I just wanted to state a few things that I have read in the reviews. A Naruto is stronger but not supper strong. He only scared the person in the chunnin exam, garra and a little bit of sanray and yugito with killer intent. Killer intent is a combo of power and heavy emotions. Naruto life was a living hell. He has emotions in spades. He is stronger fisically then original but right now he is not as strong as lee or gai. His speed, besided the flying thundergod that he will only use in certian events he is not actually fast. His body can take more damage and has more chakra then normal but his control of it is the one major difference. He does not have a second mind in his body working agianst him for control. As for jutsu he does not know an ungodly amount like kakashi does. he only know about 12-15 doton, kaiton, fuuton, suiton, jutsu and probably 2 current raiton jutsu. He has about 5 creation that he created from his becoming a demon. Example would be what he did to the book and nin info cards of kabuto. His kenjutsu skills are low to mid chunnin. His one factor that makes him seem stronger is he has experience in battle and knows how to use what he gots great.
as for haku being in the story, i am currently undecided. it wont be for a time in the story because I have plans on her to have a relationship with someone, weather he lives or dies I dont know yet but if she is involved she will be like a rebound. I dont want to make her a major part of this story yet if at all. keep voting and include who you might want her to be with. I am currently thinking garra, kankuro, neji, or kibaif its kiba expect haku to be kinky on the rebound
In the original story orochimaru and aktsuki i dont feel like looking for correct spelling write now for notes were the main problem. They will be in this one but with one major difference Iwa and possibly 1 or 2 other countries will have a big play in this story.
The mater of shizune, I never said she was Tsunade daughter. I have Arashi is Tsunade/Jaraiya son secretly that they hid in orphanage from thier enemies. Shizune was Arashi wife and yes I know there was about a 10 year age difference but its not uncommon.
I know I make bad spelling/grammer mistakes and every story I right I am trying to get better. I am looking for a beta but have not found 1 yet.
As for the Sasuke bashing I am doing I do have my reasons. 1 he acts like hes god in the original story, 2 in my story he originally killed several of naruto and Ino friends and attempted to kill them. 3 in the original story sasuke was treated like a king and treated everyone like shit, I hate that, and lastly 4, any man who turns down as many women as he had after him even if they were fangirls has to be at least bi and and most gay. i am not saying being gay is bad or not but what I am saying is that he is just to unemottional at life besides his hate for his brother.