hey everyone this is the first official chapter yay!
Don't worry about jake raping nessie that's what happened to captured girls in
this time period that's why I added the part about the soulmates being trapped
by the ideals of their time.
Chapter 3: life as they knew it
Renesmee cullen was a young women age
seventeen. Her parents Isabella and Edward, they were english merchants who came
to the new world to elope. The cullen family was quite wealthy and had the
biggest house in town, they even had guards stationed outside to protect them
during indian raids, even though no large scale raids had happened in almost
twenty years. Renesmee was a beautiful girl with long curly hair of a dark rich
caramel and deep chocolate eyes. She had a slender waist with wide hips and a
large bust. Her face was equally as beautiful renesmee had high regal looking
cheeks a small aristocratic nose her eyes were huge surrounded by thick dark
lashes and her lips were petite yet plump and shell pink. All in all she was the
epitome of the perfect seventeenth century woman and would definately marry
well. You might think with all her money and beauty she'd be spoiled, but she
was kind and charitable her parents had raised her well. Her only flaw was that
she was plagued by nightmares almost everynight. She'd see fire and hear
screaming some nights others she'd be running through the woods but always there
was a Quileute chasing her it was her biggest fear that Jamestown would be
attacked. She never remembered her nightmares for more than a few minutes but
they always left her with a pounding heart and coiled grandparents
Renee and Charles we're quite concerned with her nightmares. They were staying
with her while Renesmee's parents were away on buisness to England. Currently
Renesmee Cullen was in the stables her maid Farcia having just helped her into
her riding frock. Renesmee had finished all of her lessons for the day and all
she had left was to practice the piano after dinner, so she had time to relax
and ride. Farcia helped her onto her horse, a small mare with lots of energy
named poppet, and off she went galloping into the well worn trails for a brief
reprive of life.
Jacob quickly crouched down upon hearing a
twig snap he looked around and spotted the source of the noise a mother bear and
her cubs across the river he smiled at the family of bears and continued to make
his way down the river to jamestown he and a few other of the best warriors were
scouting the village seeing how lax the security was. So far it appeared as
though the raid would be able to continue as planned. Jacob was all too happy
when sam announced they would be doing their first full scale raid since before
jacob was born. You see Jacob had a grudge against the english he was captured
when he was a child and used as a slave in Plymouth he was beaten and starved
until his will was broken but it never did break when he was 8 he escaped and
returned to the Quileutes but upon his return he discovered his mother and
father had died just one moon ago shot wile fishing in their canoe. His father
was the leader but when Jacob was kidnapped he named sam as the heir to the
throne so to speak. Jacob allowed sam to continue his rule he was a good leader
and Jacob had no patience for anything but fighting and hunting but if Jacob
ever did want to rule the tribe would obey without question. When they neared
the village to their glee there were only a few guards out in the night. He and
his blood brother Quil and Embry ran back to tell Sam the good news.
alright first official chapter yay review!