okay, so I don't know if anyone was still waiting for updates on this, but if you were, uh.
hi. I'm back.
so, I'm going to be re-writing this story and making better, because jesus, did I need practice back then.
but, yeah, new and improved. I'll upload it soon, and the new version will be available on my page.
update: it's been uploaded here: s/11851705/1/Modernize-Me
cheers.