Commentary Part 3

After changing out of their costumes, the cartoon characters left the stage.

"Well that, I say, that was kinda interestin' wasn't it, ya'll?" asked Foghorn Leghorn.

With a blanket wrapped around themselves, Yosemite Sam, Francis, and Pete shivered. "Easy f-f-f-for you to say!"

"Personally," said Freakshow in contempt, "I found the change within the third part to be pointless."

"I agree—" grumbled Hannibal Roy Bean—"the people who created this rubbish just wanted to find another way to humiliate us villains even more."

"Most of us—" corrected Shego—"I was rarely seen and didn't utter a single word."

"Well," said Ms. Mucus as she placed an ice pack on her head, "consider yerself lucky ya'll didn't get injured in the process."

Timmy Turner looked at Vicky with a glare. "Are you happy now, Vicky? You finally got introduced, didn't you?"

"Shut up, twerp!" snapped the evil baby-sitter. "You don't have to gloat over how you and your friends were redeemed or resurrected in the film while most of us villains got killed off! IT WASN'T EVEN IN THE ORIGINAL STORYLINE!"

"I agree!" growled Dag.

"Yeah—you don't have to rub it in!" chimed in Walter Wolf.

"Guess what?" Danny Fenton inquired. "The writers liked us good guys more. It is what it is—so get over it."

Tarzan nodded. "My sentiments precisely."

"Hey KP, are all villains nothing more than sore losers and spoilsports?" Ron Stoppable quipped.

"To be honest," Kim Possible shrugged, "the world may never know."

"I personally liked how the story was written—" commented Raimundo Pedrosa—"I believe the writers did justice with it. Or at least would have done justice with it if used in the storyline itself."

Kimiko Tohomiko nodded her head. "I agree, Rai. The original ideas were pretty practical."

"Oh yes," Omi agreed, "they were indeed."

Randall Boggs simply grumbled angrily. "I am just glad there won't be a sequel to this. It's the last time I sign up for a movie where I wind up beaten to a pulp in the end."

Steelbeak rubbed his head trying to get rid of the aches. "Tell me about it."

"And speaking of the end," slyly commented Aku, "since we are done here, Samurai Jack—"

Samurai Jack unsheathed his sword and pointed it at the shadow demon. "Just because we are done here, Aku, does not mean you will attack us."

"Who said we would attack you right here, right now?" shrugged Pitch. "We just want you to remind you will may come after you soon after this." He then created a giant hole in the ceiling.

Aku shapeshifted into a Dragon with Dag, Vicky, Ms. Mucus, Francis, Steelbeak, Walter, Yosemite Same, Randall, Pete, Hannibal, Shego, and Pitch hopping on his back.

"We'll get you and your friends yet, Samurai!" shouted the shadow demon as he and his passengers flew out of the building through the hole.

Everyone else was silent for a moment.

Shere Khan stood there in his usual emotionlessness before heading out through the door. "Well, I should leave as well. Give the writers my regards; the film was . . . quite different."

"Yeah," agreed Razor as he stretched himself, "I think we can all call it a day, finally."

"Yep," nodded T-Bone, "it's definitely been quite a long process."

Cornelius Fillmore noticed a confused look on Po's face. "What's the matter, Po? You seem confused about something."

"Well," shrugged Po, "I basically am confused. I mean, not that I really minded him making those brief cameos around the end of the film . . . but how come nobody said anything about Flash making an appearance, or adding his name to the roster? 'Course, if everyone else knew about it except me, then shame on me, I guess."

It was then that Aladdin and Jasmine brought Flash the Sloth on-screen in a roll-out desk/computer chair.

Flash wore his signature sleepy-looking smile as he slowly drew his words out. "Well Po . . . the . . . writers . . . invited . . . me . . . to come . . . and . . . participate . . . as a . . . surprise . . . cameo . . . reference . . . from . . . the game . . . franchise. . . . They . . . asked me . . . if I . . . could be . . . the . . . comic . . . relief . . . and an . . . inside . . . joke."

Everyone still in the building looked strained as they waited for the Sloth to finish his sentence.

"Did that answer yer question?" sassed Barnyard Dawg, looking winded from the waiting.

"All right then," shrugged Mary Melody as she started to head out, "I guess that's pretty much it then. See you guys around."

Jasmine waved good-bye. "So long, Mary."

"So Flash, do you need a ride?" Aladdin inquired. "I'm sure Carpet wouldn't mind."

The anthropomorphic Sloth still wore his signature sleepy-looking smile. "Thank you . . . but that . . . won't be . . . necessary. . . ."

"Well, all things—" started Foghorn before getting interrupted.

"I have . . . a ride . . ."

"Well, all—"

". . . already. . . ."

The anthropomorphic Rooster looked perplexed. "Well—"

". . . Thank you."

Everyone else waited for a moment, before Foghorn spoke again—only a bit quickly. "Well, all things considered—considered that is—I bid, I say, I bid ya'll adieu. See ya 'round."

As everyone else said their goodbyes and started leaving, Flash was, not surprisingly, the last one (still) leaving the building as he slowly got out of his chair, walked to the door, turned the knob, and finally walked out. During that time, the janitor finished sweeping the backstage clean and turned the lights out while the Sloth was still in the process of walking to the door.


And there we have it everyone—the final commentary marking the long-awaited end to Mortal Kartoons—and just in time for the holidays! What are the odds of that, huh? I think it's time I confide in a little secret with you fellow readers. Originally, I was planning on using Bendy from Foster's Home for Imaginary Friends to play the role of Quan Chi, considering he too is a loathsome evil incarnate who worked over time in lying, manipulating, and overall being a sociopath. But my friend Story Teller 9212 decided on Freakshow considering he almost looks like Quan Chi and looked more legit in the role. But in any case, did everyone like the story overall? Feel free to send me reviews though, unless you've read my profile, I ask you not to use profanity or any level of blasphemy in your reviews. For more info on that, feel free to check out my profile and read the guidelines (they'll be just after "Latest Updates").

Before I finish up here I would like thank:

Story Teller 9212, one of my best FanFiction friends and for being my fellow co-writer
Joshua200, X-Over Hero, estonjames18, and Straw Hat PiratesFan2016 for adding the story their favorites
All the people who've checked the story out
And (ahead of time) any and all future readers who read, review, and/or like the story

Oh, and for those of you following any of my other stories still in progress, don't worry—I promise to get writing them again ASAP.

So until then everyone, keep up the good writing, and happy holidays!