Ugh this tok soo long but I'm happy with it! please review

In another world in time, a large group of men were traveling by both horse and by foot were passing were going through a pathway by the side of a mountain. The men were samurai and they seemed to be carrying and guarding some sort of chest. One of the men carrying the chest was starting to slow down and holding the others up.

"Don't slow down now men!" yelled one of the older soldiers. "Were almost at your checkpoint for the day and we can't afford to waste time!"

"Y-Yes sir" said the younger soldier, now picking up his pace.

As they continued to move forward, they realized that something was not right.

"Um, sir." said one of the men.

"Yes, I know." said the head soldier in a quite tone.

The general rose up his hand and all of the other samurais soldier then made another signal and all of the samurai suddenly were on guard. They realized that they were being watched. All was quiet on the pathway. Not even the birds were flying in the sky. The samurai were standing still, as if they were waiting for something to happen. Suddenly, shadowy figures appeared out of the brushes and threw what seemed to be knives at the samurai.

The samurai that got hit cried out in agony for he was struck in the throat. "Bandits!" cried one of the samurai.

"Quickly!" said the soldier. "We can't let them take that chest!"

The samurai tried to get to the chest but the number of bandits was increasing by a rapid rate and started to overpower the samurai. There seemed to be more bandits than samurai. One of thesamurai tried to get close to the chest but the bandits got to it before he could.

"NO!" said the then felt a stab through his stomach and fell to the ground.

The bandits laughed and gathered around the chest. "Ha, ha, ha! This is all ours now!" said one of the bandits. The large group of bandits thentook the chest and retreated back into the forest leaving the samurai alone and wounded. Some of the samurai were able to get up.

"Hurry, everyone!"said the lead samurai. "We must not let them get away! The royal family is counting on us." The samurai yelled in agreement and then, those who were stillable to fight charged into the forest.

Meanwhile, in a seemingly blank and empty space, Ryuga laid in the middle of the void. His body just seemed to be just floating and he also seemed to beunconscious due to the incident the temple. However, it only took a few minutes before he began to regain conscious. Ryuga's eyes then flickered open as he started to groan. "Oh, man. W-what happened?" He then remembered what happened back at the temple. "Oh yeah, that light seemed to absorb me,though I still seem to be alive..." Ryuga then twitched in pain and touched his head. He was very dizzy due to what happened and his head was pain lasted only for a few minutes though. When the pain and dizziness subsided, Ryuga then looked around trying to figure out where he was. "What kind of place is this?" Ryuga thought to himself. "This looks like...something out of the freaking twilight zone!" Ryuga tried to move around but when he tried, he just keeping spinning around. He then realized that he was floating in there and he did not like this at all. The feeling of just floating in the airwithout his feet on the ground always made him feel nauseous. So much so that it made him a little sick to his stomach.

Ryuga then remembered something,his beyblade. Where was it? Did it manage to arrive with him or was it destroyed by the strange light? He franticly looked around for his beyblade and thesaw it about a few inches from him. Ryuga them sighed with relief and he reached to his bey and grabbed it for it was not too far for him to reach or looked at his bey and sighed. "Okay. How in the world am I going to get out of here?" Ryuga thought to himself. He thought if he didn't get out of this place soon, he'd go , Ryuga heard a loud boom coming from behind him. It was so loud that it had him jump a little. When he turned around saw a small black vortexabout 10 feet from him. "What in the..." thought Ryuga. Then, he soon realized that the vortex was slowly sucking him in. Ryuga screamed. He tried to getaway but it was no use. He then soon realized that his bey was starting to glow. It began to glow even brighter and then something else very strange. The bey also began to start to change its shape. Ryuga was both shocked and confused at this. What was the most confusing forRyuga was what the bey was turning into. It wasn't turning into another bey form, but it seemed to be turning into a sword. A samurai sword. While Ryugawas distracted by this, he then began to realize that the vortex had almost consumed him. "Aaaah! Not again!" screamed Ryuga as the vortex sucked him and then disappeared.

