Years Behind 12.
Hi everyone, I'm sorry about the really slow update. I'm doing my gcse's this year, so I haven't had time, and I've been to hospital (scowls). This chapter isn't going to be very long, but I am going to finish this story!!! I am determined to. So I hope you like this, and I'm starting to re write the whole thing. Hopefully the next chapter will be up very soon, before next year definitely, and it will be very long, so be prepared to sit and read for a while. Well nice to be writing again
Olivia.
EB
I have not spoken to Mr Darcy for two days, not that I've noticed. He seemed to be avoiding me, not that I'm particularly wounded by this. I hoped this scheme of his had not gone to his head about finding me bachelors. He was just going to be disappointed as I intended to refuse them all, as only the deepest of love will induce me into matrimony. But I suppose I could humour him by at least seeing a couple, and showing some sort of interest. Not that I would try and make him jealous, not at all. He wouldn't get jealous because he just sees me as an annoyance, which I'm fine with………. Of course I am, Mr Darcy has not effect on me whatsoever.
Oh if only that were true
FD
Elizabeth……..Elizabeth Bennet, was definitely going to be the death of me. She was all I could think about, all I could talk about. Miss Bingley and Miss Pointer have certainly noticed that, but when I "accidentally" told them about the list I was doing to find Miss Bennet a husband they seemed delighted. Although I failed to mention that I was on the list, right at the very top.
AB
I was a fool to think that Elizabeth Bennet was competition; I really thought that she had "captured" Darcy. I must admit I was rather impressed; she seemed to act like she had no interest in him whatsoever, and as if she had no interest in his ten thousand a year, and his estate in Derbyshire. Ha! What a joke!! Who could resist that??
Well now it seems I have absolutely nothing to worry about Darcy has no intention of making her his wife, he obviously thought about making her his mistress, but he has changed his mind. Probably because he has been introduced to me, I don't like to brag but really men do fall at my feet. I knew Darcy would be a challenge but it seems he was easier than I thought he would be. Now all I have to do is wait for is for Darcy to ask me to become his wife, and I will of course accept immediately. I do not care if he wishes to take the likes of Elizabeth Bennet as his mistress after we are married. As long as I'm the one they call Mrs Darcy.
GD
I needed to tell some one about Mr Good Listener, I really did. Then I had a perfect idea on who I could ask.
I knocked gently on the door, I heard enter and I quietly let myself in
"Elizabeth?"
"Please call me Lizzy, Georgiana. How may I help you?"
"Eliz….Lizzy, there are a few things I need to discuss with you! I know this might seem a bit forward as I have not known you for long, but I do desperately need your advice and guidance"
"Certainly Georgiana, whatever you wish to tell me I will listen"
I did not know were to begin, so much had happened. So much I had to say, I slowly took a deep breath and I let it all out.
FD
I needed to check on Elizabeth to see if she was alright, I had missed her these past few days and longed to see her.
I took a deep breath and I was about to knock on her door when suddenly I heard
"Eliz….Lizzy, there are a few things I need to discuss with you! I know this might seem a bit forward as I have not known you for long, but I do desperately need your advice and guidance"
Georgiana was going to Elizabeth for advice???? Why could she not come to me!!! I knew I should not listen, but I could not help it I needed to know what the matter was!
"Certainly Georgiana, whatever you wish to tell me I will listen"
I smiled at the sound of her beautiful voice, and I eagerly listened to what she had to say, I momentarily forget about Georgiana. That was until I heard the things she said, and they shocked and worried me to the core.
Who was Mr Good Listener!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I know very short, as you've probably all guessed it the next chapter is going to be about what is said. But is it? Actually as I am so excited about writing it I'm going to start it now, some secrets will be revealed.
To my reviewers
THANK YOU ALL SO MUCH!!!
Dolphindreamer Thank you very much for your review! It was very kind of you to say so. I promise that Georgiana is going to take a very active role in the story especially from the next chapter onwards.
TanzSavino Thank you very much!! Mr Good Listener is going to be in many chapters from now. Maybe in the next chapter will learn all about him. I hope you liked this chapter, even if it is very short
missusmesser Thanks a lot, I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter. I hope you enjoy this one
k8bob8 Thank you very much for the review, I know Miss Pointer is very annoying. Not that I have based her on anybody cough cough
Lucy65 Thank you very much!!! Yes Abigail and Caroline should be shipped off to America, it may actually happen
Arica, Princess of Rivendel... Thank you!! I'm glad you did, I hope you enjoyed this chapter
Mrs. Dom Masbolle Thank you very much for your review! The answers to all your questions will be answered very soon! I am sorry I took so long to update
xXx-dee-xXx Thanks so much for your review!! It was very very nice of you to say so!! Yes Abigail Pointer is the type of person to try and compromise herself, as you will soon find out. Ah don't condemn Mr Good Listener as an idiot just quite yet, there is more to him than meets the eye
Pippabelle Thanks for saying so, and I completely understand were you're coming from. I'm working on the first few chapters, I can't bare to read them as they make me cringe. I'll never know why people decided to carry on and read this. Yes I'm looking for a beta at the moment, thanks for your words of advice.
aquamum Thank you very much for your review! Sorry it took so long to update! Lol yeah I'm looking forward to writing about the characters Darcy pushes Lizzy's way. I won't of course be basing any of them on any of my family members……..mmh yeah.
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So once again I apologize for the long update, and the shortness of the chapter, and how disappointing it is. I bet nobody reads it now haha. Anyway please review if you do read this, it would be much appreciated. I'm now off to do a few things, and then I'm coming back to start the next long chapter.
Thank you