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Your Betrayal

BANG! The door slams opens again. Who's Envy gonna be this time? Ed opens his eyes to take a glance, not that it would matter who it was, it all ended the same way, pain, torture, humiliation. It was Alex Armstrong, uuuggghhhh, how'd Envy manage to get those sparkle things down?

"Edward?"

They had been looking for the alchemist for two and a half months now. And they had no idea that he would be here of all places. It was a routine drug bust, or at least they thought it was, but when they got here, it turned out to be so much more. It turns out that not only was the gang they busted selling drugs, they were also selling people. Prostitues. After finding that out they quickly started searching every floor and every room of the abandoned hospital that the gang had set up as their HQ. After the first 3 floors it seemed that they weren't going to find anything interesting. But now on the 5th floor, Armstrong had found The Fullmetal Alchemist, that they had been desperately searching for, tied to a mattress covered in blood, and god knows what, naked.

"Edward?"

This is odd, he thought. Wasn't Envy gonna torment him? Wasn't he gonna make some snide remark and rape him? Edward looked up again at "Armstrong" why was Envy acting this way? Why wasn't he doing anything? Why was he just standing there with that odd look on his face? It almost looked like a look of shock which didn't make sense.

" Well?" Edward looked at "Armstong".

"Aren't ya gonna start?"

Armstrong looked at the alchemist in shock, " What do you mean sta-"

"You know perfectly well what i mean, stop playing these games with my head Envy and just get it over with." Edward said in a dead sounding voice.

Armstrong was shocked to say the least.

"Edward, I'm Armstrong not Envy, who's envy?"

Edward look up into Armstrong's face with dead eyes " . . .Ed-"

"Shut up."

Armstrong was taken back yet again. What had happened to young Edward for him to be behaving like this towards him. He turned towards the hall hearing shouting. "Found anything up there Armstrong?" It was havoc.

"I . . . I found Edward!" Armstrong shouted back

"WHAT! Guys he's found Ed!"

There was a loud commotion as everyone scrampled up the stairs to see if it was true.

Armstrong yelled, "STOP!"

They all stopped in their tracks in the desperaion in his voice.

Wow. Edward thought. Envy's really going out there this time. Wasn't he . . . was he? NO! of course it was all an act there was no way that this could be real, there was no way they had found him. He heard runing down the hallway. Could they really have found him? Was this nightmare finally over? Armstrong suddenly cried out. "STOP!" He knew it it was just a game. They really weren't there. He was just messing with his mind, making him hope. Just to crush his hopes by bringing them back to a cruel reality.

Armstrong turned back to the doorway as he heard laughing. A miserable laugh. An insane laugh. Why was Ed laughing?

"Edwa-"

"Every fucking time! Every goddamn fucking time! You raise the bar higher every time you damn scum! Why! I thought you needed me! Why are you killing me this slowly! I thought you needed me to make the philosophers stone! Or have you found it? You've found it haven't you! I knew it! Hoenheim made it didn't he! That fucking cock sucker! I knew that's why he left us, to chase after that damn thing-"

"EDWARD!"

He stopped ranting to look at "Armstrong." Why had he interrupted so calmly. Why hadn't he come over and struck him?

"what?"

"I'm ARMSTRONG, NOT Envy. I'm not killing you, i don't need you to make the Philosophers Stone, And I've never met your father. I'm here to take me from this pl-"

"SHUT UP! THERE'S NO WAY YOU ARE ARMSTRONG! IVE BEEN HERE TO LONG FOR ANYONE TO SAVE ME NOW!" He started writhing on the bed trying to get his wrist free from the rope, only having it dig into his flesh more, causing blood to flow down his arm, into his lifeless looking golden hair.

"ED CALM DOWN!"

But those words were lost on him as his vision started to fade and his struggles started to still, blood loss he thought, as his mind fell into blackness. . .

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