My fairytale, My colorful life Chapter 10: Day 3, It's The Classic One, a gakuen alice fanfic

~ My fairytale, My colorful life ~

"Once in a while, right in the middle of an ordinary life, love gives us a fairy tale"

- anonnymous -

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Mikan's a very normal highschool girl. Not popular, not genius, not too pretty or too ugly. She's someone behind the curtains and doesn't stand out much. Enemy : the popular, rich, smart, snobby and selfish Luna with huge façade in school. The guy : the oh-so-great Natsume Hyuuga, almost perfect he is, but not really interested in anything with the word 'school'. This story's trying to prove that friendship and love are the most beautiful colors in life, and how impossible fairytales can happen.

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"A loving heart is the beginning of all knowledge."

- Thomas Carlyl -

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Day 3, Monday

08 : 00 a.m. - Fashion Show

10 : 30 p.m. - Class Competition 2

01 : 30 p.m. - Collections Booth

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`Still Monday. Normal POV. Infirmary`

"Don't worry, she's not badly sick or things like that, I guess she's just tired." A nurse with a white uniform said with a smile to the young lad, but only receiving a deep sigh in return.

The nurse smiled again, knowing how worried he is about his friend, or maybe his girlfriend?

"Well then, since I know you won't disturb her sleep, I'll just leave you two here. I'll be in the front desk if any of you need me."

The raven haired lad nodded and muttered a thanks before the nurse closed the door.

Alice Academy's infirmary is not just an infirmary. The small one-floor building has a circle shape and uses glass for most of the walls, with about 10 rooms available for those who are sick, and 4 nurses to take care all of the patients. Also, the infirmary is completed with a small kitchen and complete medicines.

Apparently, there are only a few patients inside the building, including the young lad's friend.

He stared around the room where he's at, only finding one single-bed where she's sleeping peacefully, a small sofa, a chair, a table with a tray of drinks and medicines, a bunch of flowers in a vase, some cookies, and a quite large window on the other side of the room, not too close to the bed. In short, the room is really wide and comfortable with cream colored wallpaper.

He sighed again, then took the chair to sit next to the bed, and looked at the brunette who's sleeping peacefully on the bed. She looked a little pale, and dried tears are still visible on her cheeks. Natsume just stared at her with millions of unanswered questions inside his head, but he just stayed still and looked at her sleeping figure with regret.

After a while, he finally took a deep sigh and reached the bed. He pulled the blanket more until it covered her shoulder, then stood up and opened his cell phone, calling a number while walking to the window. The green forest's scenery greeted him, just when the other person on the phone answered the call.

"Ruka," Natsume quickly said before his friend got the chance to say anything, "tell Imai and her friends to go to the infirmary now."

Knowing there must be something wrong, Ruka immediately asked his childhood friend what could've happened.

Natsume closed his eyes and took a deep breath, "It's Mikan. I think she needs her friends."

`Mikan's POV`

My eyes felt really heavy, and my body refused to move since I'm feeling really comfortable. I must have been sleeping… on a soft bed, with fluffy pillows, and…

Wait… Bed?

The last thing I remembered was…

"-anything? What is the meaning of this, Hyuuga ?" It's Hotaru's voice. She's here?

"I told you, Imai-" Now it's Natsume's voice, what are they arguing about?

Okay, I really have to open my eyes. I tried to open them, but my eyes feel so heavy, and it feels like they're stuck together with glue. Just great.

"How can you don't know anything? It's been a long time since I saw her like this, so how can nothing happened ?"

"Darn it, Imai ! I told you already-" Natsume abruptly stopped talking. I can already guess it coming. Why? Cause my eyelids are starting to open, and I know he noticed it. Don't know why, I just know that he will notice it.

"Mikan ! You're finally awake !" Nonoko chirped in delight, when I was just adjusting my eyes to the light, and I grinned.

"Hey stupid girl ! You made us worried like hell !" This time, Permy said, but I can see the concern in her eyes.

"Oh gosh, Mikan, we even thought you might be sleeping for days !" Anna exclaimed with a worried expression.

