A/N – I'm rewriting the story.
It's going to be different… and I'll stay away from the ATLA AU clichés, so some characters might seem OOC (out of character) to you, but I'll try my hardest not to stray from their original personalities in the series. The reason characters might seem OOC is because I might emphasise some of their personality traits or play some down just to make the characters more believable and so they work more with what I have in mind.
The main reason I'm rewriting is because I felt my whole plot was a mess and I had no idea where I was going, well I did but only a basic gist. I did try to salvage what was left of my shambling ideas, but ehhhh… it didn't really work with me lmao
And I also thought about what my reviewers were saying, and you all had some really good ideas for me and I want to work with them! Especially you "Guest", I've dwelled on your words quite a lot.
Don't worry it will be different, but it will still be the same story (more or less), and will still be going in the same direction (a bit), just with (a lot) more character development, so the summary won't change (much).
Sorry I was gone so long, so many things just got in the way, like preparing for my exams, doing the exams, physio therapy sessions (I should really be doing my exercises), and I went on holiday quite a bit, but I was also thinking about what I really wanted for this story, so I could give you more than just a half assed plot.
I'm working on the newest chapter already so I'll see you soon, just thought I'd give you a warning.
PS – Shall I leave the first few chapters I did and put the newer ones after this point so you can compare? Leave an answer in the reviews please, and once again thank you to everyone who did review I hope you don't get put off with my altering some things.
Also since you're apparently not allowed to upload just an author's note I will give you a sneak peak, ignore anything I may have said before, whether Toph is blind or not will come later, I have an idea for that.
His molten silver eyes flashed in recognition at the short girl stood next to him, the impatience in her misty jade orbs was clear as was her annoyance. Releasing her shoulder bag from her tight grip she let it drop to the floor and plopped down in her seat, her eyes flickering from wall to as she observed the room and the people inside it. Aang was still for a while until he grinned at her, and judging by the smirk playing on her lips, she knew who he was too.
That's all Folks! Came up with that on a whim as I haven't really finished the first chapter yet, I'm still thinking hard about it and I want it in with a bang. A big bang, I might change this paragraph and the order I put it in though.
A Bientot
AB
UPDATE - I've just read through chapters 1-5 and I think it's chapters and 1&2 that will change the most maybe