So Ive been reading other fanfiction. I know that a character has to die but I think the way that some of the characters have been killed doesn't make sense! At the beginning of a story, they go on about how the OC character will die but in the end the make it someone else. In this story I'm going to put in some of the characters from the other stories and see how many haters I get, esspicially the wirters who killed of such good characters in their stories.
Chapter 4:
One week had past since Natalie was shot. Brax had been trying his best to stay away. Brax couldn't face Natalie. Brax always thought that Charlie was the only one for him. Brax had heard off Leah that Natalie was getting discharged, Brax intended to stay way from Natalie. So that meant not going to the caravan park or or being any place that he might bump into Natalie. It wasn't until Brax got a call from Sid asking if he could come and get Nat that he changed his mind.
"Hey you." Brax said walking into Nat's room. "Hey stranger. You only visited once. I was worried." Brax smiled lightly. "Well Angelo's has been busy lately. I was understaffed. 'Cause some slacker had to take time off." Brax joked. Nat laughed along. Nat's phoned beeped. "Can you please pass it to me?" Nat asked Brax pointing to her phone on the dresser. "Would you like me to read it?" "Sure go ahead." Brax smiled, it was nice how she trusted him. Brax clicked on the message and read it. Anger washed upon him. Nat noticed. 'What?" Nat asked. "Natalie, it seems pretty boy came to save the day! I know everything about you! I would watch your back!" Brax read out loud. A shiver went up Nat's spine. "Was this your ex boy friend?" Brax asked. Natalie didn't say anything she just nodded her head. "Why didn't you tell anyone?" Brax asked. "I don't know, I guess I was just scared." "You should have said something. Maybe not to me but to the police." "I know." "So, what's the story anyway?"
Natalie looked up at Brax before looking down and playing with her hands. "My ex, his name was Greg. we met through friends. He was my first proper relationship. I mean we were thinking long term. I don't know what happened, he was such a nice guy. I guess it was because I was working all the time. One night, I went out with a couple of friends from work. i got home and I was smashed. He started yelling at me, saying that he had plans and that he thought I was going to be on time. He hit me. That was when it started. he acted more like a prison officer than a boyfriend. He forbid me to go out to go out with friends. I couldn't help it anymore. I went out. I partyed. I got home he hit me. That was when it got worse. From then on it became constant. Soon as I walk through the doors. Some friends of mine were going to Sydney I thought that was my chance to get out. I stayed in Sydney when the went home. i told them I wanted to start fresh, get my life together. That's why I moved here. He probably found out where I was going and he came after me." Natalie took a deep breath before looking up at Brax. He was shocked he didn't know what to say. "Nat I'm sorry. Let's get out of here." Natalie smiled she was glad to be getting out, she really hated hospitals. "Brax, I can't go home." I know that. You're living with me"
The arrived back at Brax's after making a quick trip to Nat's and getting her stuff. "Thanks for doing this." "Nat it's no problem." Brax couldn't help it her leant down and kissed Nat.
Next time:
What will Nat's reaction be? Also someone comes to the bay. There will also be a chracter deeath. Who is it?
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