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Chapter 6 – Elena's Mr. Lonely
"oh Thomas" my love said with great frustration. She said my NAME!
SHE SAID MY NAME!
"so..how is the book" Nathaniel asked
She laughed and said "so far the main character said he is a simple man, no statues are build for him..he has only loved" That was like in the first paragraph of the first page of the Notebook. I smiled and the song that Elena calls me by started. It is Lonely by Akon. I call her Special Ed and she called me Mr. Lonely.
This is such a funny song..it starts off with like a child singing. It starts off like this.
Lonely
I'm Mr. Lonely
I have nobody
For my owwnnn
I'm so lonely
I'm Mr. Lonely
I have nobody
For my owwnnn
I'm so lonely
They both laughed, I felt their happiness. I just smiled and shook my head. This is like Elena's song for me. My nickname is Mr. Lonely hahaha
Then the child's voice ends and it becomes a serious song and I can relate to it.
Yo
this one here goes out to all my playas out there man ya know
got to have one good girl who always been there man
like took all the bullshit
then one day she cant take it no more
and decides to leave...
Yeah...
I woke up in the middle of the night
and I noticed my girl wasn't by my side
coulda sworn I was dreamin
for her I was Feenin
so I hadda take a little ride
back tracking ova these few years
tryna figure out wat I do to make it go bad
cuz ever since my girl left me
my whole life came crashin and I'm so...
Lonely (so lonely)I'm Mr. Lonely (Mr. Lonely)
I have nobody (I have nobody)
For my own (to call my own_ girl)
"he has Elena..he is not lonely" I heard Esmeralda say. She is right, I have a new best friend that is not normal…she says good thing because being ordinary is boring. Elena's mind set for you. I laughed.
Once again, Esmeralda sent hate my way. I smiled and this song came on. "Knock you down"
I love this song. It is fast beat and I think Nathaniel would like it.
Heh, not again
Ohh, this ain't supposed to happen to me
Keep rockin', and keep knockin'
Whether you Louis Vuitton it up or Reebokin'
You see the hate, that they're servin' on a platter
So what we gon' have, dessert or disaster?
I never thought I'd be in love like this
When I look at you my mind goes on a trip
Then you came in, and knocked me on my face
Feels like in I'm a race
But I already won first place
I never thought I'd fall for you as hard as I did
(As hard as I did, yeah)
You got me thinkin' bout our life our house and kids, yeah
Every mornin' I look at you and smile
'Cause boy you came around and you knocked me down
Knocked me down
"I wonder if he will feel the same if he finds out I can never have children again" Esmeralda said with sadness. Off course I know, you told me in the hotel but you don't remember…Why would that change anything
"I guess Elena can give him children" Nathaniel said.
WAIT WHAT! Well Elena will have children, because of me but but..no. What is Esmeralda thinking?
Sometimes love comes around
(Love comes around love comes around)
And it knocks you down
Just get back up
When it knocks you down
(Knocks you down)
Sometimes love comes around
(Love comes around)
And it knocks you down
Just get back up
When it knocks you down
(Knocks you down)
"move, I need to use the restroom" Esmeralda said really quickly
I opened my eyes and saw, she looked at me for a second and she had tears in her eyes…what what why…
"please..don't let it get to you. I am sorry Esmeralda. I never wanted to hurt you like that." Nathaniel said and Esmeralda walked away. He said after her " Elena's children will be hideous" Nathaniel begged as she walked away.
WHAT?
I am confused. Nathaniel turned around and glared at me. In a second he pulled off one of my head phones. "Listen..what do you think you are doing?" he asked in a whisper
"listening to music that Elena gave me, all these songs are about her and me" I lied
"well …just. My muneca is hurt because she..she" he chocked up but continued "she can never hav…forget it" he said and sat back down.
What? I know what you are trying to say...but why is she upset?
I put my headphone back in and it was the end of the song.
We, were never meant to be baby we just happen
So please, don't mess up the trick, hey young world I'm the new slick rick
They say I move too quick, but we can't let the moment pass us
Let the hourglass pass right into ashes
As the song ended..Esmeralda walked out, her head was down. She is so beautiful. Nathaniel stood up but Esmeralda's head was down..Nathaniel lifted her chin and kissed her eyes that were closed. "I love you, please forgive me for causing you to not have any children" she said.
Esmeralda opened her eyes and I saw that her eyes were red, she had cried.
NO!
NO!
NO!
Another song started. El Perdedor. The loser..by Aventure. They sat down.