Wolfpup26: Hey people I finally finished chapter 1! (Runs around squealing like a little girl)
Alan: What in the world? What's wrong with her?
Becky: Either she had too much sugar or she's just going crazy. I have no clue.
Wolfpup26: (stops in front of them) Mwah-ha-ha-ha-ha-ha
Becky: She' scaring me now (Sweat drops) Please tell me you've just had to much sugar because you're starting to freak me out. (Backs away slowly)
Alan: I hope so. (Backs up) Um… anyway since she's too busy going crazy I'll do the disclaimer.
Disclaimer: Wolfpup26 owns all the characters but she got Alan's appearance from Wolf's Rain and she isn't sure if she owns the plot anymore since someone told her that the story was like "The Hunger Games" but she swears that she hasn't read the book yet. She just wrote down her mind and this is how the story went. So she's not sure anymore if this is her plot or not.
Wolfpup26: (Stops laughing) this is my first fanfic so please bear with me if it sucks. Also I'm too lazy to put the descriptions in the story so here they are along with some things you need to know:
Becky: Pure white, blue eyes, and a birthmark of angel wings on her right fore-paw.
Alan: Gray, yellow eyes, dark gray stripe on his back from nose to tail tip, and a birthmark of a cobra head on his left fore-paw.
'Thoughts'
"Speech"
*Time before or Later*
-Scene Change-
(P.O.V)
Also Becky is not a spirit yet and they're walking to the cave. I'm letting you know now that way you're not confused as you read this chapter. Okay now that you know these things on with the story.
Becky the Spirit Wolf
Chapter 1: The Crystal Cave
-Path to Mountains-
(No one's P.O.V)
"Um… Alan, Where is the cave again," said a nervous Becky. "The cave is in the mountains," replied a very annoyed Alan. "You do know the way back, right? Because if you don't I'm going back to where the pack is," said Becky while looking over her shoulder. "Obviously I know the way back if I just came from there yesterday and besides if I forget the way back we could always smell our way back" Alan said sarcastic. "If we get attacked it's your fault not mine" Becky said a bit scared. "Would you please stop being so negative you're giving me a headache," he said frustrated while shaking his head. "Sorry I just can't help but worry especially since I have a bad feeling of this cave" Becky says while putting her ears back against her head feeling ashamed of her behavior. Suddenly Alan turns on Becky causing her to stop walking, "What happened to you Becky? Before you used to beg me to take you out on adventures but now you're afraid of them." After Alan blurts that out he feels bad for his sudden outburst. Becky just looks away and says, "You wouldn't understand." "Becky you're my sister and you know you can tell me anything right? So please tell me what's wrong" he said concerned. She sighs knowing he'll bug her until she tells him what happened. "Fine I'll tell you what's wrong but let's keep on walking ok?" She said not wanting anyone to over-hear her while she was telling her brother what happened.
"Sure"
"Ok, remember when I went on an adventure on my own?"
"Yea so what about it"
"Well to make a long story short I was chasing a butterfly in a field but I wasn't watching where I was going and accidentally ran into the fence that surrounded the chicken's cope on a farm. The bad part was when the farmer came out running with his gun and his three dogs, but let me tell you this he wasn't too happy to see a wolf-pup near his chickens so he started shooting at me and his dogs chased me but luckily I lost them in the forest," she said but started to cry a little because she almost died when she was a pup!
"Now I understand. You were afraid to run into more humans, right?"
"Yup"
"You should have told me that earlier that way I wouldn't have dragged you into this," Alan said sadly. Becky shook her head," No brother it's fine besides if I don't go I'll be too scared to go anywhere for the rest of my life." "Well I'm happy to hear that because while we were walking and talking we went half way into the tunnel that leads to the chamber inside," he said happily.
*Later*
-Crystal Cave Chamber-
Becky's P.O.V
"Wow look at this place! There's even water!" Becky said excitedly while running to the crystal blue water and taking a drink. It was a long walk so she was very thirsty. "I thought you might li… Becky, don't drink that water it might have poison in it!" he shouted from the entrance of the chamber worried she might get poisoned. 'I don't think it does otherwise I'd be choking right now. But I might as well have some fun while he still thinks that,' she thought giggling to herself and then starts to choke. "Oh my Wolf, Becky, try to cough up the water," Alan said starting to panic. Then Becky starts to roll around laughing her head off. A very puzzled Alan just looks at her like she's gone mad. "You should have seen your face! It was priceless," she says still on the floor trying to catch her breath from laughing so much. "… That wasn't very funny Becky! I thought you were really choking to death," he said angrily while glaring at her but looking relived that she didn't get poisoned. Becky hears some rocks moving and thinks, 'What is that and how come my brother didn't hear it too?' She stops laughing, sits up, and listens for the sound again. When she does hear it she tries to remember where she's heard the sound before. Then it hits her. It was the sound of something walking or other words stalking them. 'I have to tell my brother what I've found out before it hurts or even kills us,' she thought. "Um hello… earth to Becky. You in there," Alan asks concerned while stepping beside her and waving his paw in front of her face, but she still keeps staring at something in front of her. Becky puts her ears against her head and her tail between her legs while starting to whimper and back up. Alan notices her weird behavior and asks her, "Sister what's wrong? Are you ok? You're acting kind of strange." She just keeps staring at something and says back, "I don't think we're alone anymore brother."
And she was correct because something moved in the distance.
To be continued…
Wolfpup26: (starts crying) I'm so sorry Alan. Please forgive me! (Runs to her room)
Alan: Um… What's with her? A few minutes ago she was going crazy and now she's saying 'I'm so sorry Alan please Forgive me'?
Becky: (Shrugs) Beats me, but I better see what's up with her or she may never come out of her room for a long time. (Walks to Wolfpup26's bedroom door and paws at it)
Wolfpup26: (says through door) Go away and leave me alone. (Sniffles)
Alan: That's strange. Please Review. It might make her come out of her room and tell us what's making her cry.
Becky: (Big Sad Puppy-Dog Eyes) Please review.
