Green Chapter 7: I Really Fell For You, a final fantasy vii fanfic

So I decided to take the advice of a certain reviewer (who shall remain nameless) and add more narrative into the song bits. This one isn't that good at that, but I tried.

Raucous applause came from the crowd as the song finished. Zack grinned at them.

"Okay," Zack yelled over the noise, "it's Luke's turn now to sing to that special someone."

More giggling girls. I rolled my eyes (I have a habit of doing that. Did you notice? I thought I noticed you noticing).

"This song's called Drive By," Zack continued. He replaced his electric guitar with an acoustic and grinned at me as I went back to the mike. When I was ready, he started playing the simple riff that was the intro. Then I started singing the song.

Now, before I actually put the song in here, I'll warn you of something. I was thinking of Yuffie while I sang. I know. It's terribly sappy, isn't it?

Anyway, back to me singing.

On the other side of a street I knew
Stood a girl that looked like you
I guess that's deja vu
But I thought this can't be true
'Cause you moved to west L.A or New York or Santa Fe
Or where ever to get away from me

Cloud started clapping his hands to the beat behind me (there wasn't much he could do in this song), and the crowd picked up on it. They were really getting into it.

Oh but that one night
Was more than just right
I didn't leave you 'cause I was all through
Oh I was overwhelmed, and frankly scared as hell
Because I really fell for you

Oh I swear to you
I'll be there for you
This is not a drive by
Just a shy guy looking for a two ply
Hefty bag to hold my love
When you move me everything is groovy
They don't like it sue me
Mmm the way you do me
Oh I swear to you
I'll be there for you
This is not a drive by

I heard Tifa yell out, "Go baby go!" from the crowd. I grinned at her and pointed in her general direction while I sang the next verse.

On the upside of a downward spiral
My love for you went viral
And I loved you every mile you drove away
But now here you are again
So let's skip the "how you been"

And get down to the "more than friends" at last

Yuffie's ears seemed to perk up at that last line. Well, her eyes widened. I smirked and kept singing.

Oh but that one night
Is still the highlight
I didn't need you until I came to
and I was overwhelmed, in fact as scared as hell
Because I really fell for you

I swept my arms out wide as an indication to the crowd to stop clapping. They did, instantly.

Please believe that when I leave
There's nothing up my sleeve but love for you
And a little time to get my head together too

On the other side of a street I knew
Stood a girl that looked like you
I guess that's deja vu
But I thought this can't be true 'cause

Next to me, Zack shouted "Come on everybody, clap!" and they did exactly that.

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