"There are price to be paid for making us worried about you." Hotaru said with no expression, although I knew that she's worried, well, seeing her previous conversation with Natsume. So I grinned again, "Thanks a lot, guys ! Sorry for making you worried."

I looked around the room to find Natsume leaning at the closed door, looking at the window. I looked back at the girls, and Permy said quickly, "Also, the other boys are outside the infirmary, they don't want to crowd this room."

I smiled at her, and she nodded in return, she knew that she just answered my unspoken question.

I looked at Natsume again, and he's looking at me now. And…. I did the only thing that crossed my mind. Avoiding his look and put my head down. Yeahh, it's the only thing I can think of. I don't know what to say to him! Come on, think! What should I do? Maybe I should thank him, or-

"You're fine?" A deep voice rang in my ears, making me lift my head and smile at the owner of the voice.

"Tch. Stop smiling like an idiot and just answer my question." He said again with annoyance, I laugh a bit and said in return, "I'm perfectly fine, thank you Natsume."

He nodded at my statement, and replied, "I'm taking my leave now, school's almost over, and you better already back in your healthy mode tomorrow."

I sighed slowly, well, I also hope I can get better. And, I think I should said thank you more properly to him tomorrow, he sure did save my life back then. I couldn't imagine what would happen if he wasn't there at the field?

"She will. I'm making sure of that." Hotaru said, replying his words, and I just grinned at the both of them.

Natsume bid us goodbye, then went out of the room.

The second the door's closed, Permy heaved a long sigh, and asked, "Do you want to tell us what happened?"

I placed my pillows up straight, and lay my back against it. Then, I closed my eyes and said in one breath, trying to deny my own words, "It's him."

Anna looked confused, so I continued with a small voice, trying to hold my tears, "He's here. Shigure is here..I met him, an-and he-"

Suddenly, I felt warm drops of water are falling down on my cheek when I remembered what he said back then. Nonoko started to soothe my back, and I end up hugging her, letting my tears fall down as they pleased.

Then, without a doubt, the scene back at the afternoon started to play in my mind as I told them what happened.

`Natsume's POV`

"She's a crybaby, and her friends are ready to be the shoulders to cry on. You, of all people, should already know that." Ruka said, but I just ignored him.

"Don't worry too much, Nat. There's nothing you can do now, just wait until she's willing to tell you what happened." Yuu continued, but I just shook my head.

Hell, how can I just leave her alone and do nothing?

"Man, there's nothing you can do, just drop it. She wouldn't like to see you like this, worrying too much, would she?" said Kitsu.

I stayed silent, until I realized something clicked.

There was a certain someone, who put up a threat that she will hurt Mikan, isn't there?

Could it be that she's the one behind this? The reason Mikan's crying like crazy? Hell.

"Damn that woman." I hissed, and immediately run towards the Alice East Building, where the Collections Booth is being held. The rest of the guys looked confused, but no, I'll tell them later.

'You'll regret you didn't obediently fulfill my wish'

I heard my friends called me, but I keep on running on my tracks. I can't believe this, I can't believe I didn't realize it until it clicked, damn it.

'I have the trump card at this…game'

Damn it, how could I forget ? I finally reached the building in 3 minutes, and my eyes quickly searched for a certain girl, but unfortunately, she's nowhere to be seen. Heck, even her followers aren't here, tch.

I immediately went to the backstage of the fashion show, maybe she's there.

The crew let me in without a doubt, since I am one of their models anyway. I stroll around the make up tables, chairs, racks of costumes and outfits, and….she's here. With her mother. Not good.

She's whispering something in her mother's ears, and her mother smiled mischievously, and hurriedly went outside with pure excitement in her eyes.

Wonder what happened? That old lady didn't even realize I'm here.

"Awww, if it isn't Natsume Hyuuga ! Coming to see me, babe?" she purred and hugged me in a sudden. God, when the heck did she stand in front of me? I should've keep more distance.

I shook her off, and said, "Cut the crap, Luna, what did you do to her?"

