Here's the first chapter of my story. I know some of you are a little confused right now, but it's supposed to be confusing so you'd want to know what's going on. What happened in my prologue isn't how you think it is. I'm gonna start early in the story, that back there was like around the middle or something. Review please!!
It was a sunny day in Amity Park. You then see in an ally by a park is a group of Chinese (I don't mean to offend any of you if you are Chinese, but I couldn't think of another group). They were speaking in a Chinese language (I don't know Chinese, so I'll just put it in English, but if you know that language, you can translate these for me, that'd be nice).
"So what's the plan?" Asked a guy with a red and black shirt.
"I'm still thinking," said the chief who was a girl with a pink tank top and brown shorts.
"What we need to do is get the information," told a guy with a white muscle shirt and black pants.
"Are you kidding, those Fentons won't give us a thing," said the guy with the red and black shirt.
"Then we need a weakness," thought the chief.
"There's no way we can get the wife, she's a third degree black belt," told the guy with the red and black shirt.
"Who said anything about that bitch. I was thinking of getting one of their kids," told the chief.
"Oh, and how are we supposed to do that?" Asked the guy with the white muscle shirt and black pants.
The group then saw a kid who wore red, white, and blue around fourteen years old in his freshman years. His hair was black and springy and looked so wimpy. What no one ever knew, was that he secretly was a ghostly super hero with cool superpowers beyond anyone's imagination. Pretty much his whole family was beyond weird including himself, but he was ok with it as long as no one knew his secret besides his sister and his two best friends Sam and Tucker. The Chinese group smiled with an idea that would change Danny's life for good.
"How bout we take him?" Asked the guy with the red and black shirt, "he's so helpless, it's not like he'll fight back or outsmart us."
"Good idea," grinned the chief as they set up the plan. Little did they know, Danny was only half human.
Danny was on his way to the door when he heard a sound that you hear in Cowboy movies when they get their guns ready. He felt a tube on his back as his eyes turned to see a Chinese woman with a gun on his back. He wasn't that scared since if she ever shot that pistol that he could just faze that bullet though his body, but since he had a secret identity, he decided to act like he wasn't a ghost at all unless it was an emergency. 'Go and walk home today, it's safer, you won't be aimed at Danny. Yeah, listen to an older sister who is proven wrong for the thousandth time in a row,' thought Danny to himself. This was definately not gonna be Danny's day.
"Ok, who are you and what do you want with me?" Asked Danny.
"Just your parents' information to plan our next bomb on the capital," grinned the Chinese woman.
"Wait a second, you're a terrorist," shocked Danny.
"Got that right boy, now come with me or you're dead," commanded the Chinese woman.
"I knew I should've stayed home today," said Danny as he was pushed into a car, "ok, and my sister says my room is a mess."
"Just get in the car you little basterd," ordered the Chinese woman as Danny was pushed into the car and it drove out.
"This is probably the worst day of my life besides Vlad marrying my mom," muttered Danny to himself.