Well this has been a very long gap, and I apologize, but I bring you an even better story as I took an English class. I have a lot learnt from it and since I totally forgot the sequence I skimmed through my stories to where I stopped writing, so I'm gonna take and change somethings so hopefully you like it.
Chapter 14
You wake up and get ready for your training, on your way you see the welcoming, bright and warm sun. You hear the bird chirping, the smell of fresh air, and the cool breeze touching your skin. You arrive at Elijah's house and you begin training. Hours go by and on your way home you see Elsa, you stopped walking and stared at her. Your heart stopped for a moment, skipping a beat, your mind goes blank, your eyes widen. And she takes notice of you too. You start walking again trying not to make eye contact, it took a few seconds, but it felt like eternity. As you pass by her you keep thinking of her and what you could have, "Don't worry (Y/N) don't overthink it, it's only gonna make it worse and complicated." Then suddenly you see a man, about 50 years old, struggling with his groceries. You humbly help him and even went on to go to his house. "So having a rough day? Or did something happen?" the man asked
"Well, I broke up with my girlfriend so that this guy would be the top business in Aerendelle."
"I see. I could help you (Y/N)."
"Who are you and how?" you asked surprised
"I am who I am."
"That doesn't make any sense, but I don't want to know, I'm scared it's gonna get complicated."
"(Y/N) I believe that everyone has a 2nd chance to start over. So I'm offering you a shot at redemption."
"How can I trust you?"
"I am who I am, I have kept numerous promises, made covenants, gave blessings to many noteworthy people."
"Alright, but still don't trust you."
"That's fine, and I respect that, but if you have given the chance to start over, would you do it?"
"Yes I would, but if certain conditions are met to my expectation."
"Alright, I will give you that."
"Really? Just like that and it's done? But why?"
"Pay it forward." He said with a smile.
"Alright, I can live with that."
"So which part do you want me to start over?"
"Well. My brother and I are ripped off from our powers, and we would forget about that we had power. And I think that'll be it."
"Wow, why not you and Elsa just get back together?"
"That's my problem to fix, and Hans. Oh and I want the vigor business to end, I don't want assassins on me or my friends or my brother. Instead give Hans a good business but not well enough to rule over Elsa's"
"I see, so be it, but be warned you will forget that this ever happened."
"Got it." All of a sudden and bright flash emitted from the man and you wake up in the morning on your bed. You sit upright on your bed with a headache and try to remember what happened. "Aww man I know something happened but I can't get my finger around it. Well might as well not dwell on it." You then proceed to make a simple breakfast and try to come up with a plan to get Elsa back. You make up your mind and go to her house, you knock on the door and you see Anna answering the door. "(Y/N) Elsa might kill if you stay here."
"I'm here to apologize, just call her please?"
"Alright, wait here." She closes the door and a few seconds Elsa appears. "Oh it isn't (Y/N), what brings you here." She said with her arms crossed
"I came here to apologize for what I've done." Elsa puts her arms down and looks at you with sympathy.
"I thought you were with another girl."
"No, Hans threatened me, if I declined he would kill me and you. If I accepted he wouldn't hurt you. He wanted us to break up so that his business would be better than yours. Please forgive me."
"How do I know if you're telling the truth?"
"I have no evidence, but my testimony is real." Anna whispers to Elsa
"Elsa I think he's telling the truth. You should give him a second chance. Kristoff and I will figure this out."
"Alright, thanks Anna." "Alright (Y/N) it seems like you're telling the truth, but I'm not forgiving you yet, until you are actually telling the truth. Stay in my house and don't leave. You could be lying and erase evidence."
"Alright, but let me grab my stuff."
"Take Anna with you."
"Alright." You proceed to go to your house and pack your stuff. "So (Y/N) it seem that you are telling the truth."
"Yes I am." You then proceed to make a small cut on your arm with your balisong. "And I swear on this scar."
"That's a little extreme, but it shows me your will." You then arrive at Elsa's house; you unload your stuff while Anna and Elsa are talking. "Elsa I think he's telling you the truth he even made a small cut on his arm just to prove it."
"We shall see about that."
So guys what do you think? I basically wanted to start over again and I don't know where to cut it off, so hopefully the endings fine.
