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Worried by the now confident-less Melinda, Elizabeth went to Jack.
"Turn the ship around Jack; turn back and get your compass and her necklace." Elizabeth tried to ask as Jack bluntly answered,
"No. if she wants to face the whole army by herself; then so be it." He said as he kept steering the boat while Melinda's crew on her own ship was comforting her,
"Ma'am, we can go back and get it… Luke and I would be happy to do it," a crew member said
"No, this is personal… right after we get our father back we're going back and making that Lieutenant regret ever taking anything from me." Melinda said as someone yelled over
"Davey Jones!!" said a voice when a fog rolled over and a foul smell filled the air as a voice boomed after the fog,
"Jack Sparrow!" the voice said as another ship came into view, "I finally found you again; damn you… you still owe me souls." Davey Jones spat as he ordered some of his men onto the ship as he noticed an extra ship next to the Black Pearl,
"Hello Melinda" Davey Jones grinned as Melinda peered out of her own boat; now faced Davey Jones. Melinda glared at her life-long enemy; knowing it was stupid to face him head on; she kept glaring at him for he knew what she had wanted.
"You still miss your father Melinda?" provoked Davey Jones as Melinda finally drew her sword, not caring if she had to face Davey Jones herself.
"Girls shouldn't pretend to be pirates Melinda… you can get hurt…" remarked Davey Jones; as if to listen to a hidden signal, the crew of Davey Jones began invading the ships of Melinda and Jack, with the words, "give no mercy" as their motto the crew began their siege; capturing Elizabeth and Will who was trying to help Elizabeth, as well as the chest containing his heart.
"You see what happens when women get on a pirate's boat or fall in love…" Davey Jones pointed out, "Pleasure doing business with you." He said casually as Davey Jones and his crew began to leave.
Elizabeth looked helplessly at Will who looked at Melinda and Jack with a look as if to say "do something"
"Wait!" Melinda began as she placed her sword back on her belt and continued, "take me instead… instead of my brother and his fiancé."
"Now you're talking my language my dear." Davey Jones said as he walked closer and closer to her. Melinda's face showed no emotion as she kept on going, "take me instead… I'll match the work load of any man on your ship." She claimed as Davey Jones chuckled as he ordered his men to release the two as he then told them to tie Melinda in their place; she went up to her brother, "Get me out of this mess… I know you can do it." She whispered as she boarded onto their ship. As she climbed upon the ship she looked over to her men and smiled as if to say everything would be alright, the fog rolled over heavier than ever as Davey Jones' ship sailed off with Melinda among the crew.
Jack looked at Melinda who kept her face straight with the same emotion-less face as the ship began to sail; he felt some what of a pity for her, for many reasons in his opinion.
"This is why you can never be loyal…" he thought to himself, "all it ever does is tie you down or lead you into deeper troubles." he continued to think to himself as he noticed something in Melinda's eyes, they were tears but her expression never changed as she shook her head and had rage in her eyes as she glared back at Davey Jones, confused by her actions Jack just continued to look back at his ship and crew to whom all looked back at him worried about Melinda.
"Jack, do something! This is my sister!" Will yelled out as Elizabeth rushed over to try and calm him.
"What do you want me to do? Uh? Save her, Will?" Jack said as he glared at Will who now was glaring back at him.
"You know, I think I will." Will said as he jumped onto Melinda's ship, "Will you help me save my sister?" he asked the crew as they gladly agreed and began to follow Davey Jones' ship, it was easy for it always left the foul smell at its tracks; following her fiancé's act Elizabeth was ready to jump aboard with Will, but before she jumped aboard she did not forget to give Jack a disappointed look as she then was satisfied to jump to the other ship.
"Fine…" Jack Sparrow sighed with defeat in his tone as he too followed the others in the chase for Davey Jones.
On the ship of Davey Jones, Melinda was now free and was told to work. To her words she matched in strength with the men; better yet she out strength some of the people on the ship which amazed Davey Jones. As she continued working she wanted to find signs of her father, surely he knew she was here for she was the only girl on the ship. The sun had fallen as most were allowed rest as Melinda was kept on the deck; on top of everything she was tied up as well. The cold air kept her from sleeping, as a distraction she began to look up at the stars as this brought another memory with her and her father.
She remembers living near the ocean as the ocean became her second home by the time she started school, she also remembers the life with her mother and father for Will was still not born; so she had all the time with her parents, especially her father who she had adored for so long, unlike all her friends from school, she loved and was fascinated by the life of a pirate. Although her family had kept a secret that her father was a pirate, she loved her father's job more than anything for she learned everything from him; from self-defense to reading stars; her father taught her everything
"Daddy, can I go on your ship?" young Melinda asked
"No Melinda, sweet heart… you have to stay and protect your mom. You know you might have a little brother or sister. So you have to take care of him or her soon." The younger William Turner said as he picked up his young daughter and walked to the shores, noticing her father's ship glowing in the moon light, Melinda was saddened for she knew what this meant… her father was going to leave.
"Why can't I go with you?" Melinda whined as her father laughed and
"Your mother would hurt me if I left her alone." He began as Melinda interrupted; "You won't miss me?" she interrupted as her father laughed lightly
"Of course I will; and you know you'll always have me in here…" he first said as he pointed out Melinda's heart, "and here." He finished as he pointed out the locket he had given her on her 7th birthday which was not so long ago. Still unconvinced, Melinda pouted as her father began to explain once again, "look at the North Star; I'll always be under there." He said as he pointed out the North Star, now convinced young Melinda smiled as hugged her father.
"Captain we're leaving." A man said as William Turner took out an item out of his coat pocket, "I know you will be a great pirate one day, keep this with you; someday you will understand the importance of it." Her father said as he finally got aboard his ship, little did Melinda know this would be the last she ever seen of her father.
Reminiscing this last memory of her father more than 15 years before; Melinda looked up at the stars that was much more peaceful than the dilemma Melinda in which she was forced to face, she closed her eyes and tried to remember the sea back home, to which she also haven't thought or seen for more than 15 years; she saw her father laughing and smiling with her as she heard his voice once more,
"Melinda?" the voice said as she opened her eyes as the voice of her memory sounded tired and old. Suddenly she turned violently as she finally realized the source of the voice.
"Dad?" she questioned as she looked at the old and weathered looking man to whom was her father the monstrous look added to his weathered look, "what are you doing here?" he yelled at her as there stood her missing father.
