Hey pplz this is my first NCIS fic so review with opinions and ideas. Flames will be used to roast but constructive will be used to make the story even better! Plz of review!
Disclaimer: Sadly I do not own N.C.I.S or Maximum Ride *Sniffle* If you can get them for me I shall give you a cookie!
Max's P.O.V.
Blood dripping from my wounds, I flew steadily east. I was somewhere over Virginia, ah the happy memories. I think I was over Washington D.C. finally I saw a secluded alley to land in. I stumbled around to the front of the building. Through the blood streaming into my eyes I made out N.C.I.S. I saw two people run up looking worried. "Help! This girl needs help!" The younger man yelled. The older man looked at me and said, "Don't worry you're safe now." Then I blacked out.
When I woke up I was lying on a couch and a red-haired woman was looking at me with concern. "Are you alright?" She asked looking worried. Wow this is the first time so many people have been worried about little old me. "I'm fine." I replied, trying to sit up. I winced. "O.K. maybe not so fine but I can't stay." Her brow furrowed. "I'm afraid you have to. We think you have a few broken ribs and you have several bad cuts and bruises. By the way I'm Jenny the director of N.C.I.S." Jenny finished with a small smile. "N.C.I.S." I said thoughtfully. "It stands for-." "Naval Criminal Investigative Services." I finished for her. I think I saw that on T.V. somewhere.
"Yes. Now you know my name can I know yours?" She said looking at me. "Max. Just Max." "How did you get so beat up?" She asked finally. Great more questions. "I was being chased by some very powerful, dangerous people and they took my family and knocked me out." She looked at me sympathetically. "And you're how old? Fourteen? Fifteen?" "Fourteen, but I'm stronger then you think," I refused to say more, at this time I can't let on about the, hmm I don't know, THE WINGS!!!! "I don't doubt that." Jenny said with a smile. "But here at N.C.I.S. we have the best security. You'll be perfectly safe here." She reassured me. "You haven't met the people after me." I mumbled sarcastically. "What?" She asked curiously. "Nothing." I said quickly. "Also I'm trusting my best agent to protect you." She said encouragingly. "I think I could protect myself." I said a little uneasy. "Just wait until you meet him." She said looking a little resigned. She pressed a button on her phone. "Could you send him in please?" She asked. "Right away Ma'am." Came the reply. A minute later the doors opened and the man who was with me earlier walked in. "Max, meet Special Agent Leroy Jethro Gibbs."
So love it hate and can anyone tell me the name of Jenny's secretary? Plz review!
~Silentflier