Hello again!
So I'd say for the first chapter of my first story it went pretty well. Thanks so much for reading, guys!
To my reviewers…
AnimeInTheBasement: I shall hurry to get the rest of the chapters up. I think I have two or three more chapters after this actually written before I have to tear myself away from my notebook lol
Libby16: Thank you for your critique, it really makes me happy when people actually talk about the writing versus just "Oh the plot was nice" (Not that that doesn't make me happy too lol) I'll watch out for more mistakes = )
Woodswolf: You make me happy. That's all there is to it. You make me smile lol. I think I have an idea what character you were talking about but I'm not sure. I'll try not to disappoint you ; )
Anyways as the saying goes: On with the show = )
(Still don't own Spirited Away…)
Haku was flying back to the bath house in his dragon form. He had been off on another mission for Yubaba and he was tired. As he flew he let his mind wander to a time when he had been truly happy. The time when Chihiro was with him. He remembered the way her hand felt in his when they said goodbye. He still remembered the promise he'd made to her… and he still intended to keep it.
It was getting late, about eight o'clock, and it was raining when Haku landed in his room and turned into his human form. He walked back to the window he'd just flown through and stared into the rain. He was about to close the window when he thought he saw a figure coming across the bridge. He caught a glimpse of a white and green shirt and pink shorts but banished the thought from his head. Chihiro couldn't be here, he was just imagining things.
"Guess I miss her more than I thought…" he mumbled sleepily.
Just then the foreman's bell rang.
"What now?" Haku wondered as he left his room and headed towards the first floor.
Okay this chapter was short… a lot shorter than I thought it was lol. I'll hurry and try to post the next one soon, but that one's comparatively longer… I promise I'll get to some more exciting stuff soon, guys.
The next chapter follows Chihiro again, and I finally bring in some of the other characters from the movie. I hope I can keep them all in character instead of making them out of wack (^_^')
Anyways Thank you all for reading! Have a great day = )
-ArgentSterling