She let out a chuckle, "Her? Ohoho, I know you will come here sooner or later. Well, how is she? Have you gave her my pity? Has she been crying for hours now? Is-"

Without thinking twice, I said coldly, cutting her words, "Shut up bitch. Dare to hurt her again, then you're going down, you sick woman."

She gasped at my words, and she looked pissed off, "Well…since I already predicted you'll respond like that, I won't be mad, but or your information, I'm not the one who personally hurt her, you know? I'm only the mastermind in this game, I'm not the player."

I twitched my eyebrows, and she smirked, "You seem to not know a thing, do you Nat-su-me? Of course she didn't tell you what happened, haha, sooo predictable."

"You tell me what happened." I demanded, and she laughed again. Damn, this is pissing me off.

She finally replied, "Well, before that, have you changed your mind? Have you finally decided to choose me over poor Mikan?"

I clenched my fists, and said coldly, "Never."

She looked unsatisfied, and continued, "Hmm..Really? But you already know that if you do so, your pathetic brunette will always be hurt?"

"She won't." I said again.

Luna looked at me evilly, then turned her head to her back, and said, "Did you hurt her badly, Shigure? I'm expecting you not to fail, you know."

I twitched my eyebrows, who is she talking to? Who's Shigure? And is this the guy who hurt Mikan ?

With that, a figure came out behind the curtains behind her. He has dark brown hair with green eyes, and he probably has the same height as me, and he's smirking as if he won something.

"Hey Luna, I made her cry already, isn't it enough?" he said with a smirk at her, while Luna just replied with a boring tune, "For now."

I looked at him for a few seconds, I know I've seen him before, but where?

He suddenly realized that I'm here, as he said, "Woah, Natsume Hyuuga right? I haven't seen you for, like 2 years !"

…. Right…..

I didn't reply him, and he noticed, "Come on, you didn't forget your friend Shigure Takashi, right?"

My eyes widen at his statement, "You're a Takashi." I said coldly. Damn, so he's the son of that guy's company?

He smirked, and said, "Well, yes I am. And maybe you won't like me much, but relax, my company won't crush your company anytime soon, your corporation could live longer."

I looked at him with disbelieve, isn't his company who's famous of cheating all the time? Well, he's the one who should be worried now.

"Oh right, Natsume Hyuuga. Did you grow a liking to that pathetic brunette? Well, I never knew you like cheap products." He continued with a devilish smile.

I glared at him and said, "What do you mean?" I knew something's off here.

He laughed and said, "Well, she used to be my toy, but unfortunately, that naughty girl found out that she was just a toy."

My eyes widen the second he started saying those words. I can't believe it, he knew Mikan? And he's toying her ?

"What did you do to her?" I repeated my words harshly, and he just chuckled.

"Let's see, let's take things shortly, eh? Actually, around 3 years ago, when she was in her nerdy geeky mode and not interesting, I decided to play some bets with my friends to win her heart, and I did. Well, of course I did won the bet." He said playfully, and I continued to glare at him. He will go to hell later.

I bet that stupid girl didn't realize this wolf is wearing some fancy sheep's clothing, tch, that baka.

"Done with your story?" I said icily. I really want to step on that guy's nerve. And how can Mikan even like him? This sure is pissing me off.

He laughed at my sarcasm question, and said, "Jealous much, Hyuuga? Well, we actually have the same taste in girls, huh?"

I gritted my teeth, "Shut up. I don't sleep with bitches, unlike you."

He chuckled and replied, "Well, it just means you're not taking any advantages at all from your popularity and money, tsk, what a waste."

I just shook my head, and said, "So, Mikan's being troubled for almost 3 years because you dumped her?"

Hmm, it's just strange. Maybe Mikan did like this Shigure guy a lot, but people break up, right? And this break up makes her become…traumatized?

Shigure looked at me in disbelieve, "Hah ! Do you think that girl is the type who would be grieving over a small break up? Do you even actually know her?"

I squint my eyes a bit, "Of course she won't."