Back in the world of the samurai, the bandits were sprinting quickly through the forest, carrying the chest with them. They seemed to be laughing.

"With this much loot, we'll be able to live the high life for a while." said one of the bandits.

"Don't get too cocky, Busujima." said another bandit. "We still have to give the boss his share."

Busujima frowned and then the nodded reluctantly in agreement. "How much longer till we meet up with the others anyway?" he said.

"Not long now." said the other bandit. "We just have to go over this small mountain and then we'll be there. Now hurry up! By the look of those clouds,there's going to be a really bad storm coming soon."

The bandit then picked up their pace. Then, up in the stormy clouds strange lightning was coming out of it. Some of the bandits noticed this and were getting a little concerned. Busujima was getting a little nervous because of this. Suddenly, out of the strange lightning a large, white, firey, ball came out of the clouds and was heading straight for the bandits. They started to panic but one of the bandits, named Tobio saw or rather heard something very strange about the fire ball. It seemed to be screaming and not some otherworldly scream, a very human likescream. However even if he did realize this, Tobio still knew he still knew he had to duck for cover unless he wanted to get burned to a crisp. So he hid behind the trees for cover. When the fireball came to the forest, hit the trees and bounced from the trees back and forth leaving burn marks on the trees. It finally landed in the middle of the pathway leaving behind a large hole where it skid. The bandits looked at the fireball as it landed but at a distance. They were mumbling to each other, trying to figure out what it was.

Once the fire subsided, what the bandits saw shocked them. What appeared out of thefireball was a person. A young man, one like they have never seen before. He was young with white hair and with a red streak in his hair. It was Ryuga; however the bandits did not know who he was. A few bandits, as well as Tobio, came up to Ryuga to check him out too see what was really going on. They realized that he was unconscious and also saw a strange samurai sword lying beside him.

"I-is he one of those samurai guards we saw earlier?" said one of the bandits in a scared tone.

"No, I doubt it." said Tobio. "Besides, his clothing is different and...really strange." Tobio also saw something else, Ryuga's headgear and brace. "Hey, look at this!" said Tobio as he pointed to Ryuga's head gear and brace.

"Is that….real gold?" said the other bandit with a gleam in his eyes.

"It has to be. Feel how heavy it is." said another bandit as he lifted Ryuga's arm.

The other bandit did what he said and realized he was right.

Tobio then got an idea. "Hey, let's steal it." he said.

"Yeah!" said both bandits.

"Hurry then, help me get this off before he wakes up." said Tobio.

They got Ryuga's head band off but they were having trouble getting his gauntlet off his arm. Tobio growled in frustration. "How does this come off?" he said while tugging Ryuga's arm.

Then, without the bandits knowing it, Ryuga was starting to wake up. "Ugh, w-what the.." said Ryuga in a very quite tone. It was so quiet that the bandits couldn't hear him. It was also because he was soo tired. It only took Ryuga a couple of minutes to realize they were stealing from him after he saw them take his gauntlet off his arm. Ryuga's eyes then shot completely open. "HEYY!" screamed Ryuga as he got up. "What do think you're doing?" The bandits jumped when they realized this and then quickly began to run off. " Hey, g-get back here!" Ryuga screamed. He tried to get up and chase after them but he was too exhausted to stand on his feat.

"Hey! What about his samurai sword!" said one of the bandits as they were fleeing.

"Ah, forget it." said Tobio. "These golden wear of his are more valuable." The bandits were almost gone when some of them dropped the chest and the treasures fell out. "IDIOTS!" yelled Tobio. They picked up what they could and ran off, leaving some treasure behind on the ground. The samurai finally came up to where Ryuga was and saw the treasure on the ground.

"HALT, BANDIT!" yelled the lead samurai.

Ryuga turned around and was both shocked and confused by what was going on. "Oh, great." thought Ryuga. "This just keeps getting better and better