Hey everyone. So I have gotten a few people who are upset about the way this story panned out. This is okay because I have gotten such an amazing audience so quickly that I knew my luck streak wouldn't last forever. Finishing She Is Mine has been difficult because I had so many things going on in my life that I didn't really have time to write it like I wanted to, and by the time I had published a few chapters just to make people happy I had lost the way I originally wanted this tale to go. However I have no regrets about the chapter I just published. Some were upset about how the characters seemed meaner and more jealous, but hence the title She Is Mine. I am very happy to hear everyone's opinions and encourage people to tell me and challenge me when they don't like how something goes. It helps me grow as a writer and helps me learn about my audience better. Everyone was very respectful and constructive with their criticism and I appreciate it. Some liked the direction I went very much and I was happy to see I could avoid the cookie cutter strategy I had been using on occasion and people would still enjoy it. Thank you to everyone who reads my work and if you ever do or don't like something feel free to private message me as others have done. I love to hear your thoughts.
-Rhine