He continued again, "Well, but before I decided to dump her, I realized that she…actually has the potentials, so I turned the ugly duckling into a beautiful swan in one night. And of course, my plan was a success. Man, you gotta see how gorgeous she was." He said again with a smirk and looked really drowned in lust. Shit.

Seriously, I get a bad feeling.

Suddenly, Luna laughed loudly and said, "Well, this is getting to the good part ! Well, Natsume sweety, this story will prove that she's not worth as your woman, for she couldn't satisfy you ! Haha, I hope you will get into the right track later, where I can pleasure you every second, honey."

No shit, I feel like I'm going to puke, while Shigure just smiled, "Luna does able to pleasure men. Unlike that Sakura girl, tch."

I looked at him with my eyes widen in disbelieve, "Did you just said you slept with Mi-"

"Nahhh, it failed, since she resisted to be completely mine, I forced her, and, unfortunately failed. Tsk, I still couldn't believe it. That girl was almost mine, but she got away, that unlucky shrimp ! Well, the good point is.. I'm now taking revenge on her, and she will always be scared of me, the guy who just almost raped her, haha, isn't that nice?" he continued in a light tune, and I froze.

"And also, you should've joined me that night ! That's right Hyuuga, you missed all the fun ! You could've seen her crying, begging for me to let her go, her dress got ripped everywhere, and, oh ! Do you know that she never kissed anyone? Hah ! And pity me, I didn't even manage to steal her first kiss ! And-"

Without any second thought, I punched him in the face, and I can see him yelped in pain, while Luna let out a small shriek and immediately checked his face.

"W-why-why you ! How dare you punch me ! You'll regret it, you-" Before he cursed me, I quickly snapped, "You deserve it, bastard. Don't you dare go near Mikan anymore."

I started to take my leave, but Luna interrupted, "Wait up, Natsume ! You still choose that filthy-"

"Shut up. Or go to hell. Don't you dare touch her too, slut." I snapped at Luna too. With that, I quickly get away from the backstage, far away as I could, trying to clear my mind.

This, is becoming like a soap opera scene on the movies, just ecstatic, tsk.

`Mikan's POV. Infirmary`

I nervously looked around the room, wondering what will happen soon.

Suddenly, this woman coughed to get my attention, and I immediately looked at her.

"Erm, so….there's something that you want to talk about, miss Lucy?" I asked politely and carefully.

Lucy Koizumi smiled at me, and no, I can see it's not a warm smile. Not at all.

"Why, actually, yes dear." Her voice was dipped in honey, but I can just grimaced at the fakeness. "I heard from the nurse that you're not feeling well?"

I nodded while fidgeting my fingers, so she continued, "I believe you're better now?"

I nodded again, and she smiled in satisfaction, "Good, very good. You see, as the…host of the events right here, I also have to care about the students."

I just gave her a small forced smile. I think she's up to something.

With that, her face changed, and her sweet-sweet atmosphere is replaced with a cold glare.

"Mikan Sakura, what an irony. So you are Mikan Sakura." She said with disappointment.

I twitched my eyebrows, completely not understand what's the meaning of her words.

She got up from her chair, and looked down on me, who's sitting on the bed.

"I thought you would be more…..appealing so you could get that boy Hyuuga's attention, tsk. What a shame, Luna is way better than you." She said while glaring at me.

…..What ?

My mouth started to part, but I couldn't find my voice, "..Wh-what?"

Did she seriously just say that?

"You didn't hear me? Well, let me tell you once again, you filthy girl. Stay away from Natsume Hyuuga. You don't deserve him, my daughter, Luna, is so much better than you, so shoo. Get lost." She continued, while I looked at her in disbelieve.

"Well, I couldn't do that." I said confidently, hell, who is she ordering me around? Like mother like daughter, jeez, I'm soo, tired of their lectures.

She looked unhappy and said, "And why is that?"

I thought for a second, then decided to say, "You are in no place to order me around."

With that, I unconsciously let out a smirk, and she looked shocked, "Wh-why you ! You insolent brat ! Ho-how dare you said that to me, the beautiful, rich, and famous fashion designer in Japan !"

