A/N I own nothing wish i did though (if i did Tonks and Remus wouldn't have died. Just saying :D )

So i am now going to sit here holding my breath till someone tells me what they think. GO!

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Remus had no idea how long he had been here. It could have been weeks for all he knew. 'it can't be weeks' he told Himself, he hadn't transformed yet. To tell the truth he didn't care how long it had been or that he was in so much pain or his stab wounds might be infected. He just needed to see Tonks. Make sure she was still alive and not giving up hope.

All of a sudden the silence of the room was broken. He could hear yells, shouting, and banging. 'This is it their here they have come to save us' he hoped it was them, begged that James had found them in time to save his Dora. The Banging and shouting was getting louder. Remus wanted to lift his head to shout that he was in here, but he couldn't. His voice was horse from all the yelling he had done and he was too weak to lift his heavy head now. All he could do was wait till they found him.

Remus didn t have to wait long. The door burst open and the Weasley Twins ran it. Shouting
"REMUS! Guys he's in here we've found Remus." Sirius ran past the boys into the room. He dropped to his knees in front of the werewolf in the chair. He couldn't believe the state his best friend was in. Covered top to bottom in cuts, burns, bruises or blood he looked a complete mess.
"Padfoot" Remus whispered barley loud enough to hear.
"Oh Moony, what have you gotten yourself into this time." He said a little relived that his friend was conscious.
"i..im s..so..sorry p..padfoor." Moony said to his best friend.
Sirius brushed his wand over his magical bounds. When the magical force that was keeping Remus tied to the chair had gone, Remus slumped forward onto Sirius' Shoulder he was too weak to hold himself up. Kingsley and Arthur ran forward to help stop Remus falling to the floor.
Kingsley scooped Remus up in his arms. Remus grabbed Sirius' hand. "Find her Padfoot, please before s..she d.. Before it s too late."
Before Sirius got a chance to say anything else to his friend. A scream came from down the hall, it was Fleur. The order ran to her. Fleur, Ron and Ginny were stood in a doorway, eyes wide with fear and no color in their faces.
The other members looked in the doorway, to see what they saw. What they did see was worse than they could imagine.

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Nightmares over took Dora's subconscious. She couldn't get away from the monster. When she was awake she could smell him, feel him touching her and then when she was asleep she could see him, hear him laughing at her, grunting in her ear. Dora just wanted him to go away, she wanted to wash him off of her body but as she could barely breath let alone move, Tonks knew that was never going to happen. 'im never going to be clean, I'm dirty, Remus is never going to want to touch me again. I'm Greyback's whore now.' she told herself over and over again till she drifted off to sleep again, exhaustion taking over her body. If felt like the more she tried to stay away the harder it got, so eventually she gave in to the sleep.

Hours later fear overtook Dora's dream and she awoke with a jump, causing pain to overtake her yet again. She whimpered, winced and held her breath till it calmed.
Tonks lay there in a pool of blood staring at the bottle of water. Hours before she tried to reach it but it caused her to much pain, so it just stood there tormenting her.
Tonks eyes closed again, she was back in her nightmares he was there pressing his body against hers, his hand between her legs playing with her core.
Tonks heard a scream but it didn't come from her. Her eyes opened slightly. The sight she saw scared her. Dora thought her mind was starting to play tricks.
She didn't believe what she saw in front of her.

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"Fleur, Ginny, Ron what is it what s w..." Sirius looked in the direction they were looking "Oh my god TONKS!"
Sirius pushed the other out the way and ran up to his cousin landing in the pool of her blood.
"Tonks" he whispered but she didn't respond, she didn't move her glance from the door,
"Dora, can you hear me?" Sirius said in a louder voice but still he got no response. "Nymphadora" he said this time shaking she shoulder slightly.
This brought Tonks back down to earth and she locked eyes with Sirius.
If she could have said something she would but she thought if she made any kind of unnecessary movement or tried to talk she would pass out.
Sirius pushed her shoulder slightly so she would roll on her back. 'Mad-Eye' hobbled up behind Sirius and both men got a full look at some of Dora s injuries. In her head Tonks screamed in pain.
Dora tried to say something but nothing came out. 'Mad-Eye' saw her mouth move. He looked at her pail face and wanted to rip out Greyback's heart and feed it to him.
"shhhhh it's ok little one your safe now and so is Remus. We're going to take you home." 'Mad-Eye' assured her.
He pointed his wand at the chains round her ankle's to remove them and put a hand on Sirius shoulder. He hadn't been able to take his eyes away from the scratched on her abdomen, but 'Mad-Eye' touch brought him out of it.
"Can you carry her Sirius?" 'Mad-Eye' asked.
"Erm..er y..yeah" he stuttered. Sirius went to put one of his arms under her knees and the other under her shoulders. He had hardly touched her when she let out a whimper and an inward scream.
"I'm sorry Tonks I'm sorry. i..i don't no." he stumbled. He had never acted this way before.
"Sirius we need to move NOW!" he growled the last part.
"Ok" he paused and turned to Tonks and said "listen little one this is going to hurt a lot and i am really sorry, but we have to get you out of here."

He put his arms under her body again "on the count of three ok, ready" Sirius held his breath. "one," He steadied himself "two," Tonks Squeezed her eyes closed, and waited for the pain to overtake her "THREE", Sirius lifter the bleeding women to his body. She screamed out in pain. She didn t think she had it in her to scream anymore but then again she never thought she would be in this much pain ever again.
She could feel darkness take over her body and she welcomed it. Dora's body went limp in Sirius' arms.
"Tonks wake up, please look at me, please." he begged the unconscious witch he was holding shaking her slightly.
"She unconscious" said Mcgonnagal as she appeared beside him and rested two fingers on Dora s bruised neck checking for her pulse.
"Maybe that's the best thing for her right now, this was she's not hurting as much, let's go". Sirius agreed and almost ran to the stairs where the others were waiting for them.

Mcgonnagal and 'Mad-Eye' stood at the front of the group while everyone else took up the back with Sirius and Kingsley, holding the two unconscious bodies in the middle. When they reached the bottom of the stairs there was no one round. It was deserted. They all ran for the door to the disapparation points

A/N well?...hmmmm ok well i will just have to wait for reviews. when i started writing after this point there would only be a few chapters left till it was done but my muse jumped into gear again and i have thought of some other stuff so keep reading to find out what heppens next.

AJ x P.S im going blue ;) (if you read the first A/N you know what im talking about)