyback waived his wand, it transfigured into a whip. Seeing what it had transfigured into Tonks eyes widened in shock. She knew what was coming next. She was already in pain and it was about to get a whole lot worse. 'Oh Merlin no, please' Tonks begged inside her head, she knew that saying it out loud wouldn t make him change his mind not after their last encounter and he liked her to beg. If she pleaded with him it would make her seem weak and she wasn t prepared to let him see that, not again. She wasn't going to give his the satisfaction of crying and screaming she was going to hold it in, well she was going to try her best. Before she knew it he was standing behind her and he let rip.

The first one came in contact hard with her back with a CRACK. Tonks bit the inside of her lip to stop from screaming, she could taste the metallic taste of blood she bit down so hard. Then he did it again CRACK for a few seconds there was nothing then again CRACK. Still Dora didn t scream. She wanted to so badly.

"BITCH!" Greyback yelled. He wanted her to beg him to stop "I WILL NOT BE TREATED LIKE THIS! HE CANT GO ROUND KILLING MY PACK!".
'What the hell is he on about?' Tonks thought trying to ignore the pain. "Who killed them?" Tonks asked trying to get Greyback to talk and not whip her anymore.
"The dark lord! He killed them!" Greyback growled. He walked round from her back to her front. 'Thank Merlin; he's stopped' she thought to her self 'keep asking questions he might calm down'. His eyes were still black with anger.

"Why, why did he kill them?"

"SHUT UP!" he saw the relived look in her eyes that he had stopped "the only thing i want to hear from you in begging".

Without another word he swiped his claw across the top of the stomach causing deep cuts to form and blood to start to drip down the rest of the front. Pain echoed through out the rest of her body. The force of the swipe caused Nymphadora to spin. She was now facing him. He whipped her again and again.
"AHHHHHHHHHH! STOP!" she couldn t take the pain anymore.

"HAHAHA good girl" he growled. He cracked the whip down on her back again. Her blood was running down the backs of her legs and dripping on the floor. The cuts from the whip where deep and very painful.

"AHHHHHHH" crack, he did it again "PLEASE STOP" and again "AHHHHHH" and again "NO! . After about another minute, Tonks was too weak and in too much pain to scream. "Please stop" she just whimpered

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That's when he stopped. He transfigured the whip back into his wand and untied the chains hanging Dora to the ceiling. She fell on the floor, in her puddle of fresh blood with a thud. She couldn t move or talk, she could barely breathe and was struggling to stay conscious. Tonks was covered from head to toe in cuts, bruses and blood.

Greyback lent over, she looked into his eyes they were back to their amber colour. He had taken all his anger out on the poor girl.

"See you later" he whispered in her ear before nibbling on her earlobe. He reised him wand at her. Her wrists and anckles were magicly bound. "Don t go anywhere" He just grinned at her as he walked out of the room.

The pain taking over her body was like no other she had felt before. Darkness started to take over her body. She was glad, it meant she would be free of the pain for a little while at least.

A/N Thankyou to everyone who has stuck with me so far (I really do hope its not too bad). i am really enjoying writing this (dose that make me a little messed up with al the torture and rape? oh well :S) and love that people out there are reading this.

IF you review i will send buckets loads of good karma your way and a dozen cookies (::)

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