I let out a sigh, this has to end soon. I'm sick of Luna's bad doings, and now, she even sent her freaking mother to scold me, ha-ha. Well, I guess I've given that bitch a lot of time to change her attitude, but it seemed that she will never change, oh well.

"So what if you're a fashion designer? It has nothing to do with our topic." I replied her coldly.

She was taken aback, but immediately regain her composure, and said, "W-well, I am famous, popular, rich, beautiful ! So a filthy girl like you should know your place before talking back to me !"

"I don't care." I said again. Okayy, this is actually considered rude to talk like this to older people, but heck, who cares? I'm sick of the Koizumi family.

As if on cue, there's a knock on the door, and the nurse came in.

"Excuse me, but the headmaster is searching for Miss Lucy Koizumi, he said it's about tomorrow's event." The nurse said.

I looked at the woman in front of me, and she huffed in anger. Then, without another word, she stormed out of the room, followed by the nurse.

Oh. My. God.

Finally she's gone for good.

"Hey Mikan ! I just can't believe you just did that ! Hahaha !" Suddenly, Koko stormed inside the room, and I can only gasp in surprise. After that, he's followed by the rest of the guys and girls.

They looked at me with amusement in their eyes, and we immediately laughed.

"Yeah, I can't believe I did that too !" I exclaimed hyperly.

"You go girl !" Anna and Nonoko laughed, and Permy added, "You taught that old woman the meaning of fab-u-lous !"

Kitsu gave me a high five, Ruka and Yuu gave me two thumbs up, while Hotaru said with a smirk, "Good job."

I smirked back at her, it feels great to finally stood up from those crazy females.

I looked around the circle, and….yeah, no Natsume. It made me a little bit sad actually, I wonder what he's gonna say if he saw what I did.

"So, ready to go home now?" asked Nonoko. I nodded at her, and started to get off of the bed.

Suddenly, Ruka got a phone call and immediately took it. I'm guessing the other one on the line is Natsume, since he's freaking smiling evilly at me ! Just great, now he became more like Hotaru.

I looked at him impatiently, and after he hung up, I quickly asked, "What's going to happen?"

He just laughed, and said, "Nahh, you'll see."

I shot him a glare, but he just laughed again, damn.

"Well, guys, let's go outside first. Let Mikan gather her belongings here first." said Ruka, still with an evil smile. Okay…Totally not good.

"Got it, we'll wait outside then." said Kitsu.

And so, everyone waited outside while I gather my bag, dusted my uniform, and so on.

After I finally finished, I immediately went out, said thankyou to the nurses, and went outside the building.

Not good. I knew it.

They left me behind ! I saw no traces of Hotaru etc, damn….

How could they? I was sick, right?

Damn it, is that Ruka's idea? Ugh…

I grumbled loudly, and keep on mumbling 'they left me' and 'really great' on the way to the school gate.

I let out a sigh at my luck, and decided to hurry up and go home.

I looked at the school gate and saw…Natsume? He's leaning on the school wall, and let out a weak smile at me. He doesn't look good. At all.

He approached me, and said, "You're finally fine now?"

"Yup." I said happily, and something struck me. I haven't thank him properly, have I?

"Oh, and Natsume," I said slowly, and he looked at me, making me really nervous, "Just….Thank you. For helping me back then, well, I don't know what could've happened if you weren't there. I even could passed out at the field ! And bad things might happened ! And- Okay, the point is…..," I took a deep breath and exhale loudly, "thanks a lot, Natsume."

I smiled at him after ending my speech, and he smiled back for a second. After that, he looked unsurely at me, making me shot him a questioning look.

"Mikan…I know what happened." He said slowly, and yeah, I'm confused now.

A few seconds later, my eyes widen and I replied, "Really?"

He nodded unsurely, and I shot him a weak smile, "That's good actually, I wanted to tell you, but…I don't know how to do it, I mean, I…" I stopped talking, since I could feel a big lump on my throat, preventing me from talking.

He took a step closer, and I just looked at him nervously.

"It's over now." He said, and I just nodded, agreeing him.

"Did Hotaru tell you?" I asked him, but he shook his head, "He told me himself."

My eyes widen, and I said, "That means…did you see the girl? The girl who told him to come here and.…" Again, my voice is shaking, and my stomach hurts.

In a sudden, he pulled me in his embrace, and I could just widen my eyes.

He hugged me, and it felt….so warm and comfortable. I unconsciously closed my eyes, and I hugged him back.

"Don't bother that guy, okay? I'll always be there to help you." He said close to my ear, making me blushed madly.

"Thanks Natsume, I'll start trying to face his bad doings." I said while smiling, and he hugged me tighter.

"You can do it, Polka." He finally said then letting me go.

I grinned at him, and he smirked back.

"Wait a second, is that official ?" suddenly a voice said.

Me and Natsume immediately searched for the owner of that voice, but nobody's around.

"I guess, well, is it?" another voice said.

We looked at each other, knowing what to do. Yeah, we practically hurriedly walk pass the school gate, only to find Permy and Koko debating about something 'official'.

Around both of them are jumping Nonoko and Anna, smiling Inchou, smirking Kitsu, Hotaru with a video camera, and devilishly smirking Ruka.

The heck ?

"What are you doing here ?" Natsume glared at them with murderous aura, and it made me more confused.

"Wait, what's the matter with them being here?" I asked him with a weird look.

He looked at me in disbelieve, while Ruka and the rest of the guys laughed loudly, and the girls are looking at me speechlessly.

I looked back at them weirdly, "Hey, seriously ! What happened? What did I miss?"

Natsume's still looking at me, but with a murderous aura now, while Hotaru spoke up, "He actually half confessed to you just now, baka."

I gaped at her, while my cheek is burning into scarlet, and it's my turn to become speechless.

I nervously glanced at Natsume, who's avoiding my look.

I said with a small voice, "Is that..true? Natsume?"

Permy looked at me with an 'You're idiot' look, and I could only stand there, speechless, with burning cheeks.

Natsume finally sighed, and looked at me, "Yes."

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"H-ho-hotaru ! Hide me !" I said desperately while immediately hiding behind Hotaru.

"Baka." She said with a smirk, and immediately turned her body, so she's freaking videoing me ! %$#*&^

"Oh my God ! This is so embarrassing !" I put my hands over my face, while I said desperately.

"Hahaha, you made her blush like she never blushed before, haha !" Ruka laughed victoriously, and I can hear Kitsu said, "Mikan is too dense, mate. You should use the classic 'will you be my girl' confession ! Haha."

I slowly released my hands, only to find Anna, Nonoko, and Permy smirked evilly, and suddenly pulled and pushed me at…

"Still clumsy as always, I see." Natsume raised one of his eyebrows while holding both of my hands, preventing me from falling, again.

I looked at him and ended up blushing more, "Y-y-you ! T-this is too embarrassing !"

Inchou chuckled and said, "Of course it's not, Mikan. Shouldn't you be happy now?"

I looked at Natsume speechlessly. What should I say now ? Oh God, help me !

"It seems it's been a while since anyone confessed to you, right Mikan? So you're becoming all nervous and all." Anna said with a smile.

"Yeah ! And it's unexpected for her to get a confession right now, haha." Added Nonoko.

I can just nodded desperately. Then, Natsume slowly let my hands go, and pinched his nose impatiently, "Actually, I'm the one who's being humiliated now, Polka." He hissed at me, while I took a glance at the videoing Hotaru and laughing Ruka etc.

I unconsciously laughed, and he glared at me, making me laugh more.

He took a deep breath, and said, "Okay, let's do it the classic way."

Before I could say anything, he already said again, "Will you be my girlfriend, Mikan?"

This time, I didn't blush as madly as before, but still, madly.

I looked over to my friends, and they all have the same smirking-approving look.

Then , I turned my head to the guy that just confessed, and grinned.

"Definitely yes !